Originally posted by: pink_fairy123Oh teri! That was the first thing that popped out from my mouth. Are u sure u r writing for the firts tym kyuki itna lamba part wo b first tymer..not bad..π
Mindblowing startπππ
Shree's ILU for Arjun π€£
Arjun and Roshni's argument was awesome. Shree and Chotu are ryt..there shud b popcorn..π even I want popcorn..π
Awesome dialogues..π
Ending was simply out of the world...π€£
U r an awesome writer. Wonder why u didnt write earlier. Chalo der aaue durust aaye...
I am dying to read the next part...Plz continue soon.π
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