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Posted: 11 years ago
wonderful update
loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: -SREE93-

nice start yaar...update soon😊


Thank u so much!!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: Princeess07

That was really amazing...loved it..


Thanks!!! πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: Radhika Shah

Nice start...


Thanks!!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: 123pritha

wonderful update

loved it


Thanks!!!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
wonderful update..
continue soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh teri! That was the first thing that popped out from my mouth. Are u sure u r writing for the firts tym kyuki itna lamba part wo b first tymer..not bad..πŸ˜†

Mindblowing startπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
Shree's ILU for Arjun 🀣
Arjun and Roshni's argument was awesome. Shree and Chotu are ryt..there shud b popcorn..πŸ˜† even I want popcorn..πŸ˜†

Awesome dialogues..πŸ˜ƒ
Ending was simply out of the world...🀣

U r an awesome writer. Wonder why u didnt write earlier. Chalo der aaye durust aaye...

I am dying to read the next part...Plz continue soon.😊


Edited by pink_fairy123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
mithu :


the start has been brilliantπŸ‘, and i mean it. the heat waves, the hatred, mockings, ridicules and everything between arjun and aisha.. i'm loving itπŸ˜‰. but the best part of all is definitely shree's helplessnessπŸ˜† :

He gulped. 'Kya kiya Shree tune? Ab yeh Shreni tera raita banna ke kha jayegi. Trip par aachi thi toh kya hua? Ab toh tu gaya. Hey Bhagwan mujhe utha lijiye. Mein waha aakar aapko help karna chahta hu. Mere paas latest technologies bhi hai aur unhe use karne ka idea bhi. Aapke bohot kaam aaunga.'🀣🀣


uparse rathore ki partiality towards aishaπŸ˜†, no wonder arjun is furious with both aur in sab ke beech mein humara shree aur chottu bali ka bakra banta jaa raha haiπŸ˜†. waise, why and how did this hatred built up between arjun and aisha ? update soon.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: pink_fairy123

Oh teri! That was the first thing that popped out from my mouth. Are u sure u r writing for the firts tym kyuki itna lamba part wo b first tymer..not bad..πŸ˜†

Mindblowing startπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
Shree's ILU for Arjun 🀣
Arjun and Roshni's argument was awesome. Shree and Chotu are ryt..there shud b popcorn..πŸ˜† even I want popcorn..πŸ˜†

Awesome dialogues..πŸ˜ƒ
Ending was simply out of the world...🀣

U r an awesome writer. Wonder why u didnt write earlier. Chalo der aaue durust aaye...

I am dying to read the next part...Plz continue soon.😊



Thank u so much!!!πŸ€—...

I was quite nervous while posting it... but ur comments have given me some confidence...
I m ready with the plot of Part 2... i just need to pen it down in a proper manner...!!

BUt thank u so much for liking it...!!!

Hope u like my coming parts also!!!πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 11 years ago
grt update dear
loved it..
cont soon..!