Posted: 11 years ago

D history teacher left n Samar returned widout anyone knowing dat he went to Panchi's house to give her gifts on behalf of Ranveer. Its English lecture. The teacher is talking abt d recent Delhi rape case n d rise of rape, molestation n eve-teasing cases. Kiya thinks abt Kunal misbehaving wid her during TFP n becomes very sad. A couple of tears r falling 4m her face which she quickly wipes. Ranveer who sitting next to her bench notices dat. The teacher decides to hold a debate on d reason y eve-teasing, molestation or rape takes place. A guy(d same guy who told d reason d rise in crimes is girls wearing short skirts) gets up.

Akshay(name assumed) said, "Ladkiyan short skirts aur short dresses pehenti hai isliye ye sab incident hota hai. Vo aise kapde pehenkar ye sab incident invite karti hai."

All d girls n also most of d boys including d buddies r pissed off by his answer. Kiya becomes more sad as well as angry.

RV whispers to her, "Kiya, kya hua? Is evrythng okay?"

Kiya replied wid a whisper, "Ranveer, mera abhi class me bilkul mann nahi lag raha hai."

RV asked, "Kyu? Kya hua?"

Kiya replied, "Vo main tumhe baad me bataungi."

The teacher notices them talking.

"Ranveer n Kiya, stand up. Tum dono class k itni important debate k beech me kya baatein kar rahe ho?" asked the teacher.

They both stand up wid others including Buddies lukn @ them

"Mam, hum dono usi issue par discuss kar rahe the," relied RV to cover for himself n Kiya.

"Oh really, to batao ki tum dono kya discussion kar rahe the?" asked Mam, "Kiya, tum batao ki kya tum Akshay k statement se sehmat ho?"

Kiya kept quiet for some seconds wid a sad face thinking abt Kunal misbehaving wid her n his cheap comments while she was on a fake date wid him to save KD. D Buddies were thoughtfully lukn @ her sad face. RV was getn worried.

"No Mam, main Akshay k statement se sehmat nahi hu," replied Kiya in a serious tone.

"Lekin Mam...," said Akshay in shock.

"Beech me mat bolo. Let her talk," said Mam sharply n gestured Kiya to continue.

Kiya said, "Ye sab crimes ka reason ladkiyan nahi hai, sirf crimes karnewaale hai. Soch Badlo, Kapde Nahi. Jab kuch incident hota hai, uska ladkiyon ko blame karna galat hai. Kya ye sach hai ladkiyan hi chhote kapde pehankar ye sab incident invite karti hai? Kya kabhi salwar-suit ya saree pehni huvi ladkiyon k saath ye sab kuch nahi hua hai? Galti ladkiyon ki nahi, ladkon ki hai jo aise ghatiya kaam karte hai. Agar aise ladkon k neeyat aur intentions kharaab ho to isme ladkiyon ka kya dosh hai?"

D Buddies smiled @ wat Kiya said.

"Ranveer, tum kiske saath agree karte ho? Akshay ya Kiya k saath?" asked Mam.

"Kiya k saath," replied RV quickly widout hesitation.

D Buddies especially KD luks @ him in wonder.

"Okay, tell me y u agree wid Kiya?" asked Mam.

"Jaise ki Akshay ne kaha ki ladkiyan chhote kapde pehankar ye sab incidents invite karti hai to isse aisa lagta hai ki gunaah karnewaale k paas license hai ki jo ladki chhote kapdon me ho unke saath galat karo. (Everyone except Akshay, Kiya n Mam laughs @ wat RV said. RV luks @ Kiya who is still sad n gets worried. Mam tells d cls to b silent. Akshay is feeling ashamed) Aur jaise ki Kiya ne kaha ki kya kabhi salwar-suit ya saree pehni huvi ladkiyon k saath kabhi galat nahi hua hai vo statement sahi hai. Soch Badlo, Kapde Nahi. Ladkiyon ko dosh dene se kya ye crimes khatam ho jaayenge? Eve-teasing, molestation, rape k darr se kya ladkiyan ghar pe baithe? Ladkiyon ko chhote kapde pehenne k liye ya raat ko ghoomne se mana nahi balki ladko ko ye sikhaana chahiye ki vo ladkiyon ko acchi nazar se dekhe aur unki ijjat kare," said RV.

D Buddies even Kiya smiled @ RV's statement agreeing wid him.

"Main Kiya aur Ranveer k statement se sehmat hu. Akshay, tum next time se aisi stupid statement dene se pehle 10 baar soch lena," said Mam.

"Okay, Mam," said Akshay.

"Kiya mohterma aur Ranveer Janab ne Akshay Janab ka muh band kar diya. Bada hi bevakoof insaan hai ye Akshay," whispered Samar wid a smile to Juhi who gave him a approving smile.

"And Ranveer n Kiya, I am really impressed wid both of u par next time se lecture k beech me baatein mat karna," said Mam.

"Sorry Mam," said YaRa 2gthr.

"Sit down three of u," said Mam.

They sat down. Kiya again became sad thinking of Kunal n creepy behavior. KD n RV noticed her lukn sad. Kiya kept a hand on her mouth as she was abt to cry. D lecture got over after some time. RV n KD went to her bench.

"Kiya, kya hua? Tum itna upset q ho?" asked KD worriedly.

"Tum mujse q puch rahe ho?" asked Kiya annoyingly.

"Lekin Kiya, batao to kya hua?" asked KD shockingly.

"Baat kya hai vo main sabse pehle tumhe hi bataane jaa rahi thi par tumne muje meri baat poori nahi karne du aur uska galat matlab nikaala just because I am 4m a rich high class family. U called me cheap things. Tumne 2 baar meri insult ki thi aur 2nd time ki witness Juhi b hai. So, just get lost 4m here," replied Kiya angrily but unhappily.

Other Buddies were shocked. Juhi recalled wat KD said to Kiya @ d locker. KD also recalled Kiya trying to tell him sumthn abt Kunal but he stopped her 4m saying n insulted her. He felt guilty. Kiya was going outside d cls disappointedly.

"Kiya, wait," said RV going after her.

KD was also abt to follow but RV stopped him by showing his hand to him.

"Kiya pehle hi teri vajah se bahot hurt hai. APC me maine apni aankhon se dekha tha ki uska tujhpar se trust kaise toota tha aur vo kitna hurt huvi thi isliye tu usse door hi rahe," said RV.

Kiya who was @ d door turned around n stopped. She came back n stood next to RV.

"Kiya ne KD ka kal buri tarah insult kiya tha sabke saamne vo b jab KD use maafi maang raha tha," said Bobby defending KD.

"Bobby, jab ye sab hua tab tu yaha nahi thi. Tune b to Piddhi ka sabke saamne insult kiya tha canteen me vo b us din jab KD jail se baahar aaya tha aur sab Piddhi ko celebrity bol rahe the. Tune to Piddhi ka doosri ladkiyon vo b jo humaare rival teamwaale k then unke saath pics ka FB pe post kar diya tha. Vo photos to poori duniya dekh rahi hai. Kiya ne galat kiya KD ka us tarah insult karke par jo KD ne Kiya k saath kiya agar tuje pata chala to tuje b utna hi gussa lagega," said RV shutting Bobby's mouth.

"Hey, KD bhai k baare me kuch mat bol," said Piddhi annoyingly.

"Aa gaya KD ka portable chamcha," said RV wid a laugh, "Tu humesha KD ka saath deta hai chaahe vo galat ho ya sahi. Agar Bobby k saath kisine aisa kiya rehta to?"

Piddhi got angry on hearing Bobby's name. Kiya was

"Bobby k baare kisine kuch bola to main use main use," said Piddhi in frustration.

"Main use kya Piddhi? Bura lagana sunkar. Tune Kiya ko kaha tha ki vo doosre ladkon k saath flirt karti hai aur tu kya kar raha un ladkiyon k saath? KD ne ek ladki k khilaaf itni buri plotting ki vo use jhoota frndshp karke aur mauka milte hi apna asli rang dikha diya. I am very sure Kiya ne kuch galat nahi kiya hoga. I trust Kiya.(A smile came on Kiya's lips. KD lukd guilty.) Agar misunderstanding thi to jaruri thi kisike k saath itna galat karna. Vo b ek ladki saath. KD cls ka topper aur mastermind hokar b itni badi stupidity ki hai," said RV.

"Let it be, Ranveer. KD ko apne ego k alaava kuch nahi dikhta hai. Agar usne kisi ladki aur ladke ko saath dekha to use lagta hai ki unke beech me kuch chal raha hai. Use lagta hai saare rich, high society k log spoilt brats hote hai. Tumhe pata hai, Ranveer. KD ne jo kiya use pata chalta hai ki uska kitna criminal mind hai. Usne meri drink spike ki usme chemical daalkar. Vo meri awaaz aur smile cheenna chahta tha. (Bobby was shocked on hearing dat.) Agar mera dance performance rehta to vo shayad muje stairs se gira deta jisse mere pair me moch aaye ya fracture ho taaki main perform na kar pau. Agar fashion show to KD ya mere cosmetics k saath kuch karta ya fir mujh par acid attack karta tha," said Kiya wid a little angry tone.

"Kiya, ye tum kya bol rahi ho?" asked KD shockigly.

"Main jo b bol rahi hu sahi bol rahi hu. Agar kal tumhe koi mu ho ki Juhi, Bobby, Panchi, Ranveer, Samar, Piddhi ya kisi aur ne tumhaare saath kuch galat kiya hai fir b tum unke saath aise dosti ka naatak karke kuch evil plan banaoge? Tumhe mere saath aisa karne se pehle ek baar b nahi laga ki tum galat karne jaa rahe ho?" asked Kiya.

"Kiya, ab sab khatam karte hai. Hum Buddies hai," said KD.

"Hum Buddies hai nahi the aur agar tumne firse mujse milne ya baat karne ki koshish ki to main sabko bata dungi ki tumne mere saath kya kiya tha," said Kiya in a serious tone.

Other Buddies r shocked. KD is very hurt. RV recalls Panchi teln him d similar thing wen he visited her house. Kiya turned around n was in tears. RV also turned around n saw her in tears. He kept his hand on her shoulder while KD lukd @ them jealously.

"Kiya, lets go 4m here. Tum muje kuch bataanewaali thi na," said RV as he tuk her outside d cls wid other buddies lukn @ them.

KD tried to go after them but Bobby n Juhi came in his way stopping him.

"KD, maine b dekha tha ki tumne us din Kiya ko kitna cheap words bola tha jisse kisi b ladki ko bura lag sakta hai. Agar us din Kiya ki baat sunte aur uski insult na karte to shayad Kiya aaj tumhaari Buddy rehti thi. Tumhe to ladkiyon se thik se baat b nahi karna jaante ho. Kiya aur Ranveer sirf frnds par tum jarur kuch aur sochoge," said Juhi in a serious tone.

"Kiya ne sahi kaha tha ki sach k kai versions hote hai aur muje biased logon k versions nahi sunna chahiye. KD, tuje bada shauk hai na logon ko us jagah hurt karne ko jaha sabse jyaada dard hp to us hisaab se Kiya ne gusse me sahi par tera itni buri tarah insult karke sahi kiya. Ab pata chala kaisa lagta hai jab koi kisiko hurt karta hai to? Aur Piddhi, tune ek baar b nahi roka KD ko galat karne se aur tu abhi b uska side le raha hai. Jo doosri ladkiyon ki ijjat nahi kar sakta hai main uski buddy nahi ban sakti hu," said Bobby in a serious tone.

Piddhi became sad on hearing wat Bobby said.

"Abhi sab shaant rahiye. Ranveer Janab aur Kiya mohterma ko akela chhod do. KD Janab, aap Kiya mohterma ko 2 mahine se jyaada ki dosti me b bilkul nahi samajh paaye aur Ranveer Janab Kiya mohterma ko 2 din me hi kitna samajh gaye APC k waqt," said Samar calmly.

KD became more hurt on hearing Juhi, Bobby n Samar's words. He recalled all his moments wid Kiya n became sad.

Scene shifts to YaRa on d stairs. Kiya was crying uncontrollably.

"Kiya, plz stop crying. Tum cls me q ro rahi thi lecture k waqt?" asked RV.

Kiya hugged him who hugged her back. They hugged for some time.

"Kunal ne TFP me mere saath battameezi ki thi. Usne muje jabardasti apne ghar le jaane ki koshish. Thanks to Jaitley Sir jinhone muje time pe aakar bacha liya nahi to...," said Kiya n broke down again.

RV was shocked as well as angry. He comforted her. Kiya wiped her tears n told him evrythng dat hpnd @ TFP n d next day wen she tried to tell KD abt it.

"KD ne tumhaari baat na sunkar tumhe itna kuch kaise keh sakta hai? Vo tumhe samajhna hi nahi chahta tha," said Ramveer angrily.

"Maine party me KD ko chillakar Kunal k saath baahar aa gayi taaki jhagda na badhe aur main sirf ghar jaana chahti thi. Muje kya pata tha Kunal k intentions kya hai. Agar main high-society family ki hu to isme meri kya galti hai? Jab KD jail se aakar to mujse itna sweetly baatein kar raha tha aur mujse dosti ki to muje laga ki KD badal gaya aur saath me uski ghatiya soch b badal gayi par main galat thi. Kuch log kabhi nahi badalte hai. I hate him, Ranveer. I hate him," said Kiya thru tears.

"Kiya, plz don't cry. Jo tumhaari value nahi karte hai, let them go to hell," said RV comforting her.

She then told him evrythng abt her helping KD n also dat Kunal is back. Ranveer was shocked on hearing evrythng.

"Kiya, tumne KD k liye itna bada risk uthaaya aur KD ko laga ki tumne hi use Kunal k saath milkar fasaaya hai. Agar ye sach hota to tum b uske saath jail jaati thi. Usne tumpar thoda b trust nahi kiya. Kiya, I am really proud of u. Sabko tum jaisi friend milni chahiye. Vo bina soche samjhe us baat ko sach samajh liya. I can't believe ki uski soch itni ghatiya ho sakti hai. Tum chinta mat karo Kunal ka. Hum sab hai na tumhaare saath. Tumhe kuch nahi hoga," said RV comforting her.

"Ranveer, aaj cls me us issue par discussion k waqt muje Kunal ki yaad aa gayi isliye mera cls me mann nahi lag raha tha lecture me. Meri Delhi ki friend Naro(from Suvreen Guggal-Topper Of The Year) jo DPSC College ki hai, uske possessive boyfriend Gogoi achaanak se uske college me aakar use misbehave karne laga tha jab canteen me usne use uske ek male friend Mannu k saath haste huve baatein karte dekha tha. Naro ne emotions aur gusse me usne sabke saamne usse rishta tod diya cuz he was a jerk. Raat ko Gogoi ne use aakhri baar milne k liye hostel se baahar akela bulaaya use emotionally blackmail karke. Jab vo aayi to usne uske saath battameezi ki aur uske ek frnd ne chupke se un dono k photos le liye. Fir Gogoi ne vo photos net par spread kar diya aur vo photos saare students me circulate hone lage. Kuch logon ne college k walls aur toilet pe Naro aur Gogoi ka cartoon banakar tarah tarah k comments likhne lage Naro k phone no. k saath jisse ye lag raha tha ki vo call girl hai. College k Trustee ne Prnci se Naro ko expel karne k liye kaha. Depression me Naro ne suicide attempt ki ye sochkar ki uske parents ko pata chalega to vo marr jaayenge. Thanks to her another male frnd Yuvraj jiski vajah se vo bach gayi. Police ne b madad karne se mana kar diya aur kaha usme Naro ki galti thi qki vo us waqt short skirt pehni thi. Ye decision le liya gaya tha ki Naro k discharge hone k baad use college se nikal diya jaayega aur college me girls ka dress code salwar-suit hoga. Tab uski frnd Suvreen ne 'Besharmi March ' organize kiya apne frnds aur baaki students k saath milkar jiska slogan tha 'Soch Badlo, Kapde Nahi'. 'Besharmi March' me sabne red shorts pehni thi. Yuvraj aur Suvreen ne Gogoi ko pakadkar use police station le aaye aur Gogoi ne atlast confess kiya jab Yuvraj ne use public k gusse ka darr dikhaaya. Fir Naro ko sabne bahot acche se college me welcome kiya aur Suvreen ki himmat ki bahot taareef ki. Aakhirkar Naro ko justice mil hi gaya. Naro ki bas itni galti thi vo us raat Gogoi se milne gayi fir b sab use hi blame kar rahe the. Akshay k idiotic statement k vajah se muje Naro ki yaad aa gayi. Naro jab b kisi eve-teasing, molestation ya rape k baare me sunti hai to aaj b use vo din yaad aa jaate hai jisse vo bahot depressed ho jaati hai. Vaise hi main aaj lecture me puraani baatein yaad karke khudke emotions ko control nahi kar paayi. Pata nahi ye sab ladke aisa q karte hai ladkiyon k saath aur humesha ladkiyon ko hi dosh diya jaata hai," said Kiya sadly.

RV felt bad. He heard abt Naro's incident thru news but did not knew much. He kept his hand on her cheek to comfort her.

"Kiya, jo Naro aur tumhaare saath jo hua vo bahot galat tha. Iss duniya me Gogoi aur Kunal k jaise kameene bahot insaan hai jo khule aam besharmo ki tarah ghoomte hai. Lekin tumhe vo puraani baatein yaad karke depress nahi hona chahiye. Hum sab frnds humesha tumhaare saath hai. I  can't see u sad like dis. So please smile," said RV.

Kiya smiled much to RV's happiness.

"Tum smile karte huve aur jyaada acchi lagti ho," said RV wid a smile.

YaRa returned to der cls for d next lec. Other buddies including KD were happy to see Kiya smile. YaRa went back to der seats. KD lukd @ them talking n smiling to each other n got jealous n hurt.

"Kiya, tum meri girls me 2nd best frnd ho," said RV wid a smile.

"1st kaun hai?" asked Kiya wid a smile knowing who she is.

"Tum jaanti ho use," said RV.

"Okay lemme guess," said Kiya.

"Its its its...," said Kiya pretending to guess.

"...Panchi," said YaRa 2gthr n smiled @ each other.

Edited by angel_juhi04 - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome os with a social message in it I lovec it
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by shubhraupadhyay


Awesome os with a social message in it I lovec it

Thank u๐Ÿ˜Š
I got inspired by Suvreen Guggal serial during Naro-Gogoi track n recent track. Then I tought abt Kiya-Kunal issue in TBP๐Ÿ˜Š

Posted: 11 years ago
Nice one Juhi...
liked how u merged Suvreen guggal's track here ..
Posted: 11 years ago
Love the thoughtful OS. The social message is great and the way you presented it was nice
Posted: 11 years ago
awesome OS juhi !!
I love the way you wrote it including the tfp incident and the social message !!
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by diya90


awesome OS juhi !!
I love the way you wrote it including the tfp incident and the social message !!

Thank u๐Ÿ˜Š
In real life too, girls like Naro n Kiya r often haunted by these horrible past events wen they hear these kinds of news๐Ÿ˜”

Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by D3_4life


Nice one Juhi...
liked how u merged Suvreen guggal's track here ..

Thank u๐Ÿ˜Š
Naro's incident was very horrible dat drove her to attempt suicide n how she is haunted by dat event in d recent track๐Ÿ˜”

Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by -3raser-


Love the thoughtful OS. The social message is great and the way you presented it was nice

Thank u๐Ÿ˜Š
D issue is getn worse day by day n nothing positive is happening๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜”

Posted: 11 years ago
awesome way to convey d most imp msg
its tym ppl have a reality check!!
loved it ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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