Yipeee i am jumping around hey congrats on the second thread !!!!!
so beautiful loved it palak mishti and ansh convo was awesome , their emotional bonding and the passionate tax of "mishya" โบ๏ธโบ๏ธ yash pain and mishti trying her best to stay away from him touched my heart very painful indeed but their closeness made me smile, blush, and revisited some of the beautiful moments of my life.Awesome Pal continue waiting for the next update. Thanks for the PM. I read it early in the morning itself but i was so lost emotionally i was unable to comment yaar. Thanks for the wonderful update dear greedy for more.๐ INDU my friend well ๐๐ผ done *hugs*
โค๏ธ๐ค๐ค๐คEdited by lulujjjj - 11 years ago
Again, another amazing update. How do you manage to do it? How do you manage to write so beautifully and take my breath away? Your writing is absolutely worth a thousand praises. You are awesome. I could imagine the entire scene and feel the intensity of it. The way he made her be quiet by stating the reasons she could be Mishti. I loved it. I loved how you incorporated the 'Aarti Y. Dubey'. Brilliant. Please continue soon and oh, the kissing scene was mind-blowing. What a way to make her shut up! Waiting for an update. I am so addicted.๐โญ๏ธ
Borna, your response to this update made me want to break into tears all over again. ๐ญ I just kept playing the moment of surrender over and over in my mind, and all I could see was them moving away from each other after coming so close. Gosh. Aaah!
Yeah Kadeen.. After reading I looked up and call me delusional but I "saw" the whole romance scene and then I had to see this couple who just looked at each other with this heart warming smile and I was like F*L. I've seen this so so so many times before but it didn't affect me at all. After reading Indu's Sparsh, all this fluffy and romantic romance ๐ is making me feel a little bit depressed.
NEXT MISSION AND GOAL = TO SCOUT AROUND FOR MY YASHJI๐คฃ
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