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Sorry to reply and comment on this update soo late, as weekends are very busy. But finally got the time to read it. First of all...
Indu congratulations on your second thread. π
This is proof enough that everyone ( including ME) are loving SPARSH so much. π ππΌ
I can literally visualize all the scenes in front of me while reading it. The way Palak and Ansh were excited after Palak proposed to Aarti. How Aarti very maturely handled the situation and explained to those two cuties why she can't accept the proposal was brilliantly written. Aarti could feel Yash's presence around her, wow that's .
And then the whole bon-fire scene and later that whole scene In the special room was again so touching. I could feel their pain, agony, passion, Aarti's reluctance in accepting Yash's love through your words. π
What else can I say about this update Indu? You've left me speechless ( and believe me I am a very talkative person ) that is another proof of how good your writing is and how much it has effected me.
Why don't you start to write professionally? I'll be the first one to buy your first copy and that also with your signature on it. I am not just saying this, I really mean it.
YOU REALLY ARE THAT TALENTED π