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Posted: 11 years ago

In d class, Ranveer is sitting lukn very very upset thinking abt Panchi while lukn @ her 4m far talking wid Juhi. Kiya enters d class n tuk her seat next to RV. She sees RV upset n goes to his bench.

"Ranveer, r u okay?" asked Kiya gtn concerned.

RV dint replied as he kept lukn @ Panchi n was unaware abt it. KD, Piddhi, Samar n Bobby too entered d class.

"Ranveer, tu thik hai?" asked Kiya a little louder.

RV heard dis time n got startled. Other Buddies except Panchi noticed dis. Juhi was not able to hear but found sumthn going on.

"Haan, main thik hu," replied RV.

Juhi excused herself n went to RV's bench. Samar n Bobby too came der while KD n Piddhi were standing a little distance away n watching. KD was getn jealous of YaRa. Panchi was not able to hear them as she was sitting in next to next row.

"Tu thik lag to nahi raha hai. Bata kya hua?" asked Kiya, "Tu Panchi ko q itna dhyaan se dekh raha tha?"

"Kuch nahi bas aise hi," replied RV.

"Bas aise hi ko main kya samjhu?" asked Juhi.

"Tu Panchi ko bahot miss kar raha hai na?" asked Bobby.

"I think u r in love wid her," said Kiya.

KD was shocked to hear dis. He recalled himself doubting Kiya dating RV n feels bad. He also Kiya teln him she is ashamed of making such a cheap person as her buddy n slapping him wen he told her dat he had a mu of her framing him wid Kunal. He was also guilty of teln her cheap things after TFP n thinking her dating Kunal widout using his brain.

He said to d camera sadly, "Main fir vahi galti kar raha tha. Ranveer sirf Kiya ka bahot dost hai. Kiya mujh jaise sochwaale ladke ko deserve nahi karti hai."

"Kya hua, KD bhai? Kya soch rahe hai aap?" asked Piddhi.

"Kuch nahi," said Piddhi.

PraSha tuk der seats. Bobby was no longer angry wid Kiya as RV has told her evrythng.

"No Kiya, aisa kuch nahi hai," said RV.

"OMG! Tu kise dhokha de raha hai? Hume ya khud ko?" asked Juhi.

"Janab, ishq aur mushq chupaaye nahi chupte," said Samar.

RV became silent.

"Kya hua? Chup q ho gaya?" asked Bobby.

"Hum sahi hai na?" asked Kiya.

"Yaa, I love Panchi par vo mujse baat tak nahi karna chahti hai," said RV sadly.

"To jaakar unhe bata dijiye. Unhe us din aapka tohfa bahot pasand aaya tha jo aap humse bhijwaaye the," said Samar.

D 3 girls lukd @ Samar n then RV in shock.

"OMG! Tune Samar se q gifts bhijwaaya tha?" asked Juhi.

"Qki Panchi ne RV se gift nahi liya tha jab vo us din uske ghar gaya tha," said Kiya.

"Lekin tuje kuch b karke Panchi ko apni feelings bataani hogi," said Bobby.

"Aapko unke liye kuch dil se karna chahiye," said Samar.

RV recalled der moment during APC of Panchi shouting @ him n teln him dat wen he really feels sorry 4m his heart then tell her.

"Kal to Panchi ka birthday b hai to tu apni feelings kal hi uske birthday par bata de," said Juhi wid a smile.

"Tum chaaro paagal ho gaye ho. Main Panchi ko uske birthday me jaakar apni feelings bataun. Vo bahot upset aur gussa ho jaayegi," said RV.

"Ranveer, humne kab kaha ki tu uske birthday me jaakar use directly apni feelings bata de. Jaise Samar ne kaha tuje Panchi k liye dil se kuch karna chahiye. Tuje use indirectly apni feelings bataani chahiye jo vo jarur samajh jaaye," said Kiya wid a smile.

Samar, Juhi n Bobby agreed wid Kiya n 4 of them kept urging Ranveer to listen to them. Finally Ranveer agreed. He lukd @ Panchi n smiled.

Next evening, Panchi was dressed in a beautiful pink knee-length sleeveless dress for her 17th birthday. She was lukn very pretty. She came to d hall wid evry1 including her friends waiting for her. They clapped n sang 'Happy Birthday Panchi' as she came. Kiya, Ranveer, Bobby, Samar n Juhi were standing 2gthr while PraSha were some distance away 4m them. RV got mesmerized by her. Panchi hugged her parents. They wished her. Each buddies started wishing her. RV was d last to wish.

"Happy Birthday, Panchi," said RV wid a smile.

Panchi stared @ him n replied wid a smile, "Thank u, Ranveer."

Panchi cuts d cake n blows d candle n evry1 clapped n sang 'Happy Birthday' song happily. Panchi smiles. RV kept lukn @ her smile. Panchi fed d cake to evry1. She fed RV last. Kiya, Bobby, Samar n Panchi gave him a luk which RV understood.

"Hello evry1," said Kiya aloud cumn before evry1, "Abhi Ranveer guitar play karke ek gaana gaanewala hai."

Evry1 cheered while Panchi was quiet. RV tuk his guitar n came in d middle of d hall while Kiya went n stood wid evry1.

(Listen to Jo Pyaar Ho Gaya Hai(Dil Hai Jo Haal) by going to dis link  . Dis song is 4m Disney Channel Show 'Ishaan').

RV starts tuning d music of 'Dil Ka Hai Jo Haal' on his guitar while smiling @ evry1 mostly @ Panchi.

(Evry1 smiles. KiByHiMa r giving him thumbs ups. Panchi is quiet but is watching him.)

Dil ka hai jo haal
Kaise main bataaoon
Teri tasveer aankhon mein kaise dikhaoon
In aankhon ke sapne lage hain ab muskuraane
Yeh dil ki dhadkan lagii hai ab gungunane
Nighahein uthaa
Bataade zaraa
Ki dil mein hai kya...
Yeh ankahe kya hain phasaane...
Kya hain phasaane
(RV starts singing while evry1 except Panchi cheers him. RV sings while walking in d hall n to evry1. He luks @ Panchi n smiles @ her while continuing d song. Panchi stares @ him blankly n giving him a soft luk.)

Jo pyaar ho gaya hai
Toh phir kaisa sharmaana... sharmaana...
Dil ki maasoom chaahat ko kaise chupaana... chupaana...

(He sings these lines while smiling @ Panchi  n going to her n then back to middle of d hall. Panchi smiles n luks @ RV who is standing in d middle of d hall.)

Music
(Panchi thinks abt der cute moments 2gthr-Jaane Kyun sequence, RA clinic sequence, RV wid her in Panchi's house garden(d moment wen Panchi talks to her mom regarding her jokes n RV comes to her n where she tells him dat Keshav n Pratham r going to b rusticated for doing JJ's kidnapping plan.))

Tu aas paas saath hai
Haath mein jo haath hai
Dil khush hai
Khushboo teri ho saanso mein
Khwabon mein, khayalon mein
Dil khush hai...

(Panchi whispers 'Nonu' wid a smile n goes to RV n sings these lines while smiling @ him. RV gets happy n RaHi luks @ each other while Panchi continues to sing. KiByHiMa n also PraSha smiles @ them.)

Meherbaan samaa
Kya silsilaa hai
Dil khush hai
Jo chaaha thaa maine
Jo thaa mangaa
Vahi toh hua
Vahi toh mujhko mila hai
Dil khush mera hai
 
Jo pyaar ho gaya hai
Toh phir kaisa sharmaana... sharmaana...
Dil ki maasoom chaahat ko kaise chupaana... chupaana...

(RV offers his hand to Panchi for dance n she accepts it gladly. They dance while evry1 smiles n claps for them. RaHi stares n smiles @ each other while dancing.)
 
Pal yeh churaa le milke zaraa
Yeh saanse bulaayen aaja
Khulke jeeye hum
Harr ek lamhaa
Baahein bulaayein aaja
 
Jo pyaar ho gaya hai
Toh phir kaisa sharmaana... sharmaana...
Dil ki maasoom chaahat ko kaise chupaana... chupaana...

Jo pyaar ho gaya hai
Toh phir kaisa sharmaana... sharmaana...
Dil ki maasoom chaahat ko kaise chupaana... chupaana...

(They dance while thinking abt der cute moments-D 1st epi wen RV reached before Panchi in school, RV snatching n running away wid Panchi's tiffin, RaHi's little dance in 'Bin Tere' sequence in d canteen, Jaane Kyun sequence, RaHi's dance @ TFP, RV cumn to Panchi's bedroom 4m window, Vo Dekhnay Mein sequence wid KiSha.)

End Music

(They do a step of Panchi tripping n RV catching her in his arm while RaHi staring @ each other giving soft luks.

"I love u, Moti," whispered RV so dat none cud hear.

"I love u too, Nonu," whispered Panchi wid a smile.)

They got back to der feet n others clapped again. D buddies gave thumbs up to them wid a smile on der faces. RaHi went to others to join them for snacks n cold-drinks.


PS: Dis is my 1st ever OS on RaHi. I loved dat song n used it here as it was suiting d situation very well๐Ÿ˜Š. D story is set on d next day after d curfews hv been lifted but there is no New Year Party talks to suit d story. Hope u all like it๐Ÿ˜Š.


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Posted: 11 years ago
a really cute OS...
kiya tellin RV that he luvs panchi...๐Ÿ˜Š
KD thnkin he doesnt deserve kiya๐Ÿ˜ญ
and then RV singin that song for panchi n their confessions...
awesum awesum awesum!!!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely os juhi๐Ÿค—
totally loved all scenes
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Posted: 11 years ago
Some of u may be very familiar wid dis song. I got to watch only season 1 of Ishaan. Ishaan Season 2 k waqt 12th k college aur classes k vajah se nahi dekh paayi๐Ÿ˜”. I really loved dis song on Ishaan n Shyla. Bharti Kumar played Twinkle, Pulkit's gf. I never noticed or remembered dat she was our very own Kiya. She was very bubbly, outgoing n supporting friend as Twinkle๐Ÿ˜Š.
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Posted: 11 years ago
omg it was afb..yr i luved luved it very much..it was beautifully written n emotions were fab...luved it n keep writing os or ff on RaHi plzzz
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: ssafi


a really cute OS... Thank u๐Ÿ˜Š

kiya tellin RV that he luvs panchi...๐Ÿ˜Š Cuz nowadays she is concerned abt RaHi๐Ÿ˜ƒ
KD thnkin he doesnt deserve kiya๐Ÿ˜ญ Atleast KD learnt his lesson n if it happens in d show then Kiya vl surely forgive him๐Ÿ˜Š
and then RV singin that song for panchi n their confessions... Kaash show me b aisa hi ho cuz RaHi's common link is singingโค๏ธ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜Š
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awesum awesum awesum!!!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ณ

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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: arhadlove


lovely os juhi๐Ÿค— Thank u๐Ÿ˜Š
totally loved all scenes Dis was my 1st attempt on only RaHi๐Ÿ˜Š

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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: black_dranzer

very good one.


Thank u๐Ÿ˜Š
Wats ur name?๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: rocksravya11

omg it was afb ..yr i luved luved it very much..it was beautifully written n emotions were fab Thank u๐Ÿ˜Š ...luved it n keep writing os or ff on RaHi plzzz I did not used to write on RaHi earlier as I did not had any idea n I only showed RaHi in other grp story or any ostory where it was required but writing on just RaHi is my 1st time. I vl try if I get any ideas๐Ÿ˜Š.




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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: Sweet_violet

aww. . . nyc


Thank u๐Ÿ˜Š