jaj os : a magical love story

hi frnds i think that i want to write a 3rd jaj os and i dont know u like my previous jaj os (a lovely love

story and a ghost love story) but i think that i am not a v bad writer and u can manage to like this

storyt and in this story there is neither any ghost nor vampire and is full of magic and romance

so shall i continue this story ?

ok thanks 😛
Edited by jeanniejuju1111 - 11 years ago

part 1 :

there was a guy whose name was vikram aka vicky who lived in a pretty looking house . one day he spotted a beautifully designed glass bottle(like ancient inscriptions).

vicky : wow !  what a beautiful glass bottle . even inside it also something must be v beautiful .

he succeeded in opening the glass bottle and there comes some smoke and formed a beautiful girl he was totally shocked and he stood like a statue till that girl touched him .


so guys so shall i continue this story or shall i for ever stop this as i think no one is seemed to be interested . 😔

part 2
Edited by .nightqueen - 10 years ago

now definitely i stop jaj os : a magical love story jaj os : a ghost love story and jaj os : a lovely love story

as i think now i am wasting u r time 😛

part 2 :

vicky (in a shaking voice) : w who r u ? and how u came out of this bottle ?

girl : iam a jeannie who was trapped in this bottle for 100 centuries .

vicky (confused) : how is that possible ?

jeannie : why not every thing is possible and what is u r name ?

vicky : my name is vikram but u call me vicky .

jeannie : ok and let us be friends .

vicky : why not sure but u can t leave in this house as now u r free and can go to u r place .

jeannie : pls vicky let me stay here i can give u anything u just command me .

vicky : no jeannie i don t want anything i am happy with my life but as i freed u from this bottle u r my responsibility and u can stay here till u want .

jeannie : thank u vicky 😛

part 3 & 4
Edited by .nightqueen - 10 years ago

Hanky for the update awesome do continue 

I meant superb sorry spelling mistake 

no problem dear 😛😛😛😛

part 3 :

vicky : but pls u don t appear in front of anybody especially priya

jeannie : o k vicky i wont and who is this priya ?

vicky : my fiance

jeannie (some sad) : o k .

some days passed away .

vicky : i am hungry please make dinner for me .

jeannie by magic brings him dinner .

vicky ate happily and he thanked jeannie and went to sleep .next day vicky went to the flight as it is he today to control the flight .

jeannie : where r u going vicky ?

vicky : to take control of the flight .

and he leaves from there .