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Posted: 11 years ago


hey guys thats is my first attemt...plz read ,like , comment and criticize par zra pyar sai...


Prithvi in his room thinking about how to take revenge from his newly appear papa……suddenly his thought distract by door knock…he really deos not want any one to disturb him now….but says.:kon hay ajao……
door open and meera comes,,,,
prithvi in a bad mood:kyon  ajati ho tum bar bar…tmka kitni baar btaen k tum sai koi rishta nhi hai ab hmara….jao yahan sai….
meera feels bad for his hard word…and with anger. says..: main bus apna stuff lene ae hoon…..tum sai jhgra karne nhi ,na he tum sai ab koi rishta rakhna hai…….QK TUM QABIL HE NHI HO PYAR KAY……JANWAR HO TUM…
these words she said was not intentionally…it was just her anger….for being rejected…
but prithvi stand up and hold her hand tightly…..and said: HAN HUM JANWER HAIN…NHI HN PYAR K QABIL….
he twisted  her hand and fold it to her back…….her eyes become full of tear….she says:please prithvi…mujhe dard horaha hai….
he pull her more close to him…as they both can feel their breath…..meera moves her head at side….
prithvi holds her face with a second hand and goes close to her face…….meera in pain but still uncomfortable with his soo much closeness,,,,,,she easily can feels his breathe on her face…..she was breathing high….
prithvi says..: kya kaha that um nai..hum janwar hain…ab btate hain janwar kya hota hai…..
he comes more closer to her……..their lips are few inches away…..meera close her eyes….
she is in pain…but stiil she is in the arms of that man whom she loves most,whom her soul mate….she is still…….suddenly prithvi push her away….meera was not ready for that jerk…..wo peche  girne lagti hai…or smbhalne k lye prithvi ka he coller pakar leti hai…..prithvi was also not ready for that…both fall on the bed which was behind  them……..
meera was completely on prithvi… prithvi's one hand on her back and other on her waist..
both looking in each other eye..completely loss in each other eye…meera's hair on prithvi's face,,,,
prithvi moves his hand from his waist to up….meera feeling his touch…. close her eyes and holds the prithvis coller tightly…as she was waitng for what prithvi is doing…
prithvi moves his hand  from her waist  to her ribs then he put  her hair beside ear..which was touching his face …….
prithvi comes in world then..meera ko side main push karke uth jata hai….meera also standup and with a high breath, pink cheeks and and nervousness…. goes out of the room…with out lookin to him….without taking her stuff…for what she came here…..
prithvi completely lost why he did that. how could he,,,,,,

both in their rooms ,thinking about each other….




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Posted: 11 years ago
Grt job yaar.loved that sooo much
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Posted: 11 years ago
So romantic.kash hum aisi epi bhi dekh pate yaar
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thnk u so much soma...lv u
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i hpe k hum zaroor dekhnge epi esi...
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Originally posted by: jmoyee200

very nice...



thanks...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
thnks soma ...thanks alott my dear...

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Posted: 11 years ago
ooo wow sch a nice piece!!!!!!!!!!!!!


itne awsum scenes hmare cvz k dimag main kyun nhe ate😉

atlst our os writers know wht v needs!!!!!!!!!!!!👏

vry nice
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved it aafi! so intense n full of passion! keep writing more!👍🏼👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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sabka post me tu bhi hai pagal ..huhhh