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Posted: 11 years ago
hye mera akdu yuvraj n JHANSI KI RANI suvi .. 
loved it .. hope to see more diblings further :) 
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Posted: 11 years ago
it was tok too.gud yaar luved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb chap 2 again. I ws like living d story while reading. during dis imagining proces D actual memories of 1 epis r fading away yar.. :p hehe
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Posted: 11 years ago
hahahahaha...suvi is tooo much yaar.sach me water from fish tank!!!! Cheee...nd yuvi's father bst frnd of yuvi's dad...nd what an arrogant man these khuranas r...inhe to line pe lana hi padega...jst pray for rathi hez in mid hell...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Winky dinks people...πŸ˜‰
I'll try my best to go short and sweet wit the replying eh...πŸ˜›

@Rose di
Abt ur question on Mannu and Alisha...I'll say...I'm connecting them just for fun..LOLπŸ˜†

@chaicil@Mani
Firstly...lil tanya..yuvi and alisha alike?I wouldnt bet on tht..heheπŸ˜†
Mani n lil tanya...u love this version of suvi eh...i love her too...😊 
u guys better prepare cuz u guys might get some shock treatment after reading the future chapter..LOLπŸ˜‰
thanks for reading loves!!!

@Moni di
I miss u so much didu!!!πŸ€—
Thank u so much for reading didu...☺️

@Jyo_KSG@shivinrocks@shivangi112@luvushivin@[email protected]
Thank u so much guys :)
U'll find a lot more to love soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
This is very good .Its feels like I am reading a novel.Do update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow mia lov d ff soo much n tenx soo much for pm !!! M waiting for further story!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hahaha...*.d water was from d fish tank*..lolzz
awsum update ya...
I alwayz luv yuvreen ki katti meethi fight... πŸ˜‰
Hey plz do continue soon...
N pm me wehevr u update..
Posted: 11 years ago
Hey! :)
It's 2 gud!!! Yuvraj singh khurana... Reminds me of MSK n GSK!! n al d maneet moments...

Cumin bak 2 d updt!! ;)

πŸ˜† suvi put TWO cups of chilly powder!! 🀣 😲
Heeeheee!!!!!!! ;)


Dude pm me pls nxt tymEdited by Aditi_4ver - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

CHAPTER 3: HAVE A NICE DAY YUVRAJ JI!

Khuranna Mansion

Yuvi:I don't understand mom! Why are you so protective of that place?"
Jaspreet:"Ladoo...why are you asking such a question now? I told you..You can do anything to any other places..Just not there."
Yuvi:"But mom.."
Jaspreet:"No more buts..If you still love me as your mother, you would listen to me."
 
Yuvi sighed and laid himself on the couch.
Yuvi:"People who work there are so rude."
Jaspreet:"People who work there? What do you mean?"
Yuvi:"There is a group of kids who work there, and we sort of argued a bit."
 
Jaspreet mindthought:"Suvi's cafe is there...is Yuvi talking about talking bout Suvreen?"
 
Jaspreet:"Let me guess, you started everything.."
Yuvi:"Not all!just'"He sighed and walked up to his mother."It's nothing mom, I have to go now."
he finished and left the house.
 
A while after Yuvi left the house, His mother was being greeted by someone else.
 
Suvi:"Hi aunty!."
Jaspreet:"Suvi!" they exchanged hugs and seated themselves down."How are things going sweetheart, I haven't see you in awhile.. I thought you forgot about me."
Suvi:"of course not!, I've just been busy, how can I ever forget about my favourite aunty?"Suvi smiled and lovingly hugged her. "I brought you some cake.."
Suvi:"Will you being nice have anything to do with Yuvraj?"
 
Suvi  looked at her nervously and scratched her head.
Suvi:"Well.. I...maybe just a little.."
Jaspreet:"You know.. Before your mother died I promised her I'd make sure to keep you safe..but I can't do that if you like to get into trouble."
Suvi:"It's not my fault aunty!.. Your son is mean, cruel, and ' and.." she stopped.
Jaspreet:"And what?"
Suvi:"And he likes to use his power and position to separate the rich and the commons." she replied like a childish baby.
Jaspreet:"It's okay"she chuckled."I'm not blaming you."
Suvi:"But what about..Strawberry cafe?" Suvi smiled.
Jaspreet:"Don't worry, I'll help you once again this time.. But next time..I wont guarantee..I can't keep telling Yuvi to leave that place alone without a reason."
 
Suvi happily kisses her followed by a hug.
Suvi:"Yay! Thank you thank you!"
Jaspreet:"But when are you planning to tell him that your not just a common girl.. But your.."
Suvi:"probably never.. Cause I don't plan on seeing him again."
 
Although Jaspreet and Suvi's mother were only friends, they were close friends, and ever since Suvi's mother died, She had watched over her like one of her own. She adored Suvi's strong witted side, and know that she wouldn't be controlled easily.
 
The next day..
 
Suvi got ready go to pick up her brother Rehan from the airport along with Anie and Naro. Unlike Suvi, who was always quick witted, Rehan was more of the nice protective brother. 10 minutes after Suvi left her house, another car parked, blocking most of her lane.
 
Suvi:Ramu kaka(the driver)...what happen?
Ramu:A car blocked the lane miss suvreen
 
Suvi stick her head out of the window
 
Suvi:"Excuse me.. Do you mind moving?" .
 
When she finally realized who it was she popped her head back into her car.
 
Suvi*grunted:"ugh!!That idiot again!"
Naro:"Who?"
Annie:Who else? The guy that tried the Chili powder coffee." Annie laughed.
Suvi:"This isn't funny."Suvi glanced at her watch annoyingly. "I'm going to be late to pick my bro up!"

Alisha:"Isn't that the girl from yesterday Yuvi?What is she doing here?.. I thought only wealthy people live here."
Yuvi:"I don't know.."
 
Yuvi walked out from the side of his car and stopped right in front of Suvi's car.
 
Annie:"I think he's trying to start something."
Suvi:"I don't care.. I don't have time for stupid things like this."
 
Suvi got out of her car along with Annie and Naro.
 
Naro:"Can you move please?" Naro asked nicely. "We're in a rush."
 
Yuvi cheekily smirked at Suvi which caused her to be more angry.
 
Yuvi:"All I need is a please.."Yuvi added with his wise-guy tone."Nice BMW.. So which guy fell into ur trap..to buy you that?"
 
At this point Suvis mind is filled with screams of anger while her appearance remained calm as Annie and Naro watched Suvi like she was about to rip this guy apart. Suvi just looked at her friends then back at Yuvi.
 
Suvi:"We stole it!Now move your car!"
Yuvi:"Am I going to get a please?"
Suvi:"Dream on baby!." Suvi smirked.
 
Yuvi nodded at her and walked inside Alisha's house.
Yuvi:Good luck then"
 
Naro:"What do we do now?"
 
Suvi thought about it for awhile and another silly look appeared on her face.. She stared at Yuvi's car and took out her phone.
 
Suvi's phonecall:"Zorro?Can you,Rathi and Mannu come meet me about 10 minutes away from my house?' oh.. And bring some paint."
 
Zorro,Rathi and Mannu showed up 10 minutes later with paint and brushes. While Yuvi and Alisha were busy chilling inside the house, they saw a tow truck pull up at their house.
 
Alisha:"What's going on?" Alisha shouted and ran outside with Yuvi.
 
They witnessed their car being locked and about to be towed away.
Alisha:"What are you doing?!What are you doing with this car.?"
Naro:"It's parked in a no parking zone.." So it has to be towed away."
 
Annie:"Looks like someone doesn't have to go home today." Annie laughed.
 
Alisha saw Mannu standing right next to Suvi and smiled.
Alisha:"Hi Mannu"
Mannu:"oh..Uh..Hi."
Yuvi:"What do you mean no parking zone?! Where does it say that?!"
Zorro:"Don't you see the red lines?Check for yourself."
 
The tow truck left with Yuvi's car while Suvi took out a bag from the trunk of her car.
Suvi:"I told you to move it and now you just lost it."
 
Suvi  handed him the little paper bag and walked back to her car after kissing her fingers and waving it back at Yuvi.
Suvi:"Have A Good day Yuvraj Ji.."
 
He opened the bag up and saw  brushes and  pint of paint inside. "U witch!" He uttered to himself.
 
In The Car
In the car.. Suvi couldn't stop laughing at what just happened as Naro looked sharply at Mannu.
 
Naro:"Why is Alisha getting so sweet to u???"
Mannu:"She's just a friend."
 
Naro yanked his ear and twisted it.
Naro:"That's not what her eyes said when she looked at you!"
Mannu:"Baby..I promise!" He cried in pain. "She's just a friend' not even a friend.. Just someone I know.."
Naro:"Better be.. If she's anything more than that.. I'll kill you MANNU!"
Annie:"I'm sure Mannu wouldn't dare love anyone else but you Naro BABY!."*annie laughed
Suvi:"And if he does.. I'll kill him myself."
 
Alisha's House
Yuvi:"Stupid Stupid Stupid!" Yuvi shouted out. "I swear! I'm going to'.."
 
Rhea walked into Alisha's house and saw Yuvi sitting down looking like he was going to choke someone to death.
Rhea:"What's wrong with your cousin?"
Alisha:"The group at the Cafe mess with Yuvi again now Yuvi is mad again.."
Yuvi:"Don't even mention the place!"
 
Rhea walked up to him and wandered her hands around his neck.
Rhea:"Its okay..Its not like you don't know where they work.."
 
After hearing that, Yuvi formed a grin at the end of his lip, he wasn't going to let Suvi embarrass him. No one has ever done that and he wasn't going to let her be the first.
 
Yuvi:"I'm going to make her beg me one day and when that day comes.. I'm going to enjoy every minute of it."

END OF CHAPTER 3:Hmnnn...what is in Yuvi's head? ;)
Edited by vidya.G - 11 years ago