Virika - Eternal Love - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
nice concept
plz continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
love the character sketch
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-Aaliya.KryAn- thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
seems interesting
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice character sketch 
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Posted: 11 years ago
character sketch seems to be perfect specially Virat's๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 11 years ago
grt concept
loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
thanks guys for your lovely comments..i know i told i was going to update every weekend but i was bored so i thought ill update..ill update misunderstandings tomorrow..
here is the 1st part..

part 1

at jeevika's house

The alarm starts ringing and jeevika shuts it and gets up.it is 7 0 clock.she gets ready and decides to call manvi as she is sure manvi wouldnt be awake..she calls manvi and manvi picks up the phone

manvi (sleepy)- hello? who the hell is calling me in the morning?
jeevika- oye manvi its me your bestie..
manvi- oh jeevs u? kya yaar why are u calling me early in the morning?
jeevika- oye manvi if u forgot the timetable for our exam is coming today..dont you want to see it?
manvi- oh ya i forgot..but who cares ya as if i am going to study? big deal..
jeevika- shut up manvi..get ready fast and come and pick me up..
manvi-ok jeevs i will get ready in half an hour.
jeevika- ok fast please!!


after half an hour manvi gets ready and goes and picks jeevika..they reach college and go to their notice board.there are many people there.
manvi- jeevs what is this ya? i am not checking
jeevika- shut up wait here ill go and check


jeevika checks the notice board and her timetable
she goes and sits near manvi who is sitting in the cafe..

manvi- what happened? when are are exams starting from?
jeevika- the 1st of next month
manvi- what??shit! so little time is left. what will i do now?
jeevika- what is this?in the morning u were saying u dont want to give your exams and now u are tensed?
manvi- are jeevs u know na i was so sleepy in the morning..i just say anything when i am sleepy
jeevika- yeah right! anyways lets go to the class now otherwise mr sharma will punish us again..
manvi- yes please go.

they reach class and they sit together..luckily mr sharma had not yet arrived..
manvi- waise jeevs where is that viren ka chamcha virat?
jeevika- y do u care about him so much? he might be somewhere with his boss,.,
manvi- woh jeevs i want to tell u something


thats it for today..hope ull like it..
viren and virat's entry will be in the next part.
next update on page 8..
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Posted: 11 years ago

๐Ÿ˜Šyay! i'm first

gr8t update
jeevs is so sweet
oh i wonder when there love story or atlest frndship will start
w8tng for next part want to see virika :)
thnxs for the PM
do cont sooon plz
it was amazing part๐Ÿ˜Š
Edited by koolgurl - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
can't wait 2 see boys entry
thanx for pm..continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow nice...virat is viren's chamcha...good 1st part...waiting 4 da 2nd one...update soon