Virika - Eternal Love - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
It was really nice...
Thanx for the PM...
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing yaar
loved it
waiting for virika neing friends
continue soon 
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks for the update and sorry we dont comment alot.
You are very talented. Ur story is awsome cant wait to read more.

Awaiting an update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi,

The update was rocking as usual! 😊

The bff part where Jeevika asks Manvi every small detail is so natural
And Viren's entry " Why so early?" 🤣 
Woah, a major twist i see, Mission is interesting!
Want more!
Loved it a lot! 
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Posted: 11 years ago
oyyeee wowww .. amzing 
continue soon 
thx alot 4 the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Fabulous update 

Loved it 

Virika's nokh-joke loved that 

Manvi likes Virat aaw 

Wonder why Virat is like that 

Will miss your stories till please try to update once or twice before 10th of April

Thanks for the pm please continue soon and good luck for your exams
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Posted: 11 years ago
OyEe...iTs pagE 8 noW !
continue sooN coX the precaP exciteS Me moRee :P
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey guys i am back with the story :) i know i m too late to update this but was hell busy with the exaMS AND then the skul trip..well now that m back ill try to update this frequently not that fast as though cuz my extra classes have begun! well there is a good news for all who asked for my index ill be updating my index soon...ok now coming back to the update! i want atleast 40 likes and next update will b on page 12!! here u go with the next part!!

part 3
m- well jeevs we have decided to know the truth about virat but how will we do it? we dont have any plan!!
j- i know !! we need a solid plan!manvi start thinking!
m- jeevs u just told me to think? ?
j- oh ha i forgot miss manvi never uses her so called brain! 
m- ya ya ok whatevr!hey wait!! i actually just used my brain and got an awesome idea!!
j- really?? stop kidding!
m- are jeevs seriously! listen to ma plan!
manvi tells jeevs her plan!
jeevs- manvi its a good plan but y me? we can ask someone else to do that as well? 
manvi- no ya i cant trust any1 else..please??for me ? ur bestie?
jeevika- hmm fine ill do it..u know it i cant tell no to u ! u know me so well :)
manvi- yes i do :) after all we are best friends ya!! 
jeevika- and will always be  :) 
manvi- well enough of this! lets start our plan :)
jeevika- today itself?
manvi- yeah!! c'mon go!
jeevika- even u come please!!! 
manvi- no y should i come?jeevs go!!
jeevika- ok fine!!

Viren. Virat and Priya are in the canteen!!
Priya- hey viren i hated the way that jeevika spoke to u !
Viren- priya can v talk about something else?
Priya- y?
Viren- its just that i dont want to talk about her!!
Priya -ok as u say! 

just then jeevika enters !
Priya- hey you! what the hell are you doing here?
Jeevika- hey! i have come to meet viren! 
Priya- how dare you come n meet him? dont u remember what u did in the class today ??
Viren- hey priya y r u talking to her like dat ?she dint tell anything to u rite?
Priya- wat the hell viren? she spoke to u like dat na i felt bad! im ur gf for god sake!
Viren- oh please priya! i dont want the whole drama again!
Jeevika- hey guys i m sorry ill come later! u guys continue! 
Priya- yea please go!
Viren- just shut up priya! jevika u stay here! priya u go from here please! 
Priya- wat the hell ? ok fine viren just go to hell!! 
Priya goes from there..
Viren- im sorry jeevika for whatever hapened here!  
Jeevika- its ok! it was justified! but i m sorry for whatever i did in the classroom!
Viren- its okay! anyways anything important?
Jeevika- yea...no...actually!
Viren- jeevika calm down!! come sit here 

viren makes jeevika sit on a chair!
Viren- now say! what is the matter?
Jeevika- viren, actually! i wanted to ask u whether...i mean...no..ya..i mean! can we be friends?
viren was shocked to hear this from jeevika but hapy at the same time..he was happy he dint have to ask jeevika for friendship even though he wanted to!
Viren- whatt??
jeevika- yea! actually i thought y to fight unnecessarily? 
Viren- well ok fine :) there u go :)
viren extends his hand and jeevika shakes her hand too :) a new friendship starts!
Jeevika- well viren im sorry because of me u fought with priya! im sorry 
Viren- no its ok :) yeh toh har roz ka natak hai! SHE IS JUST TOO POSSESIVE ABOUT ME! 
Jeevika- thats good! that means she loves you a lot!
Viren- yes!
Jeevika- anyways viren i need to go now! ILL CATCH UP WITH U LATER OK! 
Viren- umm ok fine ! bye :) 
Jeevika- byee :)

jeevika goes to manvi 
jeevika- so manvi first step done! what next ?
Manvi- dont worry jeevika ill tell u whats next in a few days :) till then u just have to know viren well! dont even try to ask about virat! just let viren start trusting u then il tell u whats next :)
Jeevika - ok :)

*winks*

thats it ! i hope i have given ul a long update! i want long comments as well! need 40 likes and reach pg 12 for the next update! ! index coming up soon :)

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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh , the start of new relation, brilliantly portrayed...
I guess their relationship gets better thru Mannu's problem
Ur really amazing, the update was fab, good job👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
fabulous!
 
can priya get lost please?!
i dont like her!
 
And their plan seems amazing seeing as virika will now get closer!
 
UPDATE SOON!