FRIENDSHIP, FUN, LOVE, ROMANCE UNLIMITED- A new ff - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
itz different...
 
but nicee...cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
wooo...interesting!!!!! Daal me kuch black black h...hmmm smthing gadbad gadbad...lets see what happens in future...hey if possible thn jst pm me whn u update it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice story .
Read all d parts ..
Its superb .
Plz pm me .
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: cherry.parul0

wooo...interesting!!!!! Daal me kuch black black h...hmmm smthing gadbad gadbad...lets see what happens in future...hey if possible thn jst pm me whn u update it.

yeah sure i ll pm u all wen i update👍🏼
its my own story so its somewhAT different😊
thats it guys

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Posted: 11 years ago
hey guys, this is the next chappy 

 

CHAPTER 4

Vishal Aur Sanju Ka Break Up

As months pass by, Sanju and Vishal's  love story goes on happily. Her sister Samantha is not at all happy hering this but she acts in front of her sis as if she is happy. She keeps it as a confidential matter before their parents. As days goes on, Sanju feels lack of her freedom as she cant spend time with her family and her friends. She couldn't listen to her fav music and cant even rehearse her dance properly. Everytime, she has to chat with him on mobile and facebook. Whernever she hangs out with her friends, Vishal scolds her for being very close with her class boys. Ela tells her to be careful with him as he is very possessive towards Sanju.

    Surprise ki baat yeh hai ki Sanju ne ab tak uss kameene Vishal ko personally I LOVE U nahi bola.

 

   One day,when Sanju, Vishal and his friend Arjun are at the restaurant'..

V: pata hai Sanju, maine tumko jab pehli baar dekha tab mujhe kuch nahi laga. When Arjun introduced u to me, he suggested me to love u, tab se tum mujhe pasand aane lagi.

S: oh, really, yeh sab kab hua??

V: during our festival arrangements.

S: oh, okay, tum uss wakht hi mujhe propose kardena chahiye tha, yeh sab drama aur following kyun ki???

V: oh, waisa nahi hai, mujhe bhi tho time chahiye na u know, it happens dear'

S: (gets angry) what d hell, tum dono mujhe mere ghar tak bhi follow kiya kya??

V: yeah dear.

S: okay, ab mujhe pata chala, kya tum Arjun ka servant ho kya?

V: shut up Sanju! kya gandhe baat kar rahi ho tum?? Waisa kuchh nahi hai. Hum dono best buddies hai. Samjhi tum'

S: tho kya?? Mere friends mujhse dhoor chale gaye hai bcz of u.

V: wat d hell! Tum waisa kyun soch rahi ho damn it!

S: yeah its bcz of u only.. u r very selfish and so possessive. Tumse baat karte main thug jaati hoon. So pls leave me alone. I cant be with u. you r nt my true love. I hate u

V: what?? R u mad?? Are u out of ur senses?? Kya tum hosh mein ho ya nahi??

S: haan!! Main hosh mein hi hoon. I hate u..

Just get out of my life.

V: sanju pls don't make me angry. Main tumse saccha pyaar kara hoon. Main apni dil ki baat keh raha hoon. I love u so much.

S: no , u r very possessive towards me. I don't want that.

She then goes off from there, reaches home and cries out hardly. Her sister sees her and asks her the reason.

Sam: di!! Kya hua?? Tum ro kyun rahi ho??

San: (she bursts out) you r right Sam! I should have listened to u. im very sorry dear. (She hugs her).

Sam: that's okay di, par kis baat pe tum ro rahi ho??? Batao na

San: who Vishal, mujhe bahut torture kar raha tha aur possessive hai. Mujhe voh bilkul bhi pasand nahi aa raha hai. So I broke with him.

Sam: mujhe pata hai di. Voh ek kameena hai. Pls don't cry. I cant see u crying like this.

San: hmm. Par who call ya msg karna bundh nahi karta. Kya karoon?

Sam: oh, who sab ignore karo di don't worry okay.

San: okay, par yeh sab mumma pappa ko mat bataana pls.

Sam: okay di, main nahi bataungi. Promise.

San: oh thank u my dear. Tum bahut pyaari ho.

Sam: tho di, natao mujhe, tumhare honewala guy ko kya qualities honi chahiye?

San: (smiling and blushing😳) hmm!! He should be good looking, intelligent, smart, friendly, respect towards women, understandable, honest aur'

Sam: (cuts her off)oh di cm on!! Itne saaare qualities ek hi aadmi main, hmm kaun hoga woh ladka.😛

San: arre yaar!! Woh sab chodo na, chalo ab hum movie dekhne chalte hain.

Sam: ya chalo.


sorry abt this part as it is very short okay...

and sorry for any mistakes

please leave ur comments😊

 

Edited by reykriya21 - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
Hey nice update dear...
Finaaly they break-up
Plz i want sanvi in next chap 
Cont soon and thnx for pm
Posted: 11 years ago
superb ff
its really good
continue soon and
plzz pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome ff... 😛
Read d 3 chapters...interesting
Plzz continue soon

      R u a south indian?...allu arjun fan 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow great update!!
Pls pls jaldi next part update karo
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Posted: 11 years ago
yeah ur guess is right😊 im from south india
im a die hard fan of allu arjun😳
Originally posted by: snehanambiar334

Awesome ff... 😛
Read d 3 chapters...interesting
Plzz continue soon

      R u a south indian?...allu arjun fan 😊