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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 11 years ago

HII frs main bhi ek chota saw holi os likh rahi hoon..hop u like..plz i want more like..if u heartly realy enjoy n like..verna end nahi likhongi..it has only two chap..
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"MERE RANG MAIN RANGANE VALI.."
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SCENCE-Arjun sit inside his cabine,thinking his past memory,that always hearting him so much..
but today it heart him more..
"Tum jante bhi ho Arjun aaj kon saw din hai..
"
arjun tightly closed his eyes..
he fell litle safocation in air..
(Arjun talk to himself..)
whyyy why its happened to me,main janta hoon aaj kya din hai,per main bhag nahi raha tha aaj ke din se,main to bus un buri yadoon se jhutkara pana chahata hoon..
SUDENLY SOMONE NOKE THE DOOR-
It was riya..
Ri-sir aap thik to ho naa..
Arjun just giv her shoot glare..n left the cabine,
Ri-Arjun sir main janti hoo ke aap heart hain,Main nahi janti aapke or Rathore sir ke bich kis baat ko leker tenstion hain..hop jald sab thik ho jaye,
or main us din ka wait karongi jab aap apna dookh or takleef mere sath share ker saken..
~~
WHAT HAPPENED FEW HOUR'S BEFORE-
Etf solve one case-
All(shree chotu ayesha liza n riya)doing paper work,
n arjun sit his fav chair n shiping his cutting chai,
Rathore wanna to say somthing to arjun since morning but arjun avoid every time..
Finaly rathore yelled on arjun,
(sabhi arjun n rathore ke taraf dekhane lagte hain)
Ra-arjun main mor se tumse kuch kehana chahta hoon,
per main dekh raha hoon,kuch na kuch bahana bana ker mujhe avoid ker rahe hoo,
Ar-haan mor se yaad aya rathor i hv to go somewhere but i forget,so excuse me..
(He wanna to go but rathor yelled)
roko rawte main kab se tum se aaj ke baare main baat kerna chahata hoon or tum mujhe avoid ker rahe ho,
Tumhen pata hai aaj kon se date hai,
Ar-maine kaha na mujhe ek ..

Edited by Piyarani - 11 years ago

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 11 years ago

Jarory kaam hai,main baad ..
before arjun can completed rathore yelled..
Ra-Rawte hum ek team hai team ager tumen team main kaam kerna nahi ata to,tumhen etf main rehane ka koe huk nahi..
tum bhul sakte ho aaj ka din per main nahi,
ager us waqt tumne team ke ahmeayat samjhe hoti to shayad aaj..
After saying this rathor left..
(Arjun tightly greep his hand n goes to his cabin)
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PRESENT DAY-
ALL GETHERED IN CONFERECE ROOM-
TEAM STIL SENSE TENSTION BW ARJUN N RATHORE..
(Rathore avoid arjun)
Officers comissiomer sir ka call tha,unhone apne gher per KAL ek choti se holi ke party organised ke hai,
Or hamen bhi bulalaya hai,
hop sabhi ko ye achhe se pata hai ke hum sab ek team hai
(looking toward arjun)
Etf team,to holi ke function main hum sab ko jana hai,
(as usual arjun is arjun..always avoiding such type of function,dekhaten hain acp arjun us function main jaata hai ya nahi)
~~
All r excited for holi function..
Liza-Ri tune holi ke liye kya soncha hai,
Ri-kerna kya hai,full colorful holi khelenge,
Ch-haan phul to dhamal,
sh-Hann tu or tera ful to Dhamal,sab achhe se janta hoon,tujhe khane or pine ke alava khuch ata he nahi,
Ri-haan jaise pichali baar,khane ke stall se hilla he nahi,
🤣.🤣.
Trio giv hify..
Ch-bas bahoot ho gaya tum tino hamesha mera maajak udate rehate hoo..
.
Or nahi to kya tum teeno ke galat baat hai,
(One soft voice coming from behind)
bechare chotu ke khane per najer lagate ho,vaise bhi 11:30 vali ke entajar main bechara thoda moota ho gaya hai,
hahahhaa all start laugh
🤣.🤣.
Ch-ayesha mam aap bhi..
All together-bura naa mano holi haiii...
~~
NEXT DAY-IN COMMISSIONER HOUSE
All arangement of holi party hav done..
n after half n hour all gest officer start coming..
All etf team come wearing white dress..
RATHORE-He wear white n black

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 11 years ago

Shirt..n white pent.he looks handsome,
Ayesha-she wear white salvaar shot..she looks beautiful,
liza-she wears chudidaar..looking sweet
Riya-she wears white aanerkaly dress..having deep back looks so gogg,
Shree n chotu-wear white kurta n pajama..
Rathore n all etf team goes
near to commi n wish him holi..only arjun r missing,
.
Rathore mumered under his breath..
mujhe pata he tha ye arjun nahi ayega,ye kabhi nahi sudher sakta,shayad maine he kuch jaya umeed laga le,
--
rathor n ayesha talking with commi,
n all team enjoy holi..
Sh-liza ke baachi kahan bhag rahi hai,ruk abhi rang lagata hoon.
liza-na na etani asani se nahi,
pehale main rang lagaongi,
on the other chuto apane khane main bussy..
N riya bit said acctualy she missing arjun ..
Ri-(Talk to himself)ye arjun sir bhi na,aye he nahi,
humm..mere wish hamesha wish ban ker he reh jayegi,
main chahati the sabse pehale mujhe aap rang lagayen,per..
(tabhi shree or liza vahan ate hain)
Both-riya tum yahan vo bhi bina range..
etani asani se nahi bach sakti..
Ri-nooo tum dono door raho mujh se mujhe koe rang nahi lagana,
(but shree or liza ko kon samjhaye)
riya runs n both runs behind..
Ri-noo maine kaha naa door raho mujh se..
there is some slipery area (riya ka panv vahan padta hai or vo phisal jati hai)
Ahh..n fall on the color water tub
(but not alone,somone else which also fall with her)
FEW SECOND BEFORE-
One man is enter the main gate wearing white shirt having top three button is open,n tight blue jean,n sunglasses on eyes..
he remove his sunglasses put inside his shirt..
muched toward the back sidearea
(where holi function is going on)
Sudenly somone hit her n the action is very quick he cant balance himself n both fall on the near water tub..
~~
(Stil he didnt notice her n she to..)
TBC-
I KNO ITS BOR...

Edited by Piyarani - 11 years ago

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abhya/akanksha

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Posted: 11 years ago

nice start.

looking frwrd to it.

continue soon.

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Christina

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Posted: 11 years ago

Omg keep updating i know it's arjun

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 11 years ago

upsss i kno its boringgg per bura na mano holi haiii..
next part main ek chota sa case n holi dhamal..
jald he post ker doongiii...
but last part is bit longgg..
aab pata nahi pasand ayega ya nahi..
per main last part post karongiii...late night..
PRECRAPE-RIYA NOTICE HIM N HE TO..
THEY SHARE SOME ROMENTIC MOMEMT..
ON MURDER IN HOLI FUNCTION..N ETF START THEIR INVESTIGATION...
IN BW SOME GONA'S COMES N HOSTAGEEE COMMI HIS FAMILLY N GEUST..
IS ETF ABLE TO HANDLE THAT SITUATION...

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Christina

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Posted: 11 years ago

What do you mean by boring?

I am dying of curiosity and precap is fuel to fire

I am ready for late night waking just for it and anyways i love long updates,

so hurry up

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Christeee
What do you mean by boring?
I am dying of curiosity and precap is fuel to fire
I am ready for late night waking just for it and anyways i love long updates,
so hurry up

thankkkss dr bus abhi likhane vali hoon...keh nahi sakti kitana time lagega...

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littlebrat

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Goldie

Posted: 11 years ago

excuse me nothing is boring

jaldi se update karo😳

i hope riya ab zinda bach jaye arjun sahib ke gusse se

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rocking_gal

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Posted: 11 years ago

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boring kisne kaha haan...????

me waiting eagerly for ur update!!!!

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