AWESOME LOVE: A NEW FF ON SANVI - Page 2

Posted: 11 years ago
waah waah... dis ff is different... sharon is prithvi's sister, mac is sanjana's brother... wowww... keep updating... nice effort..
Posted: 10 years ago
hey guyss😃
here im updating my 2nd chap
sorry im late
enjoy reading it😉
feel free to comment😊

CHAPTER 2

           Prithvi's house. Prithvi is deeply engrossed in his thoughts about Sanjana. Just then, his sister, Sharon comes there offering coffee to him. 

Sharon: Kya baat hain Prithvi, kya soch rahe ho??

Prithvi: Main apni girlfriend Sanjana ki baarein mein soch raha hoon.

Sharon: Kya?? Girlfriend?? Sanjana??... Uff dekho Prithvi… yeh sab bakwas ki baatein mere samne mat batana…samjhe… main yeh sab sunn ke phas gayi hoon.

    She goes to Swayam, hands coffee to him.

Sharon: Yeh Prithvi hain naa…mujhe tho bahut irritate kar raha hain.

Swayam: Jaanta hoon… wo tho obvious hain… tumhara hi tho chota bhai hain na….right??

Sharon: In his childhood..i remember mostly…wo humse kya kaha?? Use painting ka bahut shauk tha…. Par ab wo kya kar raha hain??

Swayam: Graffitti…. That too on the walls of Sidney.

Sharon: Use photography pasand hain.. par ab

Swayam: wild life photography.

Sharon: Kabhi nahi badalne wala hain yeh.. stupid.

Prithvi: Oh Di!! Pls main yeh sab apni dil se kar raha hoon… its for my happiness.

    She gives him a look but Prithvi ignores it and talks with his jiiju Swayam.

Prithvi: Kya kar rahe hain aap jiiju ji… coffee….wat about cigarette then??

Sharon: Shut up Prithvi! Swayam ne cigarette pee na shaadi ke pehle hi bundh kar diya.

Prithvi: Oh really jiiju ji…mujhe nahi pata..(slightly whispers to him) koi baat nahi… bahar aaja..main aap ke liye ek cigarette ki stock tayar karke rakhoonga.

Swayam: Ah…umm….mujhe kuch nahi chahiye…tum jao.

Prithvi: Oh jiiju..pls  if u do like that I get hurted.(he makes a puppy face).

Swayam: Pls Prithvi. Tum mere relationship mein mat aana… mujhe aise hi rehne do. Tum apni love story ko dekhlo…mere pass bhi mat aana…. OMG.. yeh ladka ….uff…. ha Sharon.. main ab bahar jaa raha hoon.

Sharon: (from inside) Kyun??

Swayam: Cigarette pee ne ke liye.

Sharon : (shocked) kya??

Swayam: Oh kuch nahi (bites his tongue).

    Prithvi comes out of the house when suddenly, he hears a man shouting at his wife….. he is none other than Rigved. His wife, some Australian girl, from upstairs, shouting at him.

"kya karoon… kya chahiye tumhe… okay .. kill me " he shows his head…. "oh okay.. take it" saying that she throws a bonsai plant onto him but it missed and falls beside him. He gets shocked seeing that. Prithvi watches this and thinks "Hmmm… daily routine life.. boring…"  on his phone " han RGV.. im coming".


 

  Sanjana, Ela and Vinnie are in the train.

Ela: Kya soch rahi ho..kholo na.

Vinnie: Yeah… open it.

Sanjana: Guys, I m scared. What if…

Vinnie: OMG… no ifs nd no buts… pls open.

   As she is about to open, Prithvi comes. The girls get shocked. "Kya Sanjana, tumne chit abhi tak kholi nahi" saying that he offers her a chocolate. She takes it reluctantly.

 

  At Sanjana's  home, she is in front of that chit. She is in a dilemma whether t open it or not. As she is about to open, she gets a phone call from Prithvi " Hi Sanjana, did u open the chit??"   she immediately cuts the call hearing his voice.

    

     Sanjana is walking on the footpath, stops at a place. Prithvi calls her from behind. She is surprised on seeing him.

Prithvi: Hi Sanjana.

Sanjana: Tum!! Pls aise mere peeche follow karna bundh karo.

Prithvi: Okay…fine… tumne chit kholi kya?? Kiska naam hain usme??

Sanjana: Oh.. pls Prithvi… mujhe aise torture mat karna…

  She removes the chit from her bag and throws it in anger.

Prithvi: Ok… what if it doesn't have my name?? Tum dargaye ho kya??

    Sanjana turns back, takes the chit back. Prithvi continues… " u r scared Sanjana, maan lo" she goes away from there without responding. "ALL THE BEST" shouts Prithvi from back.

  


sorry fr the short update guys

enjoy reading it and dont forget to comment

Posted: 10 years ago
nice upadte loved it..
but ek galti ki tumne..
agar swaron ko apne FF main add kiya hain..
to please make sure ki uunke scenes ho...
as im a die hard fan of swaron...

PS. thank you for the pm
Posted: 10 years ago
thanx for the PM dear... 
nice update... love prithvi... kitna cute character hai uska...
sudhrega nahi kabhi bhi...
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by spongy


nice upadte loved it..   thank u so much dear😊😊
but ek galti ki tumne..   im sure that i wont do any mistake again i ll try to include... i wont hurt any one😉😉
agar swaron ko apne FF main add kiya hain..  surelyyy😉
to please make sure ki uunke scenes ho...
as im a die hard fan of swaron...  yeah me tooo...😳😳

PS. thank you for the pm    u r always welcome😊😃
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by kiranjas


thanx for the PM dear... 
nice update... love prithvi... kitna cute character hai uska...
sudhrega nahi kabhi bhi...
 oh thank u dear for liking it
ll surely  update next soon😊😊
Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update..
N thanx 4 d pm
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by jewie


awesome update..
N thanx 4 d pm
oh thank u dear😊😊
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by K.R_ackraal


nyccc thnxxx fr d pm...
thank u so much😊😊
Posted: 10 years ago
hi guys im updating the next chapter
so do read and comment please😊😊


 CHAPTER 3

     Sanju's  home. There is hush  all over the home. It was Sanju's parents wedding  anniversary. Sanju, Mac, Ela, Vinnie were present there. All of a sudden Prithvi comes there without being invited. Sanju, while walking here and there , bumps into him.

Sanju: tum ?? yahan bhi aa gaye😡😡

Prithvi: kya karoon.. mujhe tum achhi lagti ho. I cant leave you….. that's why I am following you.

Sanju: don't you have any work??

Prithvi: no…. Sanju…. Did u open the chit….. kya hain usme……

Sanju: dekho… uss chit mein tumhare naam nahi hain… ok… ab tum jaa sakte ho….

Prithvi: oh.. Sanju.. come on.. us chit mein mera naam hain ya nahi hain…. Main tumhe choodinga nahi…. I love u..😳😳

Sanju: bullshit.. just go.. or else I'll call Mac.… Mac… kahan ho??

Prithvi: kya ….. Mac .. kaun hain wo?😕

Mac: (comes from behind) hello dude…. I am Mac

Prithvi: hai Mac … I am Prithvi.

Mac: oh.. I am Sanju's elder bro…. basically u know I love to listen love stories😆😆.. listen … kya tumko Sanju se ishq ho gaya??

Prithvi: yeah… tum help karoge kaya…

Mac: yeah why not??

Sanju: Mac….. pls take him away Mac>..

Mac: wow Sanju…. He is so handsome… tumhari problem kya hain iss ko pyaar karne ke liye…..

Sanju: haan   ……….. Mac pls.. don't tease me like this…. Hey  you … Prithvi … pls.. next time if u keep on doing like this…… I 'll kill you. I'll see u tomorrow 😡… idiot.

Prithvi: okay…Sanju….lets meet tomorrow.

Mac: oh…ab tumhara plan kya hain Sanju??

Sanju: Mac.. dekhna…. Kal main usss ko ek warning doongi.


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    Next day, Sanju and Mac go to a place where Prithvi is doing his graffiti. He smiles and welcomes them.

Prithvi: oh hi guys…how r u??

Sanju: mujhse tumko kya chahiye …haan! Kyun mere peeche padh rahe ho??

Prithvi: listen….pls…Im in love with you and I cant leave you. Tum yeh badtameez chhod do na.

Mac: wow Sanju… itni straight forwardness….really…brave heart and open minded!!

Prithvi: yeah. U know what….main yeh jhoot bolke tumhe impress nahi karna chahtha hoon….sach kehdiya bus kehdiya.

Sanju: oh shut up tum dono… yeh Prithvi itni crazy hain. Dekho kya talent hain iss mein….do u play gossips??...can u play golf??...oh no cheeks at all.

Prithvi: oh come on Sanju…. U know I can play cricket very well and I know graffiti….i love it.. its fun.

Sanju: Mac…. Kya graffiti karna itna proud hain kya??

Mac: yeah… its fun… but here in Australia….graffiti is a crime.

Sanju: kya?? Fun crime hota hain kya??


     Just then, all get alert due to police. Raid is on. Sanju is running…running and running through some streets. Some rogues chase her from behind. She is scared🤢🤢.  She is running continuously, there's a wall before her. There's no way out.  Suddenly, from nowhere, Prithvi comes to her rescue. Sanju is terrified seeing him. " hey you…Prithvi! Why are u seeing me like that. Help me out. These idiots are chasing me. That MAC mujhe chodke chala gaya. Pls meri help karo Prithvi" pleads Sanju.

Prithvi: Sanju…. Are u scared…hmmm…. Then u only fight na.

Sanju: What! I don't know fighting. Do u know??

Prithvi: mujhe fighting….ab dekho main iss saale ko kya karne wala hoon!!


     Saying that, Prithvi starts fighting with them, attacks them with his colour tins. Sanju sees this, gets impressed by his tactics👏👏 and gets lost in him. After the fighting is completed, Prithvi turns to Sanju and asks " Sanju….kya tum mere saath kal date pe chalogi?"… Sanju all lost in him says yes.


  EYELOCK

  

thats it guys

sorry if the update is short

so pls do comment guyss😊😊😊

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