"You Da One" *KiSha OS* - Page 2

Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by arhadlove


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mugzie!!!!
yup no hug and all , because i wanna hit you hard now !!!!!
how dare you , jst how dare you called this a bullshit
dont u dare call my mugzie's work bullshit!!!!!

gosh thoda dramatic ho gaya na , lolz
but i mean it ;)😉
promise me from next time u wont call any of ur works bullshit😃
this was effiing amazing <3
u knw the thing i liked the most was its flow 😃
and regarding the continuing and flash changes of scenes
there was not even a bit confusion👏
gosh the starting was so amazing👏
kiya dedicating a song to KD and😳
KD accompanying her on stage , omg this is a dream come true
i soo wished u would have putted a kiss *ya sucker mode on"😳
and then Kiya having full-on chaos in her mind😆
and after juhi's msg 😲
well i could imagine kiya's hyper mode😆
gosh girl when will you undrstnd that u love ur stoneface😳
today u said it right mugzie , she is a total tubelight🤣
hey really sorry if nt a good cooment
i actually have fever , so jst feeing a bit exhausted🤢
ps : 1st one to comment😆
and how can i forget *a tight hugh* *muaah*🤗*u knw i can't leave without giving u a hug*😳
and sorry for that starting nautanki😉😆


Aww meri Sia! *bigg hugg*
Arre no..Absolute Bullshit toh emra tag hai! ;)
The flow, huh?..Haan...I guess continuity thi isme.. 
Yayy!! This was something a little new...but I'm glad you think i managed it well! :D
I know...if only these dreams DO come true..hayee!! <3
Kiss? Kya karein...Kiya ko shcok dena tha..kiss ho jata..toh woh tapak jati :P
LOL, I know...Juhi being all...philosophizing! :P
Wohi toh..once a tubelight, always a tubelight! :P :P
Arre..this was an awesome comment! :D
Haww! You have fever!! Go and rest, idiot! Comment baad mein karti toh bhi chalta...stop playing around with your health! >:(
But aww, thank you! :D
A huge hug again! :D
Love you lots!
Mugzie ;)
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by Kishaforever


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Mugs🤗
Awesome OS yaar.
That was actually a dream. 😲😆
Chicklet is not able to get her Stoneface out of her head.😳 
Loved it to the core,seriously you are an awesome writer.👏
 poor Kiya she was totally confused.
And Juhi's SMS increased her confusion.😆
She lost her sleep because of KD😳😆
Why can't she understand her feelings.
Anyways fabulous update.🤗
Aishh! *hugs*
Thank you so much! :D
I'm so glad you liked this yaar! :P
Wohi toh...Kiya is a tubelight! :P
Really...the day she actually admits that she loves KD...I'll go crazy! :P :P <3
Ab bas...woh MU jaldi clear ho jaye! :O
Thanks again yaar! :D
Love,
Mugs.
Posted: 11 years ago
Mugs!
Awesome OS !!
gosh that was a dream!😲
But a lovely one!😳
Ah kiya is really a tubelight😆
Kiya is so Confused!!
You are an awesome writer!👏
Loved it a lot!!⭐️
Thanks for the pm 
Edited by sweetz1204 - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
mugs!!
OMG!!! another one of ur perfect OS!!
i luved it...!! i am so glad u wrote whatever was in ur mind...!!
i luved ur choice of song..it fit perfectly with the description...!!
aweee kiya confused...hw she can luv stoneface...!!
a perfect OS on KiSha...Kiyas dream...and Juhis txt msg...hw cool is that...!!
Juhi rox😆!!
and i luved this...perfectly written...itz not bullshit...or my work would be double bullshit..!!!
love
ur
rena

Posted: 11 years ago
Hi  Mugs. 🤗

Lovely  OS! <3

Kiya  Gujral, 
what  has  she  come  to  after  falling  in  lurve...☺️
Dreaming  about  KD  was  a  first  for  her,  all  the  signs  were  leaading  her  to  the  realization  of  her  love  for  hottie  dearest.
Kiya  and  mere  khwaabon  mein  jo  aaye  is  like  a  combination  of Bipasha  Basu in  a  fully  covered  saree. 🤣

Cute,  indeed,

-Adya


Posted: 11 years ago
Sorry for this late comment! 
But I wanted to read it when I could properly read and comment and thus I read it just now!:)
And even as a non-kisha fan, I loved it!!! 😳
Aside from some dialogues, It seemed like it was almost right out of the show, or could very well be a scene in the show. I know that was exactly your intent, but sometimes writers fail to connect to the show's real characters when they are writing, but you flourish in that area. I love the way your writing transitions from scene to scene. I also love your use of locations (if that even makes any sense), the fact that there are different places these characters are at and not just one. You use vast variety of locations, but you don't spend paragraphs describing them, which is very fresh and makes the os much more believable. The whole dream sequence seemed so real, but when she woke up, it was also believable that it was a dream (a dream she was trying so hard to forget I should say 😉). 
Overall, I loved it! I know this is a huge comment, and I have not read many fanfictions but this is what I felt like saying based on few os, and fanfictions I have read so far. Btw, this comment is more like an extention from the rahi os one, I think I failed to really elaborate on why I loved it so much, it's for the very similar reasons in this one too. 😳

Edited by coolpixie - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
Gwad that was awesome haan
Muggs loved it
gosh kiya ko kd dreams aane lagge lolz
Wish dream mein toh kiss karleti lol
My bullshit writer that was fab os not a bullshit samjhi
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by NonComposMentis


Aww meri Sia! *bigg hugg*mugzie!!!! *tight hug*
Arre no..Absolute Bullshit toh emra tag hai! ;)*tum kabhi nahi sudhrogi*😉😆
The flow, huh?..Haan...I guess continuity thi isme.. it was like , i m watching it live!!!
Yayy!! This was something a little new...but I'm glad you think i managed it well! :Dyou have done a great job!!!<3
I know...if only these dreams DO come true..hayee!! <3we all will be in heaven
Kiss? Kya karein...Kiya ko shcok dena tha..kiss ho jata..toh woh tapak jati :Phaha hilarious line🤣
LOL, I know...Juhi being all...philosophizing! :Pkind of unreal bt cute😉😆
Wohi toh..once a tubelight, always a tubelight! :P guess we got a new word to define kiya😉😆
Arre..this was an awesome comment! :Dthnk god u liked it !!
Haww! You have fever!! Go and rest, idiot! Comment baad mein karti toh bhi chalta...stop playing around with your health! >:(aww *hugs* thnx mugzie , but actually jst can't helped it after reading ur os😳
But aww, thank you! :Dmst wlcm 🤗
A huge hug again! :Dme too ,me too🤗
Love you lots!love u too dearo !!<3
Mugzie ;)
Posted: 11 years ago

i love your os the song perfectly suits  kiya conditions after the washroom incident and the way  she didn't want to accept  that she was thinking about kd was so obvious and atlast the song of ddlg mera khwabo mai jo ayeya added the perfect spice on it

Posted: 11 years ago
awesomeee os👏
loved ittt😃

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