"You Da One" *KiSha OS* - Page 3

Originally posted by: sweetz1204

Mugs!

Awesome OS !!

gosh that was a dream!😲

But a lovely one!😳

Ah kiya is really a tubelight😆

Kiya is so Confused!!

You are an awesome writer!👏

Loved it a lot!!⭐️

Thanks for the pm 

Originally posted by: safi_kisha

mugs!!
OMG!!! another one of ur perfect OS!!
i luved it...!! i am so glad u wrote whatever was in ur mind...!!
i luved ur choice of song..it fit perfectly with the description...!!
aweee kiya confused...hw she can luv stoneface...!!
a perfect OS on KiSha...Kiyas dream...and Juhis txt msg...hw cool is that...!!
Juhi rox😆!!
and i luved this...perfectly written...itz not bullshit...or my work would be double bullshit..!!!
love
ur
rena

Originally posted by: AttractiveAdya

Hi  Mugs. 🤗

Lovely  OS! <3

Kiya  Gujral, 
what  has  she  come  to  after  falling  in  lurve...☺️
Dreaming  about  KD  was  a  first  for  her,  all  the  signs  were  leaading  her  to  the  realization  of  her  love  for  hottie  dearest.
Kiya  and  mere  khwaabon  mein  jo  aaye  is  like  a  combination  of Bipasha  Basu in  a  fully  covered  saree. 🤣

Cute,  indeed,

-Adya

Originally posted by: coolpixie

Sorry for this late comment! 

But I wanted to read it when I could properly read and comment and thus I read it just now!:)

And even as a non-kisha fan, I loved it!!! 😳

Aside from some dialogues, It seemed like it was almost right out of the show, or could very well be a scene in the show. I know that was exactly your intent, but sometimes writers fail to connect to the show's real characters when they are writing, but you flourish in that area. I love the way your writing transitions from scene to scene. I also love your use of locations (if that even makes any sense), the fact that there are different places these characters are at and not just one. You use vast variety of locations, but you don't spend paragraphs describing them, which is very fresh and makes the os much more believable. The whole dream sequence seemed so real, but when she woke up, it was also believable that it was a dream (a dream she was trying so hard to forget I should say 😉). 

Overall, I loved it! I know this is a huge comment, and I have not read many fanfictions but this is what I felt like saying based on few os, and fanfictions I have read so far. Btw, this comment is more like an extention from the rahi os one, I think I failed to really elaborate on why I loved it so much, it's for the very similar reasons in this one too. 😳

Originally posted by: shubhraupadhyay

Gwad that was awesome haan
Muggs loved it
gosh kiya ko kd dreams aane lagge lolz
Wish dream mein toh kiss karleti lol
My bullshit writer that was fab os not a bullshit samjhi

Originally posted by: arhadlove

Originally posted by: tenzingchoden

i love your os the song perfectly suits  kiya conditions after the washroom incident and the way  she didn't want to accept  that she was thinking about kd was so obvious and atlast the song of ddlg mera khwabo mai jo ayeya added the perfect spice on it

Originally posted by: aishu3003

awesomeee os👏

loved ittt😃

I... umm... __________it...
nah luv isn't d word I'm looking fr...
YA!! I got it! ISHK WALA LUVD IT!!
Thnx so mch fr d pm!!
Soo sry 4 being l8...
SKOOL...!!! 🤢

Originally posted by: Aditi_4ver

I... umm... __________it...
nah luv isn't d word I'm looking fr...
YA!! I got it! ISHK WALA LUVD IT!!
Thnx so mch fr d pm!!
Soo sry 4 being l8...
SKOOL...!!! 🤢