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taarey os: birthday bash

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Posted: 11 years ago

Taarey os: birthday bash

 

Hey guyzz I m back wid my new os as u oll know taani's b'day is cumin in d3 so dat is topic of my os hope you all will like it😊

 

 

Swayam have his plans of surprise b'day party for taani while rey is too confused😕 he is takin advice from oll da boys, Sharon yet not able 2 decide wat to do 

Rey: guyzz help types karo na me taani ke liye kya special karoon jo kisi ne nhi kiya ho  jisse who happy types ho jaye

Nil: firstly stop sayin types types it will hurt swayam😆

Swayam: why it will hurt me watch it haan I only love shorn not aashi types😡

Oll boys except rey n swayam : types n do chemistry😆

Swayam: watch it haan  over ho rha he

Bharat: kya over ho rha he tab toh kese bol rha tha  tha best ass.. assi.. are voh

Nil: best assistant ever

Amar: haan bol bol.

Rey shouts: shut up guyzz me itna important topic par bat kar rh hun  n u oll ' guyzz is se better me khud kuch sochlunga n try 2 go from there but Vicky n nil pulls him n makes him sit

Vicky: arey tu ruk na hamare paas bilkul fresh fresh ideas hen taani ko khush karne ke liye

Rey n swayam togeder:  tum taani ko kyun khush karoge???😕😆

Nil: he means we hve lots of ideas by which rey can make her happy😊

Bharat: haan tu taani ko cand.. arey wod kya bolte voh dinner..

Amar: candle light dinner

Bharat: haan uspe lekar jaa na

Rey: hmm nice idea guyzz😛

Swayam thinks : ( candle light dinner rey or taani akele nhi taani abhi both choti he rey ne kuch esa vesa kar diya toh ) n get lost in dream

Swayam sitting in hal on sofa doorbell rings swayam open da door to see the taani with big stomach swayam shocked😲

Taani: bhai rey ne mujhe mere b'day par ye baby gift diya 😆😆)

Swayam screams nahiii'.

Rey: arey kya nhi

Swayam : you and taani cannot go on candle light dinner

Rey:why I cant i can..

Swayam: coz I m saying so u cant

Rey: but why what happen?

Swayam: b'coz I m planning surprise party for taani so bas whi celebration hoga no more celebrations

Rey: but ese kese

Swayam: its final now no more arguments

Rey makes sad face😔

Oll boyzz leave from locker room

Scene shifts taani walking n thinking : (kese bol rhe the bhai no plans for my b'day bade hokar koi b'day celebrate nhi karta n rey unhe toh mera b'day yaad hi nhi)

Rey olso walkin n thinkin : (yeh swayam toh kuch nhi karne dega but I swear me taani ka b'day special banake rahunga)

Dey were cuming from opposite directions n collide n falls rey on the top of taani

Look look hawa hawa😳

Dey comes 2 deir senses n stands

Rey: so..

Taani:so??😕

Rey: so all prepare for tomorrow

Taani: anything special tomorrow??

Rey: no kal seminar ki reports deposit karni he na

Taani: oh seminar..

Rey: kal kuch or bhi special he kya?

Taani: no nothing special n leaves in anger😡 in her mind (kese bf hen rey itna bhi nhi pta ki kal umki gf ka b'day he fine I m not going to remin him )

An hour later college was over

Swayam: Sharon  tum taani ko abhi apne saath'

Sharon: ya swayam n dis is third time u r askin me da same ques I will take her 2 my home n we will be on time

Taani enters swaron quite

Taani: lets go bhai

Sharon: taani if u don't mind can u cum wid me today I m alone deir

Taani : bhai can i'

Swayam: ya sure u can

Taani: ok bhabh.. I mean Sharon lets go thinkin (bhai knows dat 2morrow is my b'day n after dis olso he agreed😔)

Shani leaves

N whole gang olso leaves for swayam's place 4 decoration of party

Sharon n taani dis some chit chat n it was 11.30 olready

Sharon receives msg fom swayam 2 get ready n to leave for party

Sharon: hey taani wud u like 2 have Ice cream

Taani: dis time..?😕

Sharon: ya paas me hi ice cream parlour he lets go na

Taani: ok Sharon

Sharon: ok tum ready ho jao

Taani: ready..? ap ne toh bola paas me hi he

Sharon :ya but itna bhi paas nhi he  u go n get ready fast I hve a perfect dress 4 u

She gives her a dress n taani gets ready

Taani's dress (http://www.wetseal.com/catalog/product.jsp?categoryId=104&subCategoryId=124&productId=31218&utm_source=gan&utm_medium=affiliate&utm_campaign=k108283)

 

Dey both leaves Sharon to the swayam's place Sharon stops da car

Taani: where is da ice cream parlour

Sharon: u come wid me na paas me hi he

Taani: ok

Dey reach party hall

And  ofcourse lights were off

Taani: Sharon itna andhera kyun he Sharon'. Kahan ho aap Sharon

She was afraid of the dark

She screams itna dark kyun he Sharon.. hey anybody is here helppp..

N lights went on oll had b'day caps on deir heads n a beautiful yummy chocolate cake was deir in middle😊

Taani's cake (http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-pondCFZUb-M/TfIdhVpYRiI/AAAY/-7fZ_qWV_UQ/s1600/3092_MEDIUM.jpg )

 

Oll screamed loudly surprise..!

Taani: bhai ap toh..

Swayam: ese kese meri cute doll ka b'day or kuch celebration nhi

She blew da candles make a wish n cuts da cake n dey oll had fun in the party all da then decides to sleep at taayam's place girls n boys in separate rooms😔

Night time all were sleeping except nil, rey, bharat, Vicky, amar n neha

They had a plan to make dis b'day special 😉 for rey n taarey also n neha also included in it

Neha: taani utho utho

Taani (awakes) : han wat happen neha

Neha: neha doubting sum one is dere

Taani: bhai honge

Neha: nhi koi tha what if this or murderers ..

Taani: ok lets go n check

Dey went to deir

Tani: see no one is here

Neha: may be room me ho

Taani: ok me check krti hun (she goes inside da room n neha closes da door from outside)

Taani:open the door neha..

Someone grabs taani's waist😃

Tani shivers by his touch

(ya guyzz our rey was dere 😊)

Rey pulls her to him

Taani's back hits rey's chest

Then he begins to give wet kisses on her bare shoulder he moves to her neck n kisses her softly taani shivers by each touch of him😳

Then he make taani to face himself he give a peck on his forhead n take out a beautiful diamond ring

Ring (http://www.overstock.com/Jewelry-Watches/Sterling-Silver-1-5ct-TDW-Diamond-Double-Heart-Ring/3431338/product.html )

He then places the ring in her beautiful finger

Rey: I love you taani and this is a small gift from me

Taani: I love u too rey

Rey: and dis beautiful heart cake for you

Cake (http://www.vouchersmate.com/p/990/gift-heart-shaped-truffle-cake-india)

Taani was overwhelmed by this taani cuts da cake n rey sings happy birthday  song for her

Tani feeds cake to rey and rey to taani

Then taani gives a peck on rey's cheep rey respond back he kisses her both cheeks and then he placed his lips on hers n taarey lost in a deep kiss they broke deir kiss rey : I love you taani may u will have many more birthdays like dis with me

Taani blushes'😳☺️

..The end ..

 

Don't forget to hit like n comment guyzz and sorry if it was boring😊

 

Edited by prachiagrawal - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing os
thanks 4 the pm😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsumm n in startin dat boyzz convo is too funny

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Posted: 11 years ago
luved it just cant stop laughing while reading swayam's dream dat part was funniest one luved da full story endins is also nice 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
well done nice work
dis was funny n romatic also
keep writing more n keep pming me 
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Posted: 11 years ago
haaye it was swt birthday 
but wired was swayam dream 
hehehe n i luv rey surprise 
it was romantic thanks for PM 
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awww, it was amazing, loved how rey was asking everyone for ideas, n swayams dream lolll ROFL!!!!! N the whole surprise n taarey scene was amazing. Awesomely written, I LOVEDD IT!!!!!!! Edited by miss_neha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
owww lovely os ...gud try 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
awww...awesome OS...loved it <3
esp d ring...its soo cutee <3
and d last line stole my heart...hehe =D
so basically loved the OS... =)
keep writng more =)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome os.luvd it.
Swayam ka dream hehe.