new vina's os:is this love or junoon?part 1updated

Posted: 10 years ago

IS THIS LOVE OR JUNOON???????????

         Introduction

 

1.Rachna

Simple,well mannered,beautiful girl.but she has no time for lv.she doesn't lk boys who tries to get her attention.her best friends are her sister gunjan,Rajeev and mayank

2. vihaan

Playful,handsome boy.he has newly joined in rachna's college.he tries to get evry girls' attraction.but he hates rachna as rachana doesn't care  abt him.his brother is Rajeev.

3.Gunjan

Rachna's sister. She is in lv wth Rajeev.whole college knows that.she lv very much rachna.

4. Rajeev

In lv wt gunjan.he lvs his brother very much. He currently got engaged to gunjan.

5. mayank

Charming,trustworthy boy.he is secretly in lv wt rachna.he tries to express his lv rachna many times.bt rachna doesn't notice it

6.chaaya

Minister's daughter .she is in lv wt mayank. She can do anything to get mayank

 

 

Note:  these all characters are studying in same university

 

I'll update part 1 soon

My 1st os in sslp forum.hope u like it😃

part 1

 http://www.india-forums.com/edit_post_form.asp?PID=80455163&PN=1

Edited by abcdew - 10 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago
1st of all i salute u for making mayank as rachna's deewana...jo show mein nahi ho saka, woh os mein ho gya...and girl am saying it in a good way...i appreciate u for thinking differently👏

and am definitely looking forward for ur os
Posted: 10 years ago
Wow you made Mayank fall for Rachna 😲 wow !! Hey if this will be in parts you can either use SS or FF!!
Posted: 10 years ago
nice start...
very good..
love it...
will wait for ur OS updates..
nd wah kya baat hai tumne toh rachna ke bhai ko he rachna ka dewana bana diya...now dis OS must be sumthing different...nd did u miss CHAYYA or is she not in ur story..
Edited by fIA_KhAN - 10 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago
oww love the fact that vihaan hates rachna because she ignores him😊
nice beginning,
interesting to see mayank fall for rachna..
Posted: 10 years ago
Nice characterization.. 👍🏼
I will definately gonna read it...
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by fIA_KhAN


nice start...
very good..
love it...
will wait for ur OS updates..
nd wah kya baat hai tumne toh rachna ke bhai ko he rachna ka dewana bana diya...now dis OS must be sumthing different...nd did u miss CHAYYA or is she not in ur story..


srry
i mistype charu's name for chaaya's name
Posted: 10 years ago
part 1

In the morning @ college's caf

Vihaan: good morning lvly girls and dashing bys, ur superstar prince vihaan has come

Everyne except rachna: good morning vihaan.

Vihaan:some people doesn't even know how to say good morning

Rachna:excuse me mr. vihaan.i don't want to waste my time by saying good morning

Vihaan:hey ma'am who says this to u?i think ur nut is loose

Gunjan: stop this my dr bthr in lw.plz don't argue wt rachna

Vihaan:oh srry babhi.i forgot that this nut loose case is ur sis srry

Rajeev:vihaan behave urself well

Vihaan: bro I'll manage it by the way babhi keep this ur mind.u sis can not find her husband like this way.

She needs o be very friendly. look hw her face is

(Mayank secreatly roars vihaan,bt chaaya notice this)

Rachna:thanks mr. 4 ur advice.u think u are very handsome,well-mannered person.wt a joke

Vihaan:oh hello ms.india.u think I am a joker.

Gunjan:rachna,vihaan stop this.go to ur classes

Vihaan:ok babhi.u tell us to leave u and bro alone.ok we'll go.bye enjoy well

Rajeev:vihaan I'll kill u

Gujan:calm down rajeev.u know abt vihaan

On the way of rachna's class

Mayank: look vihaan's behaviour.he is so shameless.if he more said anything to rachna I would hit him

Chaaya: o need that .u u know the qualities of vihaan.it's their private problem

Mayank:but chaaya……………………..

Rachna:our private problem no way. I don't like him.bt I have to bear his humalation bcz of sis.look both brothers are so different.see that side how vihaan blushing wt a grl

(she points her finger toward vihaan,vihaan sees that)

Vihaan:oh u I feel like something is burning.

Rachna:mr.vihaan,d u think that I'm jealous of u.no and never.

Vihaan :let's see

Rachna:look vihaan I don't care whether u're wth a grl or not.u'reso shameless.i don't lk u as my sis brother in law

(everyone looks at vihaan)

Mayank:let's go rachna

(rachna leaves)

Vihaan:look ms. India I'll teach u a big lesson for this.

 

Precap:  vihaan;du know guys my new gf?it's none other thanrachna aka my bhabi's sis

 

So hw z this part guys????????????????😕

I wanna to introduce new character

Adithya

Rachna's relation and vihaan's best frnd studying in same college

Posted: 10 years ago
a new entry
hope we can see vihaan jaleous😊
Posted: 10 years ago
hey its awesome.. i m dying to see a jealousy pint.. pm me..

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