Raesha FF: Pehla Pehla pyar hai. Pg143

Posted: 10 years ago


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Posted: 10 years ago
finally sumthing i can read happily

too gud ...very romantic 

very beautifully written 

Loved d dialog

n d song was perfect

yeh sameer rathore's gaze is killing me ...

i have started referring aisha as bhabhi ji from yesterday 😆
Edited by tani23 - 10 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago
awesome plz write a sequel to it or some more parts plz dear 😊
Posted: 10 years ago
firstly m so happy that u r writing an os on raesha they make a grrt couple...after watching yest. epi i can say they have a superb chemistry...sach bataun to wen i saw your pm i thought wow its really gng to be an  amazing exp. to read abt raesha


coming to the os
wen sameer was gazing at her mujhe bas ek hi gaana yaad aa raha tha ek ladki ko dekha to aisa laga jaise khilta gulab ,jaise shayar ka khwab
bt i loved pehla pehla pyaar hai too...it gives a different feeling...vry magical.it truely explains .that excitement that eagerness..which 1st love gives u
i so loved their cono👏🤗🤗vidya di
i love rathod fr this dialogue-tumhe dekhkar dialogues bhul gaya🤗(exactly aysha ko dekhkar sach mein koi bhi dialogue bhul jata😛 )
and tum sharmaathe hue aur bhi achchi lagti ho(oh sameer ab to mujhe bhi sharam aa rahi hai i can imagine ayesha to panipani ho gayi hogi😳😳)


beautifull...romantic...they hav a mesmerising chemistry...and vidzi u made it magical👏👏

Edited by shona14 - 10 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago
wow your first work on raesha😃...n needless to say it was beautiful😊...i loved the chemistry u potrayed between the two..
dialogues were super romantic...i could actually imagine rathore saying all that...n the pictures just added to the whole magic..N i loved the song u put!
Vidya do continue this...will be waiting to read more of it😊
 
 
Posted: 10 years ago
amazing OS :) loved it
very well written
the song was lovely
love the way he was looking at her
thanks for the pm
Posted: 10 years ago
Di
mujhe apke irade kuch nek ni lg rhe aj kal 🤣
Kal ka wo scene kam janlewa tha jo ab ye os
wow
beautiful...
awesum express...
superb sng!!
fab pic
nyc title
raesha rock wid u!!
lovely
love u di
tc
hugs...!
Posted: 10 years ago
Di
double post sry
do cont soon..
gm monday wali lol
hv a grt day..!Edited by Payal_156 - 10 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago
Do continue vidya di,
its awesome..
I really wanted a os in raisha ..
Thank you thank you sooo much..

The song u choose was great n the story line is matching to the pics added...

Pls plss
continue ..
Cant wait to read further..
Jaldi kijiye...


Love rayesha..

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