Originally posted by: --Akshu--hey Zing,amazing n big update!thanks
loved the way RV winked n Panchi rolled her eyes!mr flirthahahahathe sunscreen scene was amaing! i thought it would be funnyloved the way u showed Panchi enjoying with her friend n the end RaHi yup as they have to end up together atlasthahahhaa the RV firty manner as always but not with panchi in showwas amazing!who said its bad????meplzzz continue this!hope i will
Panchi P.O.V
I picked up quite a tan after being at the beach
yesterday. It looked good. I thought to myself, as I stood in front of the
mirror. I must say I had so much fun yesterday, I couldn't remember the last
time I went to the beach; I was so wrapped up in my studies the last couple of
months, I still had my fun, but the not as much as I always do. My studies are
just really important to me now; I have to be extremely focused. I don't want
anything to ruin my scholarship, but as soon as I'm done I'm going to make up
for all the fun I missed.
I was stuck all alone at home tonight. Juhi was
on a date with samar. They really hit it off yesterday. I was happy for her;
her last boyfriend was a total jerk.
I lied on the couch after taking a relaxing
shower and put on a facial mask. I flipped through the channels to find
something to watch, I was deciding which movie to watch, the romance or the
thriller when my phone vibrated next to me.
'Hello?'
'Hey gorges how are you?' It was yuvraj
'Hey you! I'm fine and you?'
'I'm bored. That's why I'm calling you.'
'Awe. You really know how to make a girl feel
special.' I said sarcastically.
'Listen, we decided that you owe us something to
do tonight.'
'Me? And why is that?'
'Your friend took samar and now we're bored, he was going to take us
to his father's beach house tonight. It would have been totally awesome, but
now that's obviously not happening anymore. So…What are we doing tonight?'
'Uhm, okay…If you really want we could do
something at my place or go out or something?'
'Good because we're at your door. Open up.
The line went dead. Then I heard yuvraj loud laugh from outside. I hurried to the
bathroom to wipe off my mask then got my keys and went to open the door.
'Hello…You're really here.'
'Well duh! Where else would we be?' yuvraj said and walked in.'
'Hah…okay, make yourself at home guy's.' I said
after all of them already barged in.
They tried talking me into going out with them
to where samar and Juhi were on a date, so we could spy on them, then I talked
them into leaving those two alone…at least for now. So in the end we decided to
go to a bar near the river.
As we drove around to find a parking space, I
noticed ranveer car standing under a
shading net next to the bar.
He was probably busy getting his date for the
night drunk for "certain purposes".'
I undid my safety belt and we headed to the
entrance.
And what do you know? There was ranveer buying a
group of girl's shots.
ranveer P.O.V
I picked up the red head at the bar and we left early
to go have some fun at my house. I figured since I was moving back to my
parents today, I might as well make an entrance.
Once the girl and I were done I called her a
taxi and stood by the door to watch her leave. When the taxi drove off I turned
around and walked into my father.
'Oh hey, didn't see you there.'
'ranveer. I'm selling the businesses.'
'What?' I thought I heard wrong.
'I'm selling. I got a few offers and I'm
thinking of selling within a year or two. I just wanted to let you know.'
'Dad?! What are you thinking? I'm going to take
over. It's what we were always planning on.'
'Then you lost track ranveer. I really wanted my
son to continue my legacy, but that's obviously not happening. Look, I gave you
a chance, I warned you so many times. This is it. I've had enough. I thought
you could do it, but you just keep getting worse. Now you're moving in and out
as you please and the moment you come back, this is what you show me?!' He
pointed to where the girl got in the taxi just a few moments ago.
'So you're doing this out of spite. Come on!
Whatever I do with my personal life has nothing to do with work!'
'ranveer this conversation is over.' He started walking
away.
'Dad! This isn't right. It's all I've ever
worked for. The reason I went to college and worked so damn hard! It was all
for my future in the businesses!' He kept on walking; he didn't react to
anything I said.
How could he do this to me? This was my future…
panchi P.O.V
I came back from the bathroom and was on my way
to the booth we were sitting at in the bar when I saw ranveer storming in and
heading straight to the barman. He looked pissed, maybe he didn't get lucky
with the girl he left with a while back.
I went to him to greet, not that I really wanted
to, just because I was being polite.
'Hey ranveer' He turned his head to see who was
talking to him.
'Are you still here with the guys? I need to
talk to samar ' He replied.
'I'll call him.' I walked away. Was it really
necessary to talk to me like that? I mean the least he could do was greet. The
other day at the beach I actually started to think he could be nicer than I
thought, but he just proved me wrong. He was an arrogant, full of it jerk.
'samar. Ranveer's back. He wants to talk to
you.'
ranveerP.O.V
samar came up a few minutes later.
'Hey man, what's up?'
'My father took the fight to his head. Now he's
being spiteful…He's selling.'
'Like, really selling?'
'Yep.' I took another shot.
'Hey man, maybe he's just being spiteful, like
you said, he's probably just still mad.'
'Trust me, He was very serious. God dammit! This
is all I wanted to do; it's all I've been working towards. I'm his only son for
God's sake. Why does he want me to change so badly? He's such a…'
'Dude, I'm sorry for saying this, but, you
really do overdo it sometimes.
'I thought you were my friend? Aren't you
supposed to be on my side here?'
'I am, but to be honest; if I were him I'd
probably do the same. You don't even try to change just a little bit. It might
not be such a bad Idea man. The least you could do is pretend to give a damn
about what your father wants, but you are so worried about your precious
"fun". Why is it such a big deal?
Dude, you deserved this. I'm sorry… '
Great now my best friend was turning against me.
Just great. I stood up and walked out. I didn't need this. Not now.
love zing
Originally posted by: --Akshu--heloo Zing,thax for updating fast! ur welcome
loved the update!thanksthe last night's thoughts yuvraj coming to her house was cool!reallyRV's n JJ fight was sad! but it was necessary for rahi relationshipbut RV's outburst was amzig! ya i also wanted thatPanchi saw him out n spoke to him! as alwaysSamar against him! coz he is wrongwaiitng to see what will happen next! lets seewaise Zing I want alot of RaHi romance,Passionate!i will try coz rv and panchi don't like eachother neither dislike so lets wait and watchthanx for the PM your wlcome
Originally posted by: aishu3003res
unresawesomeee updates👏thanksloovveeddd ittt😊reallyranveer fought wit his dad😲yes because their pov are differentsamar s also against him😲 yes coz he is wrongwaiting for d nxt part😳 i will update asp
love uOriginally posted by: yushnaIt was just brilliant.. ;-) thanks
The pov of panchi and ranveer are very much interesting to read.. really
Ranveer is totally a Casanova :-P
But you have shown panchiz character very calm and interesting.. she is that way
I am amazed by the way you write.. really
Describing each and every emotions .. enotions
Panchi and yuvraj convo was funny.. ya it was funny
Panchi relaxing in her home nd the guys barged in:-P:-P yup guys r like that only
Rocking update really looking forward of how rahi will fall for eachother.. just wait a little
Amazing work zing thanks
Update soon nd plzz do smyhng abt the other works i have told you.. i will think about it
You are truly a sweetheart thanks
Love yush xoxoxo
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