Ariya - Tumse Yun Milenge last part pg 24* 19 sep **** complete ****

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Posted: 10 years ago

i am on high tonight🤣 

presenting something crap i guess..do have a look😳



everything is so silent...so painfully silent.

he looked around his surroundings...hospitals, nurses, doctors, tear stricken faces, scared expressions...its all just so silent.

he can hear everything, but he dont want to hear further.it hurted him beyond anything...why?

''we are really sorry mr rathore, but she is no more.''

after hearing those words, his world stopped. he was witnessing it once again, but surprisingly, there was no pain.why?

there is nothing in his mind, in his heart or soul, for that matter...why?

may be because there is no soul left behind...or no heart for that matter.she has took it all with her.

its really surprising, that how the person he thought he hated most, can do such things to him.how can she take his soul? its his, right? so why did she take it?

because it was hers the moment her eyes fell on it.

now everything maked sense, his anger, his pain, his helpless feeling..all because of her.

and now she is not here, all this feelings also gone.

and he is also gone, he is also lost...forever this time.

there was nothing to blame. there was no person to blame this time. not the god, not the reason, nothing.

he never felt so much tired in his life.and the most pathetic part was he cant sleep and hope that everything will be ok next day, as she is not here.


woh hain, to sab kuch hain...jo woh nahi, to kuch bhi nahi.

 

rathore put his hand on his shoulder, taking him back from his thoughts. he mumbled something, he cant hear it.

''lets go inside...to see her...for the last time.''

last time...akhri baar...

last time to see her...to feel her...to touch her...last time.

he got up silently, and motioned like a robot towards morgue. he pushed the door open.

the ward boy was trembling due to...what? his mind was not registering anything. what is happening?

and why is rathore screaming at him? what is he saying?

''what do you mean by she is not here?''

''woh...saab...body nahi mil rahi hain...''

''woh body nahi, ek jabaz police officer hain, jisne desh ke liye apni jaan di hain. samjhey tum? woh ek ETF officer hain...Riya Mukherjee naam hain uska, samjhey tum?''

did he just mention her?

his mind was trying forcefully to register all the things...what is going on?

 

he tried to hear the talks and was shocked out of his wits.

she is missing.


i know, another os/ ss on riya dead...but couldn't refrain myself from posting it.


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Part1 pg-1


Part2 pg-3


Part3 pg-6


Part4 pg-10


Part5 pg-14


Part6 pg-16


Part7 pg-19


Part 8 pg-21


part 9  pg 24  + Epilogue
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Posted: 10 years ago
BB ye ariya hi hai na
itne sare q marks kyun??

And rathod's pov is heart touching.
Bt i m confused.
Jaldi bolo.
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Posted: 10 years ago
plz dear continue soon
ariya ke liye kuch bhi plz
jaldi karo no wait😭

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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update
cont soon
Posted: 10 years ago
great concept :) loved it
looking forward to read it
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
AMAZING
Arjun cares for riya and riya is missing so is she alive
plz update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb...
very heart touching...
omg riya's body missing... is she alive??
continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
@vampu yeh arjun ka pov hain, not rathore's...woh kyu riya ko itna miss karega , uske liye aisha hain na?

question mark to arjun hi solve kr sakta hain.

@aman   arre itna rona dhona kyun? no crying only smiling...

and i am not sure ki agey kay hoga...kuch socha nahi hain.

@madona  thnxx

@fatima thnk u but nt sure if going to update it.

@christee  riya is missing...hmm...pata nahi agey kya hoga...

@devil i am nt sure is she alive or dead...silly me.
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice part
please continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome..😊
continue soon..