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FF - Till death do us apart ,chapter 15(pg 42) - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
Saba, neki or sujh bujh??? It was lovely, and please write the next part... SOON ... 
I loved your build up and the emotions were well described...

Sahana agree with Sneha - u should write too.

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This content was originally posted by: prem_diwani

Saba, neki or sujh bujh??? It was lovely, and please write the next part... SOON ... 

I loved your build up and the emotions were well described...

Sahana agree with Sneha - u should write too.

Thanks Anu ๐Ÿค—
I am so glad you liked the write up, will try to maintain 
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ye lo Likha tumne hai aur mujhe thankoo kahe? ๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† 

@Anu & Sneha...FF likhne ki aadat nahi hai par gaali ek se badkar ek de sakti hoon in different language aur woh allowed nahi hai yahan ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜† 
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Wow Saba, lovely narration. Its like reading a novel, waise I dont have a habit of reading magar yeh FF mujhe accha laga...keep writing.
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Ye lo Likha tumne hai aur mujhe thankoo kahe? ๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† 


@Anu & Sneha...FF likhne ki aadat nahi hai par gaali ek se badkar ek de sakti hoon in different language aur woh allowed nahi hai yahan ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜† 


All authors have a good n dedicated editor behind them, in this case Saba has u so it sweet that she gave credit where due๐Ÿ‘

Gaaliyan!! u really --  toh ussi se shuru karo .. Methvi key beech ka fight scenes can start with gaali's and end u know where to make up..
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Posted: 10 years ago
congratulations for starting FF
thanks for writing it and sharing
thanks sahana to helping her
loved description style n name too amazing๐Ÿ‘
is it thrillar? and will it be start from both in 12gaon?๐Ÿ˜•
too many questions๐Ÿ˜†
and if madness tending to write such beautiful FF den madness is good๐Ÿ˜‰
keep writing
Edited by Marathi_Mulgi - 10 years ago
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Wow Saba, lovely narration. Its like reading a novel, waise I dont have a habit of reading magar yeh FF mujhe accha laga...keep writing.

Thanks for the very encouraging words ๐Ÿค—
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All authors have a good n dedicated editor behind them, in this case Saba has u so it sweet that she gave credit where due๐Ÿ‘

Gaaliyan!! u really --  toh ussi se shuru karo .. Methvi key beech ka fight scenes can start with gaali's and end u know where to make up..

hmmm, fight sequence, soche ka padhi ๐Ÿค”
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congratulations for starting FF
thanks for writing it and sharing
thanks sahana to helping her
loved description style n name too amazing๐Ÿ‘
is it thrillar? and will it be start from both in 12gaon?๐Ÿ˜•
too many questions๐Ÿ˜†
and if madness tending to write such beautiful FF den madness is good๐Ÿ˜‰
keep writing

all i can say is wait for updates (i need to figure out first myself) ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†
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Sorry for the delay, but wasnt possible earlier , so here goes first chapter, hope you guys like it 

 

Chapter 1


Since there was no other option for Meera, human survival instincts took over and made her stand and she felt intolerable pain in her legs like some one was trying to pull her legs away from her body, she tried to use her hands to get support so that  some pain can be relieved but to her horror her hands failed to find any thing to hold on to.
Meera then had no other option but try to push her eyelids to open which was then again the most difficult thing to do and required her to squeeze out every ounce of energy left in her fragile body.
and then she opened her eyes to find to her horror that she was indeed standing all alone in the night in the open and every thing around her terrified her more than she could ever iamgine. In the little bit of moonlight which was filtering thorugh the leaves  she could make out that she had  been lying on the bare ground with every thing around her smothering her out of life ,fresh wave of fear ran down her spine when reality finally struck her.

She was floundering to stand amidst the worst and most inhospitable place she could imagine of all, inspite every thing still vague she could make out it she was indeed in some place which was dark, damp and full of potentially dangerous wildlife.
Reality finally struck...
She was all alone in the middle of night in some god damn forest.

The only option she had now was to run however difficult it was , how ever impossible it was, she had to run and find some  place safe.

No body knows for how long she ran and where, ransacking every thing that came in her path at a break neck speed whatever her tired, bruised and injured legs could pull out.

After running for ages , she finally felt that her legs could feel the concrete of the road instead of muddy,thorny,swampy and smudgy ground.

She was struggling to even stand on the road, panting heavily after exhaustive running .
and now the big question was what now?which direction?where ?

At the same instant, lights flashed from some where really far and there was no  strength left in her to find the source.

The only thing  her tired mind to make out  was that the lights were coming near her every second.

Prithvi who had taken for granted that no body could be on this road through the forest at this time of night  and was driving at insanely break neck speed took a jault when he saw a human figure wobbling in front of him, before he could register anything and do something ,mechanical responses built over ages  took over and he hit the the brake pedal with his full strength but before hitting them in his flash lights  the only thing he could make out
 were the eyes which were shining like diamonds in the darkness around her, 
eyes that were speaking volumes, 
eyes that were pleading ,
eyes that had the strength to resurrect life,
eyes with strongest pull he had ever felt,
eyes that made him forget every thing,
eyes piercing him deep in his heart,
eyes invading to  his inner most turmoil,
eyes that promised to take his pain away ...



How is it ?
Let me know your thoughts 
Edited by sabaSpeaks - 10 years ago