sanvi- forever, a ss CH8 UPD pg5 - Page 4

Posted: 10 years ago
lovely update dii

prithvi itni confusion mein kyun hai
be confident yaar..aakhir sanju ko toh prithvi ka hei hona hai..

the phone convo was amazing
mujhe bohot maaza aaya..

jaldi jaldi update karoo..
me waiitng
thanx for the pm n sorry for the late comment😊

Posted: 10 years ago
Ch-7

Location-At college.

All others go to the canteen while ela n sanju talk.
Ela- babes, now i think u have to befriend prithvi.
Sanju- What? What do u mean by 'Have to'? Is it a compulsion?
Ela- Yes, atleast do it for me..
Sanju- Par ela...
Ela- Dekh all of us are happy with him being in our group sirf tujhe hi problem hain us-se. You have to cope up wid him now. I dont know why u dislyk him, but i just know ki tu use jaakar congratulate karegi aur use aisa feel karayegi that u r okay wid him. 
Sanju- Ela tujhe pata nahi hain woh mujhe...
Ela- I dont wanna know, dekh naya year start hua hai n i dont want any fights. If ure my bff, then u'll have to do this for me, n no more sarcasm. Right?
 {ignore the bg}
Sanju- Yup, but tujhe uski itni kya chinta hain?
Ela- mujhe uski nahi teri chinta hai. n u know na ab internship classes bhi uske saath hongi so ull have to befriend him. Aur vaise bhi i know you well, tu har waqt low feel karegi so better hai u be fine with him.
Sanju- Theek hain, but jus for my bff. Chal  ab, dekhti hu main...


Location- canteen

Vinnie- Rgv, mere liye ek sandwich. 
Sahil- Coffee chalegi.
Rohan- Muffin. 
Rgv- oye rohan tu mere sath ayega, main kya saara samaan launga?
Varun- nahi, ill come wid u, achha prithvi tu kya lega?
Prithvi- umm... maybe a coffee.
Ela n sanju come. Sanju reluctant to go. ela pushes her. 
sanju whispers- ela yeh karna zaroori hai?
Ela- haan hain. now go.
Varun- ela, sanju, achha hua tum aa gaye. kya loge?
Ela- mere aur sanju ke liye muffin. Right sanju?
Sanju- Nahi{lukin at ela angrily in a kiddish way} i'll go for a coffee.
Varun- as u wish. chal rgv, lets go.
they both go. All get seated. Sanju reluctantly goes to Prithvi.
She says- Congrats... Prithvi [in her sweetest ever tone]
She extends her hand.
Prithvi smiles and thus the sanvi first handshake.

He luks at her and says- Thankyou, thankyou very much.Am happy ki tumne mujhse theek se baat toh ki. and i think that we r frnds now, right?
Sanju thinking- ise kaise pata chala , i mean ki isne wohi sab kaha jo ela ne kaha. oh god ab kya karu.. frnd bana hi leti hu , lag toh theek thaak hi raha hain. but fir mujhe follow kyu kar raha tha?
Prithvi- Sanjana..!
Sanju- haan, umm.. haan ab hum frnds ban gaye hain. { fake smile}
varun n rgv come.
Rgv puts sanju's coffee near prithvi's seat as she is standing there.
So she has to sit beside him.
All talk to each other.
Sanju again thinks- But he also followed me na... no i think mujhe yeh baat bhul jaani chahiye vaise bhi mom used to say ki if we will keep thiking of the past then we will not be able to live our present nor think n plan for future. Yes!.mujhe prithvi ko dost bana lena chahiye. vaise bhi kaunsa boyfrnd bana rahi hu? Jo hoga dekha jaayega.. ab yeh itna bhi bura nahi hain.
She is disturbed by a phone call.  it reads- DAD.
She recieves the phone call.
Sanju- hi aap kya kar rahe the?
after few seconds...
Sanju- what? no u cant do this. woh bhi abhi bata rahe ho. Not fare. Abhi toh laute the n again u have to...theek hain. bye.
She gets sad. Everyone asks her about it.
She says- dad... woh fir se ek hafte ke liye kaam se baahar jaa rahe hain. i mean i know unka kaam hain but this is not fare. Unhone mujhe abhi bataaya.
Prithvi- Sanjana, i know ki tumhe bura lag raha hoga because family ke bina rehna kise achha lagta hain but understand woh hamesha ke liye thodi na jaa rahe hain. he will return.
Vinnie- ya he's right!
Sanju- I know.. but ...theek hai.. ok now.. I think mujhe jaana chahiye, i'll help him out in packing n all. Vaise bhi aaj koi lecture nahi hai.Soo.. bye!

Ela- Sanju i'll cum too.
Sanju- No ela, i'll manage. bye!:-)

Location- At sanju home.
Dad- Sanju i promise ki next month no trips n all.
Sanju- Aapko yeh trip lagti hai, mujhe torture lagta hai.
Dad- i know tumhe fikar hoti hai that i travel so much but abhi hi toh mere ghoomne ke din hain [and laughs]
Sanju-Theek hai.

Bell rings.
Sanju opens the door.
Prithvi is there.
S- Tum yahan!
P- Woh actually ela ne tumhare liye kuchh bheja tha... some crossword book. Usne bola tumhe de du.
S- Kyu, woh khud kyu nahi aa sakti thi?
P- Bataata hu. Actually she's planning a get together at her house tonight so she had to prepare for it.
S- Ok.. but tum mujhe yeh dene ke liye yahan tak aaye?
Dad comes. 
Dad- Oh hi prithvi! 
S- Dad, u know him?
Dad- haa, aaj subah hi mila main prithvi se.
S- But kaise?
P- Wait wait... main batata hu. woh actually main tumhare ghar ke opposite waale house mein hi rah raha hu. So..
S- achha... what? I mean theek hain..{mixed emotions}
P- Vaise uncle have a nice trip.
Dad- Dekho beta ise bhi yeh trip hi lagta hain.
S- O.K.!!
P- ab main chalta hu, ghar ki haalat bahut kharab hain. Sametna padega!
Dad- Well i ve n idea! Why dont u help him sanju? I know he's in the same cllg too. Vaise bhi neighbours se dosti karke rahna chahiye!{he laughs n prithvi smiles while sanju fakes one.}

Precap- Sanju helps prithvi.
:-)


Hope u all enjoyed...  will write another ch. soon... 
will be inactive on wednesday till friday! 
keep reading...
Posted: 10 years ago
heey anishaa it's lovelyy update πŸ‘πŸΌ

awww sanjana and prithvi become friendsπŸ˜‰

moreover sanju and prithvi neighbours... and sanju helping him in setting his home...πŸ˜†

jst loved it... update next part soon dear...
thanx for the PM..πŸ€—


Posted: 10 years ago
This my 'sanvi only' update..

CH-8

at Prithvi's house..
The door bell rings n he opens it.. A smile comes on his face cuz Sanjana is here.
He tells her to cum in
Sanju- Woh.. Dad told me to cum here n help u out..But now, by seeing the wonderful condition of ur house.. i think i HAVE to help u out!nahi toh, na jaane kya hoga tumhara!
Prithvi-[ in kiddish way] achha? ab itni bhi buri haalat nahi hain![his voice gets low when he luks arond his house] [cuts in] so TUM meri help karogi?
Sanju- Kya karun, MAJBOOR hun...
Prithvi- Theek hain, mat karo[ casual tone]
Sanju- Ok, Fine. bye..
Prithvi- Are, main toh mazak kar raha tha...
Sanju- Toh fir serious kab hote ho?
Prithvi- Hona zaroori hain??[ coming closer to her]
Sanju-[stepping backwards] nahi, not always...
Prithvi- Toh yeh aarop mujhpe kyun?
Sanju- Aarop???πŸ˜• I think, lets make it clear, if u want my help, toh theek hain, nahi toh bye..[turning towards door slowly]
Prithvi-  are ruko.. maine mana kab kiya..Vaise bhi jab itni sundar ladki khud aayi hain.. toh main kaun hota hun mana karne wala?
Sanju- WHATTT???
Prithvi- Ab tum help karne aayi ho ki jhagda?
Sanju- Jo tum chaho![sarcastically!]
Prithvi-umm.. theek hain pehle safayi kar lete hain baaad mein jhagda..
Sanju thinks- he's so...
sanju- ok..no problem.. ab chalo..
...
She starts helping him n they work out together n soon.. his house luks wonderful..
 both smile n luk at each other..
then sanju notices a painting is slightly tedha [sorry didnt get the word] n she climbs the ladder n tries to get it right..but she loses her balance n falls...But prithvi saves her..
he keeps on luking at her while she still has her eyes closed..
She opens one of her eyes slowly when she realises she's still alive! [the 'jaan bachi laakho paaye' moment!

she sights prithvi holding her n smiling ...prithvi keeps on luking at her n after a while she too...
suddenly, prithvi softly speaks- Hamesha aise hi dekhne ka plan hain?
Realising her position she gets down..
Sanju- Par pakda toh tumne mujhe tha..[defence lawyership!]
Prithvi- Agar pakadta nahi toh yun jhagda karne ki takat nahi hoti..
Sanju- Haan toh theek hain na... thanx... ab khush?
prithvi- WOW! Sirf thanx, i mean maine tumhaari JAAN bachaayi n only thanx.. really sanjana...
Sanju- achha.. toh kya chahiye tumhe??
Prithvi- Waqt aane par maang lunga...
Sanjana- ok.. as u wish..[ on seein clock]
Oh gosh! Its already 6pm! n ela ke ghar 7pm pahunchna tha.. 
Prithvi- Pata toh tha hi.. aaj prove bhi ho gaya...
sanju- kya?
prithvi- yahi, ki girls kisi bhi occasion par taiyaar hone mein bahut tym leti hain.. dekho.. abhi pura ek ghanta hain par tum itni tension mein ho!
Sanju- WHATEVER! bye.. main jaa rahi hun...
 prithvi- bye.. milte hain..

she is abt to leave..
Prithvi- Sanjana..[ in a really sweet voice...]

sanju stops n turns..
prithvi- Thankyou...
Sanju smiles n says- its ok..
n leaves...

thats it.. hit the like button if u enjoyed...





Posted: 10 years ago
awesome!!!!
read all the chapters
superb SS
so lovely and cute dear
do write more like this and thnks for the pmπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
Posted: 10 years ago
It's so sweet..
I love how prithvi tease sanju...
Love it
Posted: 10 years ago
awsome..
thnks for the update

Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by sumimita


awsome..
thnks for the update

mention not dear...
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by gal.angel


Awesome update dear
oh really? thanku very much sweetie!
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by reykriya21


awesome!!!!
read all the chapters  
superb SS
so lovely and cute dear
do write more like this and thnks for the pmπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

 Thanyou very much.. ill continue.. love writing for u all

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