Balika Vadhu

GAURI JAGAT WITH ANSH small recap before update pg no:32

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THIS IS MY FIRST STORY WHICH I WAS ATTEMPTING I HOPE U ALL LIKE IT...😊AND JST GIVE ME BACK REPLIES ...😊.THIS WAS JUST IMAGITION WHICH IS NOT  COMAPRED TO PRESENT STORY RUNNING IN BV SHOW I HOPE EVERY ONE FEEDS ME BBACK FOR THIS STORY...

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PART              page no

     1                      1

     2                      3

     3                      3

     4                      4 

     5 [a]                 4

    5 [b]                  6

    6 [a]                  7

   6 [b]                   11

   7                         15

   8a                         22

   8b                         25

recap                       32

PART-1

ANSH GOT MARRIED IT WAS ABOUT PROBABLY OF 5 MONTHS ANANDI CONFESSED HER LOVE TO SHIV THEY WERE NJOYING THIER MARRIED LIFE . ONE DAY,REGARDING TO SOME JAITSER HOSPITALITY EVENT SHIV HAS TO ATTEND THE MEETING IN MUMBAI WITH CM AND HE TELLS THE SAME TO ANANDI AND TELLS HER THAT HE RETURNS WITHIN 2 DAYS. HE GOES THERE AND FINISHES HIS MEETING ON HIS WAY ONE OF THE SENIOR DOCTOR OF SNG TELLS HIM THAT AS PER CM OPNION THE  JUNIOR DOCTORS STAFF OF SNG HOSPITAL WILL BE COMING TO JAITSER AS TRAINING PERIOD FOR 2MONTHS SHIV AGREES AND THE SENIOR DOCTOR TELLS HIM THAT EVERY ONE WILL 2MORROW EVENG THERE.THE CHAIRMAN OF THE SNG HOSPITAL TELLS TO HIS JU DOCTORS THAT THEY HAS TRAINING PERIOD OVER OF 2 MONTHS IN JAITSER FOR 2 MONTHS WHICH IS IMPORTANT FOR CAREER BUID AND THIS WILL BE CONDUCTED FOR THE MEMBERS IN THIS LIST AND THE DOCTORS CALLED OUT THE NAMES IN THE LIST EVERY ONE WERE EXITED BY LISTENING THIER NAMES EXCEPT GAURI AND JAGAT .SENIOR DOCTORS TELLS THEM THEY NEED TO WORK THIER FOR 2 MONTHS.EVERY ONE WILL BE DISCUSSING ABOUT THE PROGRAM AND TELLS THIS IS GONNA BE A BIG BREAK FOR THIER CAREER

GAURI AND JAGAT REACHES HOME THEY WILL BE THINKING ABOUT THE TRIP AND FINALLY THEY ARGUES WITH EACH OTHER AND THEY HAS DECIDED TO GO THERE AS IT WAS FOR THIER CAREER POINT WHICH MAY BE BRIGHTFUL

SHIV COME BACK TO JAITSER AND TELLS ANANDI THAT HIS MEETING WAS SUCESS AND HE TELLS THAT SOME OF THE DOCTORS R COMMING HERE FOR 2 MONTHS ANANDI WAS HAPPY BY LISTENING EVERY THING AND ASKS HIM WHEN THOSE DOCTORS R CMNG TO JAITSER MEAN WHILE SHIV TELLS TO BHEEM SINGH THAT TO ARRANGE GOOD FACILITIES IN GUEST HOUSE WHICH IS BESIDE THIER CH AS THE DOCTORS WHO R CMNG WILL BE STAYED THERE FOR 2 MONTHS

ANANDI: SHIV AAP JAKAR FRESH HO JAYIYE I'LL ARRANGE DINNER FOR U

SHIV:HA ANANDI JALDI SE KHANA LAGA DE MUJHE BAHUT BHUK LAG RI HEY

SHIV WHILE EATING DINNER

SHIV: ANANDI U SHLD HAVE BEEN COME MUMBAI WITH ME IT WOULD BE NICE AND WE USED TO NJOY THERE AND IT WOULD BE OUR SECOND HONEY MOON πŸ˜‰

ANANDI:😳SHIV U WENT THERE FOR MEETING NOT FOR NJOYING OR NOT FOR HOLIDAYS😊

SHIV:YA... BUT IF U WOULD COME WITH ME BOTH WORK AND HOLIDAY BOTH CAN BE NJOYED I MEAN THERE WORK WILL BE GNG ON AND ROMANCE WILL BE GNG ON  ON OTHER HAND πŸ˜‰

ANANDI:😳

AS THEY WERE R TALKING BS INTERRUPTS THEM AND TELLS SHIV THAT SIR ALL ARRANGEMENTS R FINISHED AND JST NW I GOT A PHONE FRM THE DOCTOR THAT THEY R PASS AWAY FRM JAITSER...

SHIV:OK BS LET THEM TAKE REST AND TELL THEM THEY HAS MEETING 2MORROW AT 10:PM SHARP AT MY OFFICE AND EVERY ONE SHOULD BE IN TIME THERE

ALL THE JU DOCTORS COMES TO JAITSER AND TELL AMON THEM SELVES THAT SUCH A NICE PLACE MEANWHILE BS COMES THERE AND INTRODUCE HIM SELF AND SHOWS THEM THIER GUEST HOUSE WHICH THEY R GNG TO STAY FOR 2 MONTHS AND TELLS THEM THAT THEY HAS MEETING 2MORROW AT COLLECTOR OFFICE AND OUR SIR WANTS TO TALK TO U ALL AND THE MEETING STARTS AT 10:AM SHARP,EVERY ONE SHOULD COME COZ OUR SIR LYK DISICIPLINE

ALL THE DOCTORS SITTING AMONG THEM SELVES AND DISCUSSING THAT I THNK THIS COLLECTOR IS AGED ONE JAGAT AND GAURI WRE LISTENING AND THINKING OF THAT COLLECTOR

 NEXT DAY MRNG EVERY ONE GOT AND FRESHING THEM SELEVS FOR THE MEETING MEAN WHILE BS COMES THERE AND ASKS WHETHER EVERY ONE R READY OF THE GIRL ASKS BS THAT WHOSE HOUSE IS THAT SHOWING CH WCH IS BESIDE THIER GUEST HOUSE BS TELL THEM THAT THIS IS OUR COLLECTOR HOUSE [CIRCUIT HOUSE].HE TELLS EVERY ONE THAT IF EVERY ONE IS READY THEY CAN GO TO OFFICE EVERY ONE GOES GAURI AND JAGAT R IN FEAR WHETHER ANY ONES SEES THEM AND TELLS THEM ANY THING IN FRONT OF THIER FRIENDS SO THEY R VERY MOODY AND ALL OTHERS R NJOYING THE TRIP THERE

IN CH SHIV ANANDI R READY TO LEAVE FOR OFFICE [ANANDI IS GNG THERE AS SHE WAS SARPANCH]MEAN WHILE, SHIV CALLS LALSINGH NA DABHISHEK WHETHER THEY REACHED THERE FOR MEETING THE DOCTORS WHO CAME FOR CAMP TO JAITSER...

IN COLLECTOR OFFICE EVERY ON WILL BE SITTING IN A CONFERENCE HALL MEANWHILE LALSINGH AND ABHISHEK COMES THERE AND THEY WERE SHOCKED πŸ˜²BY SEEING GAURI AND JAGAT THERE.BS GOES NEAR THEM AND ASKS THEM TO SIT. GAURI AND JAGAT SEES AT LALSINGH 

WHILE THEY BOTH WERE THINKING SOMETHING BS TELLS THAT COLLECTOR SIR IS COMMING EVERY ONE STOODS UP WHILE EVERY ONE SEES SHIV THEY JUST SHOCKED BY SEEING HIM HIS PHYSIC AND ONE OF THE GIRL IN THAT GANG TELLS THAT HOW HE LOOKS DASHING AND HOW SEXY HE IS AND HOW NICE IT WOULD BE IF HE IS NOT MARRIED πŸ˜›

GAURI AND JAGAT  WAS SHOCKED😲 BY SEEING ANANDI BESIDE HIM AND GAURI TELLS HERSELF THAT HER DAYS R NOT GNG GOOD  

SHIV ENTERD THE HALL WITH ANANDI ALL GUYS IN HALL WERE FLATTED BY SEEING ANANDI.[ALL GIRLS THINKS THAT SHIV WAS UNMARRIED AND ALL BOYS THINKS THAT ANANDI WAS UNMARRIED]GAURI THINKS HERSELF THAT ANANDI HAS CHANGED A LOT SHE IS NOT WEARING GHAGRA AND SHE IS WEARING SAREE AS  SHE WEAR AND WITH OUT PALLU ON HER HEAD AND THINKS THAT THIS SHE TRYING TO BRING JAGAT TO HERSELF BACK SO SHE CHANGING HERSELF...

ANANDI AND SHIV SEES JAGAT THERE AND THEY DOES NOT TAKE IT AS MATTER ANANDI SITS BESIDE GAURI

MEANWHILE BS STARTS EXPLAING ABOUT THIER WORK BUT GIRLS ALL GIRLS R BUSY IN SEEING AND BOYS R BUSY IN WATCHING ANANDI AND GAURI AND JAGAT WERE IN FULL IRRITATED MANNER JAGAT WAS IMPRESSED BY ANANDI SEEING LYK HER IN SUCH A WAY WAS FIRST TIME IN HIS LIFE AND NOT ABLE TOOK LOOKS FRM ANANDI.THIS WAS OBSERVED BY GAURI AND SHE WAS ANGRY WITH JAGAT😑.THE MEETING WAS FINISHED AND SHIV TELLS THEM THAT THEY CAN GO AHEAD FROM TOMORROW ON WARDS IN THIER WORK AND THEY CAN BE FREE TODAY AND HE SHOWS LALSINGH AND ABHISHEK THAT THEY THE DOCTORS OF THAT HOSPITAL AND ALSO THE REPRESENTATIVES OF THAT HOSPITAL WCH MADE JAGAT IRRITATIVE GAURI FELT LEAVING FROM THERE BUT SHE CANT DO IN SUCH A WAY BCOZ SOME OF THE SENIOR DOCTORS R THERE LATER,HE INTRODUCES ANANDI AS THE SARPANCH OF JAITSER EVERY ONE WERE SHOCKED AS SHE WAS SARPANCH AND APPREICIATES HER.WHEN SHIV IS IN THE IMPORTANT MEETING WITH SENIOR DOCTORS,ANANDI,LALSINGH,ABHISHEK [ALL OTHERS R WAITING OUT SIDE AS THEY WERE TOLD TO WAIT OUT SIDE] MEAN WHILE SHIV PHONE RINGS HE ASKS EXCUSE AND CUTS THE PHONE BY SEEING THE NAME IT WAS MAHI AND HE CALLS AGAIN ANADI TAKES THE PHONE OUTSIDE AND GIVES IT TO BS AND SHE TELLS HIM COLLECTER SHAB KA PHONE BHAJ RAHI HEY AAP UNKO KEHIYE KI WO MEETING PAR BADH ME CALL KARENGE[ANANDI CALLS SHIV COLLECTOR SHAB IN OFFICE].THIS WAS OBSERVED BY EVERY ONE WHO R OUTSIDE MEETING WAS GNG ON... BS COMES IN AND CALLS OUT ANANDI OUT AND TELLS 

BS:MADAM MAHI SIR KA PHONE HEY MENE UNSE KEH DIYA KI SIR MEETING PAR HEY PAR WO AAP SE BAATH KARNA CAHTHE HEY ISLIYE MENE AAPKO BULAYA THA SRY MADAM

ANANDI: KOI BAATH NAHI BS JI DIJIYE ME BAATH KARUNGI MAHI BHIYYA SE

SHE RECIVES THE PHONE ANDTALKS TO MAHI...

ANANDI:MAHI BHIYYA BHOLIYE WOH SHIV MEETING PAR HEY ISLIYE BS KO PHONE DIYA THA KUCH ZARURI BATH HEY KYA..

MAHI: BABHI IAM IN JAITSER AND IAM NEAR CH WHERE R U?

ANANDI:KYA U CAME TO JAITSER U DO ONE THNG COME TO OFFICE ME AND UR BHIYYA BOTH R HERE NLY 

MAHI: OK BABHI I'LL BE THERE FOR 5 MIN THERE AAP BAHAR RUKIYE NA 

ANANDI: OK I'LL BE WAITING JALDI AYIYE πŸ˜Š 

MEANWHILE SOME STUDENTS COME NEAR ANANDI AND TALKS WITH HER EXCEPT GAURI AND JAGYA SHE WILL BE TALKING WITH THEM MEAN WHILE SHE OBSERVES MAHI COMING ON BIKE BUT HIS DRESS WAS MUDDY.SHE ASKS THEM EXCUSE ME AND GOES NEAR MAHI

ANANDI: MAHI BHIYYA YE KYA HEY AUR AAPKI HALATH DEHKIYE YE SAB KYA HEY

MAHI:BABHI KUCH NAHI HEY BAS CH SE YAHA AATHE WAKTH BIKE SKID HO GAYI HEY

ANANDI:HEY BHAGVAN CHALIYE DOCTOR KE PAAS CHALTHE HEY MAHI:NO BABHI IAM FINE DNT WORRY

THIS ALL WAS OBSERVING BY EVERY ONE WHO R STANDING THERE AND GAURI AND JAGAT WAS THINKING WHO IS HE TALKING WITH ANANDI

ANANDI:MAHI BHIYYA AAP TIK HEY NA.. LALSINGH THO YAHA HEY ME USKO BHULATHI HU AAP AAPKE BHIYYA KE CABIN ME CHALIYE

MAHI:NO BABHI DOCTOR KI ZAROOTH NAHI HEY 

BY THE TIME ONE THE BOY COMES ASKS ANANDI ANY PROBLEM 

ANANDI:JI HA THODI INHE CHECK UP KIJIYE YAHA ATHE WAKTH BIKE PE SKID HO GAYE THE THODI DEKHIYE NA...

HE CHECKING UP MAHI MEANWHILE SHIV COMES OUT FROM THE HALL HE SEES MAHI BIKE THERE AND THERE HE SEES MAHI WITH FULL OF MUD 

ANANDI WAS TENSED AND SHE WAS IN LIL TEARS

MAHI:BABHI AAP CHINTA MAT KIJIYE MUJHE KUCH NAHI HUA AAP BEHKAR ME PARESHAN HO RE HEY 

MAHI: BHABHI JUST COOL ME TIK HU 

ANANDI:KUCH TIK NAHI HEY AUR  MAHI KITNE BAAR KAHA MENE SIRF ME NAHI MAA,CHOTIMAA,DADDU,PAPAJI SAB KAHA NA BIKE PAR LONG DRIVES MAT CHALIYE PAR PHIR BHI PHIKAR NAHI HEY AAPKO 

THANX FOR UE REPLIES AND FOLLOWED UR REPLIES AS U ALL SUGGESTED ME EXPECTING FEEDBACK FOR TIS PART ALSO.ANY MISTAKES PLZ  XCUSE ME


 

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Posted: 10 years ago

πŸ˜†Dil ke armaan poore ho rahe hain

This is what we all wanted Jagat and Gauri and AnSh parallel tracks

Everyone in their stories have moved on with Ganga there. I like her but Jagya ko koi pareshaani hui hi nahi hai

I am with you I trouble him in my story you trouble him in yours

Humaari kahaani hai hum kuch bhi kar sakte hain

please update more soon

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ONE REQUEST: PLEASE WRITE IN SENTENCE CASE CAPS MEIN AANKHNE KHICHTI HAIN

BAAKI SAB TAKA TAKπŸ‘πŸΌ

Edited by chahat11 - 10 years ago
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i really liked the plot but just want to give you friendly advice
Do not write anything in caps unless some one like Gauri is shouting...second write your own comments in italic (no caps)...it helps us distinguish b/w your comments and story and i would suggests you to put full stop so that we can know where one sentence ends and where does it start from...use normal size because big letter cause slight irritation in eyes 
please do take it in offensive way...it thought it may help you to make your story look better because presentation always helps...sorry if you are hurt
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Very interesting plot...After a long time got to see Gauir and Jagat and more than that their tantrums and their jalnaa and alll...
 
Do continue soooner please...
 
A small suggestion...Please dont write the whole script in full caps...It reallly disturbs a lot...
 
Do conitnue soooner...
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REALLY GUD 1 PLS DO CONTINUE N MAKE IT LONG//// TOO GUD... PLS DO UPDATE SOONπŸ˜›
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Wah... Very nice story dear... Ansh-mahi part was very good.. As usal our Aji.. A very sweet..carring bhabhi.. .. Nd the best part was J-G ka jalana... 😈 i enjoyed that very much... Maza jyada tab ayega jab unhe pura sach pata chalrga.. They bcm jala bhuna kabab... πŸ˜† .. Very good.. Do update next part soon.. Nd if possiblre pm me... I like to read it...
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Nice plot,
Continent soon😊
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well u hve written well... bt maza aata agar iss part ko thoda aue enhance kiya jaye... i mn agar yeh baat gauri aur jagat ko dheere dheere pata chalti abt ansh... thode mazedar kisse aur hote tho maza atta... n dnt write in caps...
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Superb loved it plz continueπŸ˜‰πŸ˜†πŸ‘

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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing story...plz continue further...wanted this kind of track in BV...without gauri BV is nt nice...although i lyk ganga track as well

Plz continue with ur story