THIS IS OUR LOVE- A Sanvi ss, ch 2 update - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
so here is the first chapter... first of all i wanna say..as i'm a keralite..i'm very weak in hindi yet  i would love to add more hindi.. so bear wit ma hindi n if i had any mistake u r free to tell me...
 
                                                                                                       chapter-1
 
It was a bright day. A beautiful girl was sleeping on her large bed peacefully, hugging teddy ,,sunrises from outside hit on her face making disturbance for her beautiful sleep.. suddenly someone poured cold water straight on her face'. She got up from her bed with a jerk.
Girl: what the hell??
Opening her eyes, she found the little devil infront of her..
Girl: Sunny''.. tum yeh kya kar diya?
And started running behind him
Sunny: (in his kiddish voice) Sanju di , catch me if you can''. N he runs too fast
Yes dat was our dear sanju
Their chasing game was interrupted when sanju's dad came..
Sanju's dad : yeh kya ho raha hai?? Subah subah start kar diya tum dono?
Sanju: Dad, dekho na.. yeh sunny ne kya kar diya?He poured cold water on ma face'
dad glared at sunny'
sunny: dad, meine kya kar diya? Yeh sanju di na.. kumbhakarn jaise so rahi thi'
Dad see the time, it was 10 am..
Now sanju's dad glared at her..
Sanju: sorry dad (making a puppy face)..last night I slept very late dad'.
S'dad:its ok beta.. now no more fights.. sunny,, say sorry to ur di..
Sunny: sowie di'
She couldn't help bt smile at his childishness'.
Sanju: ok.. n he smiled widely n she kissed him on his cheek..
Den she went upstairs to freshen up herself..
SANYAL HOUSE
 
A guy is sitting infront of his laptop n doing something very seriously'.. A lady of late 45 came to him..
Lady: Prithvi beta.. come breakfast karo'.
Prithvi: ha mom,, thodi der ke baad..
She went to him n closed the laptop.
Mom: No way..u have to cum now'
Prithvi: mom, Yeh aap kya kar diya??
              Mujhe bahut kaam hai'
Mom: yeh kaam ki vajah se tumhe kisi aur ki parwa bhi nai aur aaj Sunday hai phir bhi tumhe mere saath spend karne keliye bhi time nai hai' n she started making tears..
Prithvi: mom abh rone keliye kya hua'? Mei aapke saath breakfast karne keliye  aungi ok'.. aur pure din aapke saath spend karoongi.. abh happy'.
N they both smiled.
Sanju's house
They r having their breakfast
 
Dad: Sanju beta' u know Mr. Sanyal??? Dad ki purani dost'
Sanju: ha dad.. he's in Delhi..right? toda yaad hai..
Dad: usko ek beta hai..
Sanju: toh kya dad.. apko ek beti bhi hai' THE SMART N BEAUTIFUL SANJANA ROY'..
Dad: ha, dat what I'm going to say.. usko ek beta hai aur meri ek beti hai..toh
    She looked up
Sanju(with a confusion): Toh kya dad?
Dad: Toh humne socha'vo..voh actually'ek proposal.. voh..
 He is a bit nervous'.becoz he knows sanju's reaction after knowing dis..
Sanju: dad pls make it clear.. I didn't get anything..πŸ˜•
Dad: voh humne socha tum dono ki shaa'..aaa..
He couldn't complete..before dat sanju yelled at him..
Sanju 😑: dad''..how could u do dis to me?? Mujhe shaadi nai karna..
 
Prithvi:what' marriage??? Mom meine aapse kahi bar batahai ki mein shaadi kabhi nai karoongi'
Mom: kyun? Kyun beta tumhe shaadi se kya problem hai?
Prithvi: mom, it'll affect my carrier..mei bade buisness man banna chahta hu,, aur yeh shaadi vaadi hai naa ek successful carrier mei barrier banungi..
Mom: bt mei ek mom hoon.. aur mei apne bacha ki shaadi dekhna chahta hoon aur uska bachon ko dekna chahta hoon'prithvi apna mom keliye itna bhi kar nai sakta tumhe..
 
San'dad: sanju,,u know wat  tumhari mom bhi yhi chahti hai..
Sanju: dad, aap yeh kya keh rahi hai.. mom is no more(having tears in her eyes)
Dad: ha isliye keh rahi hoon beta,, uski bhi ichcha yhi hogi.. pls beta no mat batao(with a pleading eyes)
 Both the parents started deir emotional drama😭😭😭.. finally'getting irritated😑
Sanju n pritvi: okkk''.mein iss shaadi keliye ready hai..
Their parents became so happy..πŸ˜ƒ
Sanju:bt dad usse pehle..
Pritvi: mujhe ek shart hai..
Sanju:mujhe usse shaadi ke pehle
Pritvi: ek bar milna hoga'
Parents: ha voh toh teek hai.. agreed..
Pritvi n sanju: akele mein..
Parents: akele???
Sanvi: akele mein..its final'
Parents:okkk''.
 
precap: sanvi meeting
 
       reviews, comments n likes pls...n sorry for the typo error
 
 
 
 
           
Edited by sanju_arsha - 10 years ago
sumimita thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow...sanvi meeting... update it soon

sanju_arsha thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
note:
 
once again i'm telling u... if i had any mistakes pls tell me...
n i won't be able to update the nxt part so soon as ma exams r on its way...
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update sanjana...

precap is just wowww... sanvi meeting

thanx fr PM dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: kiranjas

nice update sanjana...


precap is just wowww... sanvi meeting

thanx fr PM dear...

thank u dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: sumimita

wow...sanvi meeting... update it soon


thank u
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome start!! πŸ˜›πŸ‘πŸ‘ 
Just loved it πŸ˜ƒ 
Your name is Sanjana?? 
Im Kiran 😊
Update soon will be waiting πŸ˜› 
Can You please PM me? πŸ˜Š  
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: Komal1004

Awesome start!! πŸ˜›πŸ‘πŸ‘

Just loved it πŸ˜ƒ
Your name is Sanjana??
Im Kiran 😊
Update soon will be waiting πŸ˜›
Can You please PM me?😊


thank u kiran.. I'll pm u 4 sure..
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice.. vaise ur hindi is understandable so no probs.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice concept... :)
& Great start..

Really looking forward to the next part. .
Update soon.. & PM me when you update please :)