Poetry Corner : Poetry that descibes MP's Bravery

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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey guyz m gonna post some poetries related to MP & chetak  in this thread ๐Ÿ˜Š

Rana ka Bhala


Koi puche kitna tha rana ka bhala
to kehna ki akbar ke jitna tha bhala
jo puche koi kaise uthta tha bhala
bata dena hathon me jyon nache mala
chalata tha rana jab ran me ye bhala
utha deta paun ko mughalon ke bhala
jo puche kabhi kyun na akbar lada to
bata ena karan tha rana ka bhala

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Posted: 10 years ago

Chetak Ki veerta


Ranbich chaukdi bhar bhar kar
chetak ban gaya nirala tha
ranapratap ke ghode se
pad gaya hawa ka pala tha

Jo tanik hawa se baag hili
lekar sawar ud jata tha
rana ki putli phiri nahi
tab tak chetak mud jata tha

girti na kabhi chetak tan par
ranapratap ka koda tha
veh daud raha arimastak par
veh aasmaan ka ghoda tha

tha yahin raha ab yahan nahi
veh wahin raha tha yahan nahi
thi jagah na koi jahan nahi
kis ari mastak par kahan nahi

nirbhik gaya veh dhanlon me
sarpat dauda karbaalon me
phans gaya shatru ki chalon me

bhadte nad sa veh lehar gaya
phir gaya gaya phir lehar gaya
vikraal vajramaye badal sa
aru ki sena par gehar gaya

bhala gir gaya gira nishang
haye taapon se khan gaya ang
bairi samaj reh gaya dang
ghode ka aisa dekh rang
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Posted: 10 years ago
ur translation is wrong for Maharana Pratap ka bhala ๐Ÿ˜†Edited by Marathi_Mulgi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

oh m sry just copied the translation  from google without paying much attention Edited by Amor. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Amor.



translation ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
where
i hv not any translation

i guess sum mod edited that ๐Ÿ˜•

i hv only made a poetry topic n now m not able to see any translation ๐Ÿ˜•
oh m sry just copied that from google without paying much attention


don't worry might it was not right so mod's removed it๐Ÿ˜Š i din't saved ur translation but giving right though i am also not that much expert but tried. Urs was not going with poem๐Ÿ˜Š
Edited by Marathi_Mulgi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

right translation is

Koi puche kitna tha rana ka bhala
If anyone someone ask how was rana's spear

to kehna ki akbar ke jitna tha bhala
Then tell it was like akbar's (might be height sense as spear is straight rod with pointed on top like arrow)

jo puche koi kaise uthta tha bhala
If someone ask how it use to raise

bata dena hathon me jyon nache mala
Tell them its like dancing garland in hands (as garland is light in weight and one can easily play with it in same kind rana use to play with it easily like garland evenif it is heavy to handle)

chalata tha rana jab ran me ye bhala
When rana use to play this spear in battlefield.

utha deta paun ko mughalon ke bhala
This spear use to make mughals lift their feets, means mughals are so much afraid of his spear that it use to make mughals to run from battlefield.

jo puche kabhi kyun na akbar lada to
If anyone ask why akbar did not fought with Maharana pratap,

bata ena karan tha rana ka bhala
Tell them akbar was scared of Rana Pratap's spear, eventually Maharana Pratap

Hope i am succeeded little bit with it๐Ÿ˜Š
Edited by Marathi_Mulgi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
thnxxx

i guess thr's sumthing wrng with it 
m not able to edit my post now ๐Ÿ˜•
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Posted: 10 years ago
don't worry i din't saved or quoted ur translation๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 10 years ago
Woww! Great lines describing Maharana's braveryโญ๏ธ๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 10 years ago
Gr8 thrd khu<3 amazing poems !!!