JaGan FF- Heavenly Soulmates (Updt-part 22 -pg 48) - Page 2

Wow Sushi its too good 😃 mannu's birthday part was sooo cute waiting for the next Rattan vs JaGan part 🥱

@sush... Thanks for fulfilling my wish of mannus birthday. This is lot more wonderful than I imagined. Please continue. Waiting for the evil voice. 

OMG!Sush,suspense!Too good.Perfect family.

Very good, sushi! Amazing ending full of suspense and shock for Ganga when she least expected it. I loved the way you built-up suspense with the kid giving the chit, gift box with a ribbon, mobile phone and then finally the Rat's laugh. That too he chose Mannu's birthday itself for this. Well-written 👍🏼. Update soon. Will try suggesting title after you write next part.

Originally posted by: Priyamvada

wowww!

awesome sush.. cont soon plz??

cherry on da top!

Loved ur FF... give it a name soon! great job... :D

thank you priya 🤗
you also try to suggest a name if possible

Originally posted by: jaiya

Hey ,its wounderful update dear 🤗 its different and unique,so beautiful but please less of sanchi,I suggested a title"Heavenly soulmates"if u don'tlike it no problem dear 😃

chaaru🤗
promise yaar sanchi will be less,

wow awesome Sush   Enjoyed reading and imagining it as well 😃This is better than serial 

Originally posted by: Libra123

@sush... Thanks for fulfilling my wish of mannus birthday. This is lot more wonderful than I imagined. Please continue. Waiting for the evil voice.

thanks rama,you liked it means a lot to me 😳

Originally posted by: saba113

wow awesome Sush Enjoyed reading and imagining it as well😃This is better than serial

saba🤗
better than serial 😲
your comment made my day 😳

Originally posted by: shankythebest

OMG!Sush,suspense!Too good.Perfect family.

shanky, glad that you like it. 😳