FF-choodiyan (removed) - Page 5

wow..
Awesome prologue nd CS...
Nice idea...
Bth updates were amazing...
So arjun is tlking to riya very politely nd sma is shckd by seeing dis avatar of arjun..
Aww.. Cute ariya gave eachothr nicknames...
Poor riya she is missing her mthr...
Choree scenes were so funny nd shree shayri.. Lol...
Nd red lines when arjun saw riya frst were too gud... Lovd it...
Nd in da end, riya called sam tot lk wid arjun nd was cryng... Nd fb was sweet...
Nd again choree assumption regardng ariya.. Lol
continue soon :)

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awesome update
riya is so cute & innocent
wow arjun is mesmerized by riya's beauty at 1st sight cool
RJ & sweetheart nice names😉
aww she couldn't pronounce sweetheart😳
loved foursome bonding😛
hehe choree as usual funny😆 shree's shayris🤣 poor chotu😆 shree ne mood garab kardiya uski while imagining foods🤣
aww poor baby missing RJ & crying bitterly
fb was nice
cont soon
Edited by madmadona - 10 years ago

read it in one go
nice prologue and cs
chp 1 & ch2
so riya is  still a kid in mental state
arjun's style is awesome yar
tumhari shaadi hai kya wha???😆😆
oh title is too cute choodiyan
riya calls arjun RJ nice
arjun handled her perfectly
arjun was totaly blown by riya's beauty
shree ki shyari
arjun ki girlfriend
all observing him
riya asked arjun to return her mumma
so cute but emotional ss
update soon
will be waiting
thanks for link
Edited by Chocolate_barun - 10 years ago

sweet and emotional at point but nice...

Teriffic update dr.

Loved the way Purva n Sameer handled Riya.

Awww she is so cute n her childish antics is lovely.

Loved Purva n Arjun's convo n the way she said sorry to him.

Awww Arjun was mesmerised by her beauty.

Ariya first meet was fantastic.

Wow hw easily Arjun mix up with Riya n also smiled on her antics.

Rathod was surprised to saw Arjun's this avtar. Ab Arjun Riya say itni sweetly bat nahi karega to aur kissay karega.

Loved Choree's convo. That was funny.

Awww poor baby, She was crying caz Arjun forget to call her.

OMG Riya asked for her mom as a birthday gift frm Arjun n Arjun had tears in his eyes after listening this. Feel really bad for her.

Awww Arjun promised her to call her daily. That's so sweet of him.

Really vry curious to kne further.

Thanks for pm dr.

Continue soon.

 

 

that was such a lovely update :) loved it
awww riya was so curious to know who else was going to be part of her birthday
can literally imagine arjun in that yellow shirt
purva, arjun and sam's scenes were cute :)
arjun is already smitten by riya's beauty <3
awww riya is so cute :)
loved when she said "arjun ka baccha deal daal kacha" :) and arjun actually smiled hearing it
awww riya calls arjun RJ and arjun calls riya sweetheart :)
sam was shocked seeing this sweet side of arjun ":)
shree's shayari was funny 😆
choree are so funny 😆
awww riya was crying to talk with arjun :)
oh so no one else in ETF knows about riya
oh so arjun promised riya on her birthday that he will call her everyday :) sweet
flashback was nice :)
so riya asked arjun to give her mother as gift on her birthday
feeling so bad for riya :(
loved when arjun called riya doll :)
can't wait to read more
thanks for the pm

awesome update.

Wow.. Superb update
Love Riya n Arjun
Chotu n shree are funny. Loved their convo
Amazing
Do continue plz
Thx for the pm

awww such a sweet and superb update...
finally ariya met and arjun is already mesmerized with her antics and beauty...
loved the names both gave to each other RJ and sweetheart so sweet...
lol shreetu scenes were funny... aur shre ki shayari mashallah...
love how sameer and purva handles her...
awww doll was crying...coz arjun didn't call her...
love the way he made her stop crying...
and her gift which she asked arjun ... so heart touching...
abhi bhi shreetu ki masti band hui... daant khaynge sam arjun se😆
continue soon...