SS: DIL KI DASTAAN update teaser pg-68 *NEW* 08/01 PM LATE - Page 5

Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by ll_megha_ll


ok guyes i am not discontinuing this work but please mujhe thoda sochne ka waqt do iss concept ke bare main

Thank god u r continuing this story
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by Aabish_02



Thank god u r continuing this story

abhi pakka nahi pata i am continuing or not but sochne ka waqt chahiye
Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome Concept & CS...
Continue Soon...
Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome concept
Continue soon
Posted: 10 years ago
When u r gng to update...?? Plz update it... N pm me when u update plz...
Posted: 10 years ago
thank you so much guyes for liking the concept and sorry for keep waiting you long
special thanx to

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here is the next part hope you liked it
Edited by ll_megha_ll - 10 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago
PART-1

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One man is seeing outside from the balcony and remembering his moments with his beautiful wife.

FLASHBACK----


One girl: please chodiye na.


One man: kabhi nahi


One girl: please na arjun dekhiye subah ho gaye aapko office nahi jana kya?


Arjun: roshni aaj main sirf tumhare saath waqt bitana chahati hoon.


Roshni: no aapko office jana hoga.


Arjun: roshni tum bikool unromantic ho.


Roshni: abh jaye office.


Arjun: okzzz...


FLASHBACK ENDS----


Arjun: kyun roshni kyun tum mujhe chodke chali gaye? why?? Main tumhare bagair kaise jee raha hoon yeh main hi janta hoon just because hari ek nanhi pari hain meera (arni daughter). Or aaj ussi ke liye mujhe tumhari behen riya se shaad i karni padh rahi hain with that he come outside his room and sit in the car and goes to her would be wife house.


ON THE OTHER HAND---


One girl is wearing a bridal dress and she was loking stunning and take one picture and taking to thast picture


Girl: did aaj main aapki zindagi apnane jaa rahi hoon. Aaj meri shaadi aapke pati se ho rahi hain. Mujhe himmat dena ki main unhe or aaki beti I mean apni beti ko khush rak sakoon. Please didi mere saath apni riya ke saath hamesha rehna. then she take one man photo and remembering her flashback





Riya: aman kaha ho tum?


She was searching one man but she could not find him. Suddenly someone hugged her from back.


Riya: kahan the tum?


Aman: bhaut miss kar rahi thi mujhe.


Riya: haan


Aman: accha ji main tumse half an hour ke liye kya dur hua tumhara yeh haal hain or agar main tumse poori life ke liye


Before he colud complete riya hugged him tightly and sobbed little.


Aman: kya hua meri pari ko?


Riya: aman tum ne aaj to yeh keh diya doobara aisa kahan na to main apni jaan de dungi.


Aman: hey koi hame dur nahi kar sakta


FLASHBACK ENDS----


Riya: tumne to kahan tha aman ki koi hame alag nahi karega lekin aaj kismaat hame alag kar rahi hai but I LOVE you aman.


Riya mom: riya chalo baraat aa gaye hain


She nodded and come outside where arjun is sitting in the mandap riya comes there and now both ariya are married


PRECAP:


one year leap
Edited by ll_megha_ll - 10 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago
sorry guyes for short update but my fingers are crying very much please give your valuable comment
excused any error

those newbie want pm please add me in your buddy list
Edited by ll_megha_ll - 10 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago
Yippieee me first...🥳
Itu sa update... but it's awesome...!!!
FB were beautiful...!!! Awww both were lost in the memories of their loved ones..!!!
Wow Ariya r getting married...!!
Loved both their POVs...!!!
Precap looks interesting...!!!
Thanks 4 pm dr..
Eager to read it further...!!!
Continue soon...

Edited by Aks13 - 10 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome start!!!!!! 👏
Loved the flash backs!!! 
😃
they were really sweet!! 

and Ariya's marriage!!!!! wow!!! 
how did that happen?😕

Precap sounds interesting!! 😳
update soon!!!! and thanks for the pm!!! 😉

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