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Posted: 10 years ago
Ohh God how did I miss this!!!

Superb poems Misha, GD, IF friend, Angeliceyes 

Awesome thread Misha Keep it up πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago

Something from my side...

 
SOCHA NA THA
 
Tum yun meri zindagi mein aaoge,
Kabhi socha na tha;
Tum yun mere dil pe chhaaoge,
Kabhi socha na tha...
 
Main tumhaare saath itni khush rahungi,
Kabhi socha na tha;
Jo kisi se na kaha woh tum se kahungi,
Kabhi socha na tha...
 
Ek hi pal mein sab badal jaayega,
Kabhi socha na tha;
Aaj mera dil itna royega,
Kabhi socha na tha...
 
Tum yun mera dil todoge,
Kabhi socha na tha;
Yun iss Dosti ka rukh modoge,
Kabhi socha na tha...
 
Main tumhein khone se darungi,
Kabhi socha na tha;
Main aaj bhi tumhein yaad karungi,
Kabhi socha na tha...!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
@Misha : Loved the poem in the first post!! Thanks for sharing...
 
@GD : Beautiful lines...!
 
@ Deep : Lovely lines... very touching...!
Edited by neha_dna - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thank you too Neha di and Sonali di😳😳. Neha di,what a sweet and lovely poem⭐️⭐️... My dil goesπŸ˜’ remembering one of my old friend.
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Posted: 10 years ago
I know Angel, we all really miss our old buddies and new ones too sometimes...
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**WHEN GOD LOOK UPON ME**
When you are still in sleep with your teddy,
I clean cups and plates with red eyes,
When you mom calls you to get ready,
My madam shouts at me to cook hurriedly,
When you get board on your school bus,
I set out with my brother for coal mines,
When you attend your class with books and pencils,
I expand my hands for a paise to pedestrians,
When you have lunch from tiffin box with friends,
My master throws a burnt bread over my face,
When you play video games with soupy noodles,
I return home collecting stale items from market,
When you enjoy cartoons on tv,
I get slaps and kicks for breaking the showpiece by mistake,
When you do your homeworks in front of your teacher,
I really try hard to stop my empty stomach aching with water,
When you go out with your parents to spend holidays,
I beg to your father for service with a shoe polishing kit in my hand,
But still I have a hope when God will look upon me,
I will also get to play.
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Posted: 10 years ago
@ Angel : Lovely lines dear...πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ so touching and true...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: ANGELICEYES

**WHEN GOD LOOK UPON ME**
When you are still in sleep with your teddy,
I clean cups and plates with red eyes,
When you mom calls you to get ready,
My madam shouts at me to cook hurriedly,
When you get board on your school bus,
I set out with my brother for coal mines,
When you attend your class with books and pencils,
I expand my hands for a paise to pedestrians,
When you have lunch from tiffin box with friends,
My master throws a burnt bread over my face,
When you play video games with soupy noodles,
I return home collecting stale items from market,
When you enjoy cartoons on tv,
I get slaps and kicks for breaking the showpiece by mistake,
When you do your homeworks in front of your teacher,
I really try hard to stop my empty stomach aching with water,
When you go out with your parents to spend holidays,
I beg to your father for service with a shoe polishing kit in my hand,
But still I have a hope when God will look upon me,
I will also get to play.

 
 
Maine bhi sapne dekhe thay,
Ek chhota sa ghar, pyaar ka ujaala,
Kitaabon ke saath duniya ki baatein,
Doston ke saath khushiyon ka mela...!!
 
Lekin meri kismat pe rota hai dil,
Duniya ki bheed mein yeh dil akela,
Ab toh khel se bhi darta hai dil,
Zindagi ne mere saath yeh kaisa khel khela...!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thank you so much di😳. Today I went to temple with my parents and after getting out papa gave money to the begars outside. One man passed by saying his friend these people make the begars greedy and get on your nerves. If you have money keep it to yourself. I just can't do anything only but fuming in anger. How could they say so?? 4 or 5 lil kids were just running behind me saying di one coin to me please... It hurts me a lot coz I can't do anything for themπŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Yeah I know... it hurts...
But what I personally feel that such people, especially small kids, should not be encouraged to beg or ask for money... They should not be grown in such environment... They might think that this is the only way of earning...
You are right, we must ofcourse help them...
 
Even I feel like handing them something... But I dont know how this can be changed.. I really dont.
Edited by neha_dna - 10 years ago