AR FF : Pyar_Dosti_Hain-rest of the story-pg39-15.9.14 - Page 29

This content was originally posted by-nilusoni

its awesome but you are ending it so soon

This content was originally posted by-polishedtechie

I am knid of not satisfied with the ending of PDH chotu... i feel there is still something more to write for this story...
sorry to say so... but i feel like something is missing...

I din feel the same in IAAD summarized version.. kind of felt that u did justice to IAAD story... but here something is missing!!!! 😕

This content was originally posted by-.Optimism.

because di u r right.. i hve skipped a majority portion here.. ending padhke aisa lagta hai dat PDH should better be addressed as SS but not FF par agar mein poori kar pati yeh story jaisa maine socha tha toh yeh FF hi sound karta..

u read PDH recently again na di.. toh apko yaad hoga ki mainey 8months ki leap li thi beech mein besides ek flashback dala tha wen riddhima was admiring her gift for armaan.. toh di wahan gift wale scene mein aur flashbacks hone the.. i just described how they first met but there was supposed to b their 2nd meeting.. then how they became best frnds nd then how he became more dan best frnd to her.. again wen riddhima rishab ke room ke bahar wait karti hai then she supposed to remember how much she n armaan faced due to her brother.. how he alwaz used his power so dat armaan didnt get job or if he gets he didnt stay too long.. how money became hell lot of restraint in AR's lives.. how once wen riddhima got severely sick armaan felt they needed money badly n how henceforth his craze to earn pushed their relation in stake.. then how riddhima made him realize that he's shutting her out as a result n how they confront each other bringing their relation back on track..

in short di, PDH has no story line like IAAD.. so i was unable to pen all these minute details in summaries.. PDH is simple with daily life issues nd their struggle against it.. these is the reason dat i just sorted out the actual climax plot in summarized version nd u r absolutely right to feel that something is missing, dat the ending isn't justified.. that's the reason wen everyone said that climax is good i felt a huge pressure got lifted as i didnt knw how to complete PDH in summaries..

sorry angel di.. i knw dat u like reading PDH nd i was unable to reach ur expectation.. but trust me di i thought a lot but didnt get any idea how to end it any other way..

once again dil se sorry di.. nd thank u sooo muchh for stating ur true feelings.. it means a lot to me, truly.. luv uu teacher ji.. ❤️❤️

This content was originally posted by-polishedtechie

hmmm its ok i understand ur pressure and work load.. no problem chotu... but pleas IWUTHM summary shuld not be like dis.. u know i jus love that attitude wala ridzy in that story...

Now waiting for IWUTHM's update... 😛

Love you lotsss chotu 😃 ❤️🤗

This content was originally posted by-desir

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This content was originally posted by-shikha.kj

hi babu 🤗

pata hai before starting my comment i was about to say sorry for being sooo late but then mujhe yaad aya u always used to say ki jab tak main next part na doon nobody is late and then i realized there is never going to be a next part of this 😭

👏👍🏼

this was my first ff which i read written by u and i loved the innocence of this the way the ff started riddhima taking a bold decision of running away 

the gifts everything 

even the ending u have written is too good

rishab's accident his confession every thing well written 

but but don't mind i found something amiss not in ur writing but i guess in ff as if u have rushed into ff sorry if u didn't like this saying 

this ff will always be close to my heart and i have loved the ending 

take care babu 

love you❤️