Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain

VIRIKA OS: PART 8 / PAGE 12 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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part 2 : 
chaudhary house  :

All were really in tension ...sudden the phone ring and beeji pick up the call...
on the other side bua said hello m swamini talking 
beeji : ji kahiye
swamini : humne yeh socha hai ki yeh rishta hum tod rhe hai ...aapke ghr walo ne jis tarah se hamari bejhti ki us tarah se to lagta hai ki aap hamare kabil ni hai ...is liye hum is rishte ko tod rhe hai aj se na aap humne jante hai aur na hum ...aur ha jeevika se keh di jeyega ki viren se contact rakhne ki koi zarurat ni hai ...
beeji : ji  dhan ya wad ( thnk u ) ...humhe bhi aapse yehi umeed thi ki aap humari bat ko nhi smjhege is liye humhe phle se aap ka faisla pta tha aur meine jeevika ko smjha dia tha ...
swamini : thik hai ab hum phone rakhte hai ...
beeji : sukhriya
manvi : beeji kya kha swamini bua ne...
beeji kuch to bolo madan asked
beeji : unhone rishta tod dia hai 
all were shocked .to hear this
jeevika ran to her room while crying 
manvi went behind her
badi beeji : yeh tune kya kia ...
beeji : isme hamari koi galti ni hai beeji ...unhone rishta tod kr sabit kr dia ki vo kisi ki bavnao ko nhi smjhte ...nhi smjhte ki ek ladkii ke liye uski maa ki jagah kya hoti hai 
pinky : ha beeji aapne shi kha...
all were sad 
on other side 
viren got to know the decision of bua by virat 
virat : bua ne rishikesh call krke bta dia hai ki unhone rishta tod dia hai ...
bua ne mujhe aapse kha hai ki ab aap jeevika bhabhi ...i mean jeevika se koi contact na rakhe...
viren was silent listening the words of virat...he went to his room not uttering a word 

jeevika was crying and remembering the scenes spend by viren in short past 
how she develop love towards viren ...
viren was also in same position ...
sad music of virika was playing in background

at night viren said to himself ...mujhe ek bar to jeevika se bat krni hai ...is bad pta ni kab bat ho paye...
he call on jeevika no ...manvi pick up the call ...and said ha jiju aapne call ki ...sudden she remember what she said ...sorry vo jiju bolne ki aadat ho gyi thi to isliye...viren : koi bat ni kya mei jeevika se bat kr skta hu ...manvi : mgr swamini ji ne to mana kia hai 
viren : ha janta hu badi maa ne mana kia hai mgr sirf ek bar usse bat krni hai ...
manvi : ok mei deti hu abhi phone di ko 
manvi went in search for jeevika ...but jeevika was not at home ...manvi asked every1 and all said that they haven't seen jeevika
manvi was worried
on other hand viren was waiting for jeevika to come
viren : kya hua manvi jeevika kha hai 
manvi : vo jiju pta ni jeevika di kha hai ...
viren : in worried voice pta ni ka kya matlab manvi 
manvi : ha mujhe pta hai di kha gyi hogi ap bas do mint hold rakhiye
sudden manvi went and viren remember ki jeevika kha gyi hogi 
manvi went to ganga ghat and see her sister sitting on steps and crying 
manvi : di 
jeevika lift her head and see manvi there
manvi : di aap yha par aur aapki aankho mei aasu ...aap ro ri thi na 
jeevika: nhi to mei ni ro ri thi vo bas aj aasu ruk hi ni rahe...pta ni jis sapne ko tut jana tha vo bna hi kyu 
jeevika : yeh sab chod tu vha kaise
manvi sudden remember that viren is on hold 
manvi : di yeh phone tha aapke liye viren ji ne call ki thi 
jeevika: viren ji '
manvi : ha lo bat kr lo 
manvi left from there
jeevika: hello 
viren : hiii 
jeevika: aapko call ni krni chahiye thi ...agr bua g ko pta chal gya to unhe acha ni lagega
viren : mujhe ni pta ki is waqt badi maa mujhse naraz hogi ya ni bas mujhe ek bar tumse bat krni thi 
jeevika m sorry badi maa ki taraf se ...unhone jis tarah se kha m sorry ...he said very sad voice and almost to cry
jeevika: nhi viren ji aap kyu sorry bol rhe hai ...humne tey kia tha jo bade karege faisla hum vhi manege ...to ab kuch ni ho skta 
aap apni zindagi mei aage bad jaiye...plz aur ho ske to sab kuch bul jaiega
viren : kya tum mujhe bhula paugi ...kya tum aage bad paugi ...jo tum mujhe keh ri ho 
jeevika meine tumse pyaar kia  hai aur pyaar airf ek bar ho skta hai dubara ni ...
jeevika: plz viren ji mujhe aur kamzor mat bnaiye she said while crying ...plz mere khatir move on ...
viren : dekhe ge ki ab hamari destiny hume kha leke jati hai 
jeeviak: ab mujhe jana hoga...bye
viren : byeee

now both know that this was their last convo now they can't talk to each other
at night virat call on manvi cell 
manvi : tum mujhe kyu call kr rhe ho 
virat : muhe puchna tha ki bhabhi thik hai 
manvi : ab vo tumhari koi bhabhi ni hai virat 
virat : to kya ab hum bhi bat ni karege manvi 
manvi: nhi virat ...humari dosti hamari siblings ki wajah se hui thi ab jab vhi saath ni hai to humari dosti ka bhi koi kam nhi ...
hamari dosti bhi khtm ho gyi ...aur ha aj ke bad mujhe cal mat krna ...khi tumhari swamini bua ko bura na lag jaye ...aur unhe dubara humhe bura bhala kehne ka mauka mil jaye 
isliye dubara ab call mat karna
she cut the call
virat : yr bat to sun lia karo ...phone hi cut kr dia
virat was feeling not good ...use bahut ajeeb lagta hai jab manvi ne kha ki ab hum dost nhi hai 

after few days ...everything back normal in both sides
viren and jeevika try hard not to remember each other but it can't possible
manvi do all things so that she can make smile on her di face and some times she succeed in it 

in vadera house all life was going soomthly ...
now viren don't talk too much in any1 work he lawys keep himelf busy in work ...

continu later enjoy this much 
Edited by chhanchan - 10 years ago