Virika SS 'You're My First, My Last, My Evrything! (Discontinued)

Posted: 10 years ago

Ohhkkk So Hellooo Peeps!! I'm Back With Another Story!!

No Intro Nothing Directly Starting My Chp1!

Chp : 1

Viren Was Sleeping Peacefully On The Bed And As He Turned To Find No One Next To Him He Woke Up And Rolled His Eyes Throughout The Room To Find The Balcony Door Open! He By Now Knew Where His Better Half Was...!
Making His Way To The Door He Saw His Wife Adoring The Moon As It Has Stopped Raining A Few Hours Ago And They Moon Struggled Its Way Through The Clouds Appearing More Beautiful!!

Engulfing Her In A Back Hug Keeping His Chin Softly On Her Shoulder Sweetly...<3 

V "Jeevs What Are You Doing Here At This Hour Of Time...?"

J "It's Just That I Couldn't Sleep!! Nothing Much..."

V "Nothing Much...? It's 2:30 In The Morning And My Wifey Is Telling Me That There No Reason Behind I Couldn't Sleep...?" 

J "Yeah Viren! Its Nothing." She Said Freeing Herself From His Hug And Facing Him. She Started To Cry All Of A Sudden Without Any Reason!

V "What's The Reason You Are Crying For Jeevs?" He Said Getting Panicky.

J "I Don't Know" She Said Hugging Him Tightly. Viren Tightened The Grip...

V "You Don't Know Why You Couldn't Sleep And Now You Don't Know Why You're Crying...? What's Wrong...??"

J "Can't You Just Keep Quite And Stay As You Are And Better Don't Ask Anything! Please... "  

V "Okkk. I Won't Speak Anything Else Now."

After A While Viren Cupped Jeevs Face And Said

V "Lets Go And Sleep." He Said Moving Back To The Room Only To Be Stopped By Jeevs Looking At Him With A Puppy Face.

J "Pick Me Up To The Bed! I Don't Wanna Walk."

V "Are You Pregnant? I Mean U Didn't Knew The Reasons Why U Are Up, Why You Cried..And Now You Want Me To Pick You Up..?"   

Jeevika Hits Him On His Shoulder.

J "Shut Up...!" She Says Walking Away Towards The Room But Than Stops As Viren Holds Her Finger! He Comes Closer To Her Lifts Her Up And Takes Her To Their Bed. As He's Placing Jeevs On The Bed Theirs A Knock At The Door. Viren Makes Jeevs To Sit On The Bed And Rushes To The Door. As Soon As He Opens The Door The Little Munchkin Runs To The Bed And Hugs His Mumma Tightly. Viren Shuts The Door And Heads To The Bed. Settling Himself On The Bed He Caresses His Sons Hairs And Asks Him...

V "Aaryan, What's Wrong Baby?" He Asked While Looking At Jeevs Who Gave Him A Look We'll See To It Later.

J "Lets Just Sleep Together! Mumma, Dadaa And Aaryan! Ohhkk Baby?" She Says Picking Aaryan And Placing Him In Middle Who Nods To Her In Positive And They Three Doze Off.

 

So Here I End My First Chp!   Lol!!

Lemme Know Whether I Should Continue..:P Or Actually I Knw What You Guyzz Gonna Say!! :P But Still Leave Your Likes And Comments!! 
Will Try My Best To Be Better This Time..!!



INDEX

Chp: 1 Page 1

Chp: 2 Page 4


Edited by RiddhiTacker - 10 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago
wonderful start...
dont know wht is bothering jeevika...
aryan he sounds such a cutiepie...
luved it!!!!
waiting fr the next part ...
nd yes...
how can i forgot tht me first...
nd i read it before ur pm...lol!!!!
Edited by millee18 - 10 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago
Res

*UNRES*

Sorry for the late unres 😭 long story, I'll explain later!
Wow what an update πŸ˜† Even though I read it already muahahahahaha ***Karina's evil laugh***
It was a delight to read over again ❀️
Aready seems to be an awesomeee story!
Loved the beginning, and really curious to know what is going on with Jeevika!
Super duperrr start Ridhi ❀️
Can't wait to read more πŸ˜ƒ 
Edited by Kays94 - 10 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago
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unres
U shud continue for sure!!!!!!!
I thought at 1st that jeevika is pregnantπŸ˜†
Wow viren carrying Jeevs was too cute😳
"We'll see to dat later"look πŸ˜† OMG!!!!  Viren is too naughty...
Aaryan!!! wow cute name...
Thanx for the PM
Do update asap!!!
Edited by AmmuKryan - 10 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago
Awww awesome...
Loved the name aaryan..it is sooo cute...
Loved the way viren pick jeevika...
Continue soon..and plz this time don't end up ur story soon...
Posted: 10 years ago
sounds interesting...
waiting for the next chappy already...
thanks for the pm...
Posted: 10 years ago
Really love the title
Starting is really gud
First jeevika crying den jeevika want viren to lift and viren sd chances of pregnant.thats ws really amazing part
I ws shocked wen der ws knock that wht. Might happen bt der ws a cute little surprise aryan our virika son sooo cute
Superbb start 
Continue soon
Thanks for the pmz
Posted: 10 years ago
So sweet start.
Jeevika behaving like baby and virena doring her.
So sweet.
Continue soon πŸ˜Š
Posted: 10 years ago
Ridhi I really like the concept and you write very well.
Keep practicing and writing you'll become perfect
Posted: 10 years ago
ridhi!!!
the concept is great!πŸ‘
and personally i love the name aaryan!!!!!πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
now i really want to know why jeevika is acting like this!! Mood swings and all πŸ˜‰
continue soon πŸ˜ƒ

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