Rishbala FF-Loving a Criminal ch 19 pg 117 (27-8-2014)

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Posted: 10 years ago

Guess who is back😉 yeah i am gonna start another one of my scribbles ie. story on my fav Rishbala😛 so i have posted a prologue n i would be pleased to know abt your views😊

PROLOGUE:

                Madhu rested her aching back on the cushions of the couch and sipped the hot chocolate milk in her hands. She kept flipping through the channels until something caught her eyes, the news. She kept the remote back on the table and listened to news carelessly. But the suddenly a breaking news occurred and the news flashed big on the screen

Bollywood actor Rk deceased: The Bollywood King Superstar Rk killed at a shootout at New York in a dungeon that was believed to be shut down until today's break out. Resources prove that Rk was either caught unintentionally or been there when an unexpected inter rivalry broke out among the goons of the most forbidden underworld don Sulthan. On reliable basis cops have declared to have found everyone involved being dead either due to the shootout or the unexpected blast of cylinders. Hence it was declared a mourning day for the bollywood to have lost such a sincere and excellent actor.

            Madhu hands tightened around her cup before she muttered, "Another filth cleared" with a smirk and suddenly felt her tiredness fly away leaving her as enthusiastic as ever.

Index is in the following post n yeah frnz who wanna follow my story pls buddy me ðŸ˜Š n silent readers i appreciate ur acknowledgement but pls do understand if i say i am too lazy to pm you😉 i have given my pm list below if i have not included anyone pls do notify me😊

wid luv ur janu😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
rk dead ???? ðŸ˜­ðŸ˜­ðŸ˜­ why ??? u r writing a tragedy ??? no please dont kill rk please 
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Posted: 10 years ago
index:
prologue - pg 1
chap 1 - pg 6
chap 2 - pg 11
chap 3 - pg 16
chap 4 - pg 19
chap 5 - pg 23
chap 6 - pg 28
chap 7 - pg 33
chap 8 - pg 39
teaser - pg 43
chap 9 - pg 45
chap 10 - pg 52
chap 11 - pg 59
chap 12 - pg 66
chap 13 - pg 72
chap 14 - pg 79
chap 15 - pg 85
teaser - pg 89
chap 16 - pg 93
teaser - pg 97
chap 17 - pg 101
chap 18 - pg 110 
teaser - pg 114
chap 19 - pg 117
Edited by Janani24 - 9 years ago
anna_77 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice story line...plz pm me...
Janani24 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: rima4ever

rk dead ???? ðŸ˜­ðŸ˜­ðŸ˜­ why ??? u r writing a tragedy ??? no please dont kill rk please 

nope dear i never tread on tradedies😛 so pls do wait n watch😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Seems like an interesting plot..
Excited...😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
concept was intresting , but in prologue rk dead ?
hope u don't consider a tragic ending of this story
Continue soon & thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Interestng. Continue soon and please add me in ur pm list
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Posted: 10 years ago
Interesting prologue --- Actually shocking one --- Full of suspense & curiosity --- Don't know why bt i hav a feeling that i'm gonna love this FF more than previous --- I m eagerly w8ing 2 read 1st part.


PS : Thank u so much Jan fr starting this New FF   ðŸ¤—
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Posted: 10 years ago
I love the concept.😳  I hope rk will not die at the end.😕 Continue soon😉