~DEMONSINGH'S CORNER~ CID IPL Special Part 1 (Page 24) - Page 5

Originally posted by: misha.as

Awesome story Ravi bhai...👏⭐️👏
Love the writing style, the language,⭐️ the flashbacks, the plot ...👏 👏
Everything is amazing...⭐️
Great work...⭐️ 👏

Ye kya o.O
Sirf bhaiyaa ko credit :D 😛 😉

Sorry for the delay in reviewing your story Ravi and Shrishti. This story was absolutely awesome. Your style of writing is just fab made me glued to the story. I felt like I am reading a novel. Everything seemed to be happening right in front of my eyes. The story was so much gripping. The concept, the investigation, the team bonding, Purvis strategy, flashbacks this was all a masterpiece. Purvi proved herself that she was also a brave cop just like the others. Overall a wonderful story waiting for more

Originally posted by: poorvisinghcd

Ye kya o.O
Sirf bhaiyaa ko credit :D 😛 😉

Sorry Poo I forget U 😔
thanks 4 the story...😊👍🏼

thanks for remining me my short term memory loss 😛 😉

Thanks for your valuable feedback, everyone. Greatly appreciated. 😃

GD, many thanks once again for your unabashedly honest review and constructive criticism. We've considered all your points and will certainly keep them in mind to improve in our upcoming stories. 😊

A few thoughts regarding the questions you raised.

Originally posted by: gadhadada

just One Confusion😕, why PURVI did not trying to Bursts the Bus Tire with Her Gun Shot, because of a Terror that the Bomb blast due to Jerk or anything...🤔

Please don't; we learn so much from you in this regard and cannot hope to improve without such fair criticism. 😊

@Bold - On that day, the sun will rise in the west and cows will fly. Aka, that's never going to happen. 😉 😆

Surely. Bas yehi hai apni dua, ek din padhne ko mile "Popat khush hua"!

😉 🤗

Originally posted by: DemonStar

Thanks for your valuable feedback, everyone. Greatly appreciated. 😃

GD, many thanks once again for your unabashedly honest review and constructive criticism. We've considered all your points and will certainly keep them in mind to improve in our upcoming stories. 😊

A few thoughts regarding the questions you raised.

Bus/truck tires are generally too thick to be effectively damaged by standard pistol bullets. You need a rifle or shotgun for that. And there's also the additional risk of the passengers panicking on seeing the bus being fired at, and doing something reckless.

On receiving the SMS, Purvi's first thoughts were for the safety of her teachers if they were being targeted. The threat was vague, and she did not know what exactly the reach of her enemy was. After the action progresses and she observes the other SMSes, she decides that taking another phone would be a safe course of action.

 

He was no professional. And aise-waison ke liye Purvi ka ek hi haath kaafi hai.  😉

True. But even if she did ask, Purvi would not be likely to say "Yes, I disobeyed your orders and brought backup". She kept her man as a lookout for this purpose, but didn't know about the CID's plans.

I think the fact that she abandons his treatment and sets out on this badla business is indicative of how damaged her psyche was. She had given up hope that her father would survive, and instead used whatever money she had gathered for this purpose.

I understand; even we feel we rushed though this one. I wrote about 4 chapters in less than an hour. 😆 Sorry for not living up to your expectations... we'll try better next time. 😊 @Bold - I do feel we gave ACP sir and our duo a sizable part in the plot, though.

Please don't; we learn so much from you in this regard and cannot hope to improve without such fair criticism. 😊

@Bold - On that day, the sun will rise in the west and cows will fly. Aka, that's never going to happen. 😉 😆

Surely. Bas yehi hai apni dua, ek din padhne ko mile "Popat khush hua"!

😉 🤗

Originally posted by: gadhadada

DEMONSTAR and POORVISING, First did not Mean to Hurt Both of U and DEMONSTAR U are such a Writer we or say I wanted to be like U, I wanted to have such Skills of Creative Work like U especially in Story Writing so a Little Error turn out to be a Big Loophole when come across in Ur Creative Work...😊

Dunt think that U Both did not give Excillent, Yes its an Excillent Effort but in My Viiew its Not BOTH of URS Best Short... thats I mean and plz Dunt say this that POPAT will Happy or Not...😊

arry POPAT Forum mein itnay saaray Taleented Logun ko dekh kr Khushi say Mota aur Ganja hota ja raha hay... 😳😃

Usy yaqeen hay jub wo Urr jayey ga tou Logun ko Entertain karny ki Responsibilities Buht Mazboot aur Deserving Kandhun pr day kay jayey ga...👏⭐️👏