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Wow Apoorva di.. Its so sweet and beautiful ๐Ÿ˜ณ โญ๏ธ.. I too have the same question ๐Ÿ˜‰.. Who put Adi sir's pic in tiffin box and steal the food ๐Ÿ˜‰? Please answer di๐Ÿ˜‰.
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arre no yaar...tifiin box it seems๐Ÿคฃ it was a gift box and yeah its imaginary๐Ÿ˜›
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arre no yaar...tifiin box it seems๐Ÿคฃit was a gift box and yeah its imaginary๐Ÿ˜›

Wish I get such a gift one day in tiffin box instead of boring tiffin ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜†.
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Main bhi aapke liye duvayein maangthi hoon... :P
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Baray Bhai Prakat ho gayey...๐Ÿ˜‰
Munny say Gift Box say...๐Ÿ˜†
Lovely Poem APOORVA...๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
Thank You baccha...๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Why thank you Dada...you give us such amazing stories Na...return gift hai ye
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Why thank you Dada...you give us such amazing stories Na...return gift hai ye


awww... Mera Pyara sa Chota sa Baccha...๐Ÿค—
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PART 1
CID International-Case 1
A normal day at the bureau...everyone involved and busy in their own work.Just then Feddy gets in a letter from outside.
Freddie: Sir Ye letter aaya hai high command se.
Daya: Dikhaao freddi..dekhte hai kya hai...
Arre Abhijeet ,ye dekho.Ye to CID international team se letter.Wohi jo pichle hafte ACP saab hume bata rahe the.
Abhijeet:Arre haan main toh wake main bhool gaya tha.Kiske baare main likha hai letter main?
Daya: Woh agle hafte conference hone waali hai Golden Sands Island main...Woh hume waha pahunchna padega...Aur ye Freddie yahaan pe..
Abhijeet: Dheere se bolo Daya...use pata nahi hai ab tak
Freddie:Kisi ne mera naam nikala kya?
Daya and abhi : arre nahi toh...par haan Freddie aaj baaju waale hotel main aaj ACP saab hum sabko dinner pe bulaye hai...zaroor aana...
In the evening, at the Hotel
Tasha: Sir aapne hume achaanak yahaan pe bula di...koi party hai kya?
ACP: Bas yu hi samajh lo...aap sab ko jald hi jald pata chal jaayega.
Vivek: Teekh hai sir..aur ye cake? Ye kis khushi main hai?
Daya: Thoda intezaar bhi kar lo na.Lo Freddie aa gaya..aao Freddie hum sub tumhi ke intezaar kar rahe the...
Freddie: Sir aap mere taang toh kheench nahi rahe na...aap mera kyun wait karenge?
ACP: ab toh tum important officer banoge na...
Freddie: Matlab?
ACP: Aap sab logon ko pata hi hoga ki desh ke baahar bhi crime rates bohot badh gaye hai...isliye har desh se do ya teen officers chune gaye hain..aur humaare yahaan se main , Abhijeet aur Daya aur agle hafte hum golden sands island nikal rahe hain...humaare laut aane tak Freddie yahaan sab kuch sambhaal lega...aur itne saalon se woh itna achcha kaam kar raha hai isliye use bhi Sr.Inspector ke post ke liye promote ki jaati hai...
Freddie:Thank you sir...mujhe kitni khushi ho rahi hai aapko pata nahi...meri wife sach main aaj aarti utaaregi meri...aur vivek ab tumhe mujhe paanch hazaar rupya dena padega..
Abhijeet:Arre ye kaisi baat hui?
Freddie:Sir main usse  shart lagaayi thi main ek na ek din promote ho jaaunga ...
Tasha: Freddie sir aap bhi na...
(Everyone laughs)
Next Week:
All leave for Golden Islands...All are at airport...
ABhi:Arre hum ye kahaan ja rahe sir?International flights ki terminal to us taraf hai...
ACP: Nahi  Abhijeet, hum private plane se pahunch rahe hai kyunki hume pehle padaav se hi jaan ko khatra h sakta hai...
Daya to abhi : (Lo boss ye life hai...abhi enjoy kar lete hai)
Both grin...
Few hours later at a private jet runaway:
Driver: Sir we have reached and you can proceed to the resort that you can see from here.
All thank him and leave.
At the conference hall, they are introduced to their other comrades- Gerald Anther from England,Pierre Loraine from France,Carry Jones from Australlia,Mc Davy from the Scotland Yard retired Service.They are people from highly respected and coveted posts in the national services.The conference continues to present their continued agenda for the next few weeks and they are told that they will be leaving for Cairo in a few hours. As they move out the building , they make blue prints for the encounters with a notorious serial killer Mark Dacurt , who strangles his victims,all women with a fishing net.  His true roots nor his real name is not known to the Yard also.
A few hours later at Cairo
The sun is shining brightly among the tall minarets and the boats are gliding slowly in almost inertia...the sands have heated up and the city looks like a red mass from afar, as though sinisterly warning them of danger.Among the peaceful atmosphere on the cruise ship, the steward calls out in shock,...one of their lady passengers has been murdered on the deck with a fish net...The team is amazed that the persecuted has struck before they even reached their destination...they go with their team doctor Steve William.
   The doctor proclaims that the lady who has been identified as Julia Martin from the passenger list has been dead around 12 hours ago...whence they left from Golden sands Island.In her hand she has tightly clenched a dead coral, so tightly held that her hand has been imprinted with the pattern.The team continues to inspect the room.Amidst all the procedural work, they hear a splash out in the deck.Mc.Davy rushes out to investigate...
The cabin boy tells them that a bottle has been thrown from the upper deck...He offers to jump in and get the bottle for them.Meanwhile, Pierre examines the passenger list thoroughly.Other than the team, there are seven other passengers .
Jeane White, a middle aged housewife from London
Her daughter Amelia
Miranda Thomas , a dancer from Germany
The Johnson Family from South Australlia
Mary the wife, Johnson a iron magnate, And Lira and Tony, the children.
As he was strolling across the deck waiting for the bottle to be handed over he saw a small stain of oil on the ground...as he continued further, he saw that the puddles just kept getting bigger and a tiny man had heaps of paper which he was about to set fire to.Mc Davy quietly sneaked when a heavy board creaked noisily under his feet and the man ahead threw the lighter on the mass and jumped into the river .
 The heavy shroud of smoke hung in the boat for several hours later and Daya and Abhi were puzzled to know that all the papers that were being burnt were blank.However under the bundle, there was a tiny gadget resembling a fly . As a routine check , they checked it for cameras and finding none they handed it over it to a helper who was plonking evidences into a bag.It was one second that he peered near the antennae and gingerly placed his finger there that he screamed in a chilling way. Before anyone could step forward to help , his body turned blue and he collapsed in a lifeless heap,
    In this eventful journey , they had reached the shore and all the passengers moved to the hotel rooms allotted to them.Gerald commented that the tiny man that Mc.Davy had seen was trying to save them.Then why had he escaped? At dinner time, all sat involved in their food and all that could be heard was the clanking of crockery. Pierre who was seated with Gerald and Mc Davy stole his glances across the table to see Carrie . A very talented detective, she was no famous for her gorgeous looks.But she reminded of him someone he knew years ago, though his memory helped him no more.
     In the dead of the night , the trio sat in the soft moonlight on the terrace .
Daya:  Arre sir , yahaan to sab kuch itna jaldi ho raha ki mujhe darr lagta ki hum saas lete waqt suraag na gayab ho jaaye
Abhijeet:Haan sir, aur ye khooni jo koyi bhi hai apne maksat poora karne ke liye massomon ki jaan bhi lene ko tayyar hai..
ACP: Arre woh dekho...woh kinaare koi kuch khaseed ke ja rahe..chalo jaakar dekhta hai...
On the banks of the river they find Lira pulling her dog to the shore...She explains that her dog hasn't been feeling good since dinner and she believes that the sea air will do him good. Daya bends down and checks the dogs pulse and after sometime says that the dog has been doped.Someone has targeted the Johnson family that night..They ask her for the room number and rush together...
Will the CID team be able to save the Johnson? Who is this desperate Marcus who will go to any heights to achieve hi goals?

PART 2

The trio run to the room where the Johnsons are staying..And they find the door ajar.As they move in they see that the room is in a mess and there are evident signs of struggle.
ACP: Arre yahaan toh hatapaayi ke nishaan hai aur koi dikh bhi nahi raha hai
Abhi : Haan sir (turns back) Areye ladki kahaan gayi lira?
Daya: Ghabrakar chali gayi hogi
Arre ye kya hai..ye toh ek  crew ke laash hai aur iske haath main koi kaagaz ka tukda hai
ACP:Dikhao dekhte hain kya hai isme?
Ye toh ek side par saare paasengers aur unke details hain aur dusri side pe humaare team ke log ke saare details hai
Gerald : Tall , dark, very sharp, slightly conclusive, able runner
Pierre: Fond of women , weakness for wine, Highly experienced and intelligent officer
Carrie : A very strong woman, mentally sharp , a karate champ, well versed in peoples thinking

Aur ye dekho...dusri taraf jo Johnsons ke naam hai wahaan se phaadi gayi hai...ye apne aap ke baare main koi information chupaane chahthe hai
Abhi:Ye koi victims nahi hai sir..khud bhigaade hue criminals hai ye
ACP: Ho saktha hai aur ye dekho ...iske haat main usi tarah ke coral hai jo uski ladki ke haat main thi...Ye Marcus jo koi bhi hai yahaan par hi hai..humaare aas paas...aur agar jaldi nahi doondh paayenge toh bohot khatra ho sakthi hai

They go and submit the evidence to the doctor for analysis and they notice Lira also has been missing from then and wonder if she's also involved.

Carrie was walking along the river coast when she heard a unusual breathing...following her instincts she traced the location of the sound to narrow cave in a distance.Lay in a pale white dress bloodied badly was Lira , her neck strangled with fish net and coral clenched in her fist... also on her body were tiny grey hairs...and Carrie ran back to call the doctor...

Doctor examines the body to reveal that the hairs are from a wig and hence lead no clear clue to the killer.He estimates that the time of death is between five to six hours ago which determines the fact that the trio were the last to see her.It was highly possible that she ran away because of something she saw rather than because she was involved in the crime. But however the fact that a cabin man was killed in the same way as the killer killed women is puzzling to them.They order for a further inspection of the bodies and a detailed post mortem as they wonder what is happening.
Carrie was a light sleeper and the extra dose of the coffee she had in the evening was doing no good to put her to sleep and she dressed up and walked out of the room and strolled across the hotel's wide corridors.As she looked up at the sky with the moon she reminded herself that the whole world wasnt as gruesome as her profession.For just few days ago, she knew she had come here to exploit a world reknowned terrorist...a man who was using people for his experiments as they were guinea pigs... 
She continued walking and she halted in front of one of the rooms she heard water gushing and and on the floor was kneeling a man holding a razor sharp blade and  breathing heavily on a corpse.Then she realised what she was trying to do and as she bent further into the room , she saw not a man , but a cruel smile which were indicative of his manovelent schemes and then he jerked his head up to see her ...and she stood frozen to the spot

The man finished jerking Carrie in the lounge and her body was rapidly hardening...he  covered her with a fishnet and a coral...he would complete dealing with her the next night..

Jean was not a very indulgent person, but the diamonds she had seen today were breathtaking and she had impulsively bought them.And she woke up from her sleep just to cast a second glance at them when she heard a scratching on the window, like that of a cats paw and she saw Johnson wildly making guestures at her to open the door.Since the entire members and herself were under the impression that he was a criminal , she refused and turn her back on him and pretended as if he didnt exist.That is why she missed the window which splashed on the window and the man who shot him grinned in ecstasy.

The doctor after analysis told them that some bodies , had minute traces of silicon in them but due to the excessive cuts in the bodies which have been made with a surgical instrument , he cant analyze completely.

The man stood in the room window wondering who had been the destined to hide the chip containing the evidence in their bodies.Of all the chips he had found were dummies...and he would not rest until he found it...

Miranda could not help but admire herself in the mirror...she was a beauty , she thought and she had made enough money to retire.Except last week when she had a minor accident she was rushed to a multispeciality hospital and she had a feeling she had seen most of the others who were staying at the resort here.But yes, she was stupid and could be easily mistaken. And after returning from the hospital with a heart wrenching bill, she had joked to her friends how the doctor almost looked scared and in the least like a doctor. 

It was true that Dr. Martin working at the Roger's Multispeciality Hospital was resting in the grave for less than a week, but he had completed his earthly duties for the benefit of mankind.He was sure that the chip he had stored in one of his very fond patients would soon expose the terror to mankind, and he had sent a messenger to Cairo to inform her to place herself in the hands of the CID forensic expert or she had a serious threat to life.He did not have enough time on earth to verify if his little messenger had delivered performance.

Miranda flinched as a bullet past her ear and cracked the mirror in front of her into smithereens.And then she decided if she continued to stay , she would follow the fate of the mirror.So she decided to get help from the team members , Mc.Davy , who was one of the chivalrous men  and had promised the beautiful madame help whenever she wanted.So she blindly ran without pausing to think or turn back.

Mc.Davy sat in his room patiently waiting for the last fly to walk into the spider den .And when he heard footsteps he smiled , his teeth flashing violently and he brandished his knife.

In the trio's room , Abhijeet sat thinking and his brows had knit in worry.He had seen something critical but could not recall what it was...
Daya: Woh Mc.Davy...
Abhijeet: Daya tumhe yaad hain ki woh kaagaz joh phat gayi thi...uske ek taraf hum logon ke naam the aur dusri taraf passengers ke.Hum pehle soch rahe the ki Johnson hi khooni hai par woh toh mar gaya ...par humaare dhyan is baat se hat gayi ki wahaan par Mc.Davy ki naam jo thi wahaan se bhi kata hoga..shaayad woh chupa raha ho humse?
Daya: Sochne pe lagta hai daal main kuch kaala hai...chalo dekhkhar aate hain...shaq hi toh sahi, check karne main kya buri baat hai?

Mc Davy was kindly comforting the damsel in distress who kept talking in panic and refused to take the coffee he was offering her, with its sweet painkillers of death.One last time he asked her to take it and she was about to sip it when there was a knock...and then several together...he was about t grab Miranda by her hand and press in the injection when door flung open ...he picked up his last weapon...words...

ACP Pradyuman  was sitting with the doctor , discussing the evidences when the doctor claimed that the in all the deaths he had found a chemical named Mylosin , which is generated in patients with a history of chronic lung disease in times of hypertension... and it did not take much time to figure out who it was and they hurried to the room with Gerald and Pierre..

Daya and Abhijeet were surprised to see Mc Davy and Miranda sitting calmly and talking , but they called him aside to clarify a few aspects and he sweared he had nothing to do with them... he continued to say that he believed it possible that Miranda was involved and had called her for interrogation...and then he offered them coffee...

Miranda found her vision becoming rapidly hazy and she believed it was due to lack of sleep or because of her eye lenses...and before she blacked out, she saw Pradyuman and the doctor storm in , a brief and stern interchge of words and then finally a encounter in which Mc Dacy was shot.Poor man , she thought..

When the doctor had extracted the chip from Miranda's ankle, they found that it had several articles of how young women were persecuted and shot by a womaniser who was believed to have been in high power.It did not take them long to find out who it was.

Mc.Davy was rapidly sinking in the hospital and he had no idea of what they would do to him when he recoverd, if he ever did...quickly, he bit the capsule in his locket and with one glance at the woman he had truly loved ,his mother, he gave up his life..He prefferred honour over death...


Here ends the first case...see you in the next in another exotic case in a brand new avatar...
Hope you Liked this and Please give your valuable feedback ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Edited by nsapo - 10 years ago
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lovely part๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
looking forward that how freddy is gonna lead the team๐Ÿ˜†
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Looks amazing, Apoorva. ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ Will read it soon!