What you mean to me!! (Page 112) New Poem - Page 2

Originally posted by: KS_Shreya

OMG Sonali that was definitely an awesome story!

Everything was so lovely. Investigation, casual conversation, team distribution!

A classic and epic story!

Greatly written Sonali di.. seriously your story reminded me of the golden era.
Loved every bit of it.
I am astonished as to why you didn't write earlier.. Anyways keep writing more. 😊

Originally posted by: DUOlover123

Greatly written Sonali di.. seriously your story reminded me of the golden era.
Loved every bit of it.
I am astonished as to why you didn't write earlier.. Anyways keep writing more. 😊

Read the promo just now
Looks like an interesting story
Will read the full story soon

First of all, CONGRATULATIONS on your first story 🤗

Originally posted by: Soni.

Read the promo just now
Looks like an interesting story
Will read the full story soon

Originally posted by: neha_dna

First of all, CONGRATULATIONS on your first story 🤗

I know it feels great... 😃

 

I read the promo...

Wow...!! Really interesting...!!! 😃

 

Will read the story soon...😊

Just started...I must say...it's so nice to see how you took the story to a flashback. 😃

Frankly if the story were completely Asha era, it would have been a bit toughto digest. So, I love it this way. Will continue now...😊

Woow!! Really nice story sonali.. 👏 👍🏼 You mixed current era with golden era so nicely.. Loved to read this unique style of story telling. Daya's concern towards his car, team and all; abhi's concern towards asha and the whole team which is really a family and A class CID officers all is really lovely to read.. The short moments with complete invistigation made me remind all those lovely cases.. Keep it up. I will be waiting for more stories from you now 😃   

Finished it! 😃


this was lovely...dil khush ho gaya padhke...never read an Asha story before. 😊

When Freddie and Sudhakar were talking about Ramsay's stories, for a second I imagined him shouting 'kahiiinnn usss bbbunnggaalllooowww mmmeeeiinnn AAATTMMMAAA tohh nahiin' and receiving a reprimand from ACP! 🤣 But this was Asha era Freddie...who wasn't into tomfoolery.


All the while I could see Asha in black jeans and a loose shirt and a short plait...ring on index finger...she was awesome. 😊


Lovely story...do keep writing. 👍🏼