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gadhadada
gadhadada @gadhadada IF-Addictz
Anniversary 13 Group Promotion 8 + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by Sonali.



 Ohh my God GD... You read it in just one go... 😲 Thank you... 😃 I am so happy you enjoyed... I was having this story in mind long back but was scared to touch the classic team and this brigade is tough to manage... 😡 

Anyways coming to your doubt Yes she touched her face but the Venom did not come in contact with her mouth when she screamed she touched her cheeks not lips. It did not go into her body and thus she was uninfected...

Thank you so much for critical appreciation... I so loved it... thank you sweetheart  🤗


yaar, U really derserves such Applause...😳
About that Doubt, but boss, through Swaet Pores, could not Venom absorb inside the Body😉acha just one Confusion also, as U said that RICHARD died due to that Vase Hit, so why BHISAMBARH and VISHAL use that VENOM in everything present in that Room...😕
Awww, now SONALI, GD ki PITAI kr day gi...😆
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Sonali.
Sonali. @Sonali. IF-Dazzler
Anniversary 10 Group Promotion 4 Engager 1
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by snehal.


Woow!! Really nice story sonali.. 👏 👍🏼 You mixed current era with golden era so nicely.. Loved to read this unique style of story telling. Daya's concern towards his car, team and all; abhi's concern towards asha and the whole team which is really a family and A class CID officers all is really lovely to read.. The short moments with complete invistigation made me remind all those lovely cases.. Keep it up. I will be waiting for more stories from you now 😃   

Aww thank you so much Snehal... I am so glad you I could make you happy... I will try my level best to write more... Just require such motivation
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Sonali.
Sonali. @Sonali. IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by visrom


Just started...I must say...it's so nice to see how you took the story to a flashback. 😃

Frankly if the story were completely Asha era, it would have been a bit tough to digest. So, I love it this way. Will continue now...😊

Yaa I thought a lot over the begining and then came to this conclusion... 😃

Originally posted by visrom


Finished it! 😃


this was lovely...dil khush ho gaya padhke...never read an Asha story before. 😊 

When Freddie and Sudhakar were talking about Ramsay's stories, for a second I imagined him shouting 'kahiiinnn usss bbbunnggaalllooowww mmmeeeiinnn AAATTMMMAAA tohh nahiin' and receiving a reprimand from ACP! 🤣 But this was Asha era Freddie...who wasn't into tomfoolery. 


All the while I could see Asha in black jeans and a loose shirt and a short plait...ring on index finger...she was awesome. 😊


Lovely story...do keep writing. 👍🏼

Aww sacchi Dil khush huva yeh sun ke ki main aap ka dil khush kar payee😃... I am huge Asha fan so jhelne ko tayyar rehna 😛

Regarding Freddy I really liked him with Sudhakar... He was very different with him woh rapport kisi bhi aur ke saath nahi ban paya fir unka...

Regarding Asha even i imagined her while writing 😊




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Sonali.
Sonali. @Sonali. IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by gadhadada


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yaar, U really derserves such Applause...😳
About that Doubt, but boss, through Swaet Pores, could not Venom absorb inside the Body😉acha just one Confusion also, as U said that RICHARD died due to that Vase Hit, so why BHISAMBARH and VISHAL use that VENOM in everything present in that Room...😕
Awww, now SONALI, GD ki PITAI kr day gi...😆


Main Pitayi kar sakti hoon aap ki GD? Well regarding the doubt you are right... yes I take it... Thats the loophole of the story... I would like to know if there is any other too... 
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ANGELICEYES
Not Available @ANGELICEYES IF-Rockerz
Anniversary 11 Group Promotion 5 + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
Glad to see you back Sonali di after a long time🤗. But, what is it😉? A classic era episode WU or your first story di😉? Its simply a MASTERPIECE⭐️⭐️⭐️. While reading I felt the aura of classic era. A big round of applause for you👏👏👏. The idea of flashback was excellent..its a pleasure to see a story with Asha, Sudhakar. Your description, writing style ard fabulous. Truly loved the realistic, human touch in the story and those sweet interaction b/w team😳😳. A fast paced story with logical reasoning..loved the characterisation of Asha mam👍🏼👍🏼. You are really an talented, fantastic writer di⭐️⭐️. Keep writing and sharing more. But just one thing, why all the team members wore the gloves so long?? Black Mamba's Venom cannot penetrate the rubber gloves. So there is risk only if the venom comes in body internally. If Abhi sir and all removed the gloves allready then why Dr. Salunkhe told them to wash their hands? And did Daya sir drive the car wearing gloves.. I am confused😆.
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gadhadada
gadhadada @gadhadada IF-Addictz
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by Sonali.




Main Pitayi kar sakti hoon aap ki GD? Well regarding the doubt you are right... yes I take it... Thats the loophole of the story... I would like to know if there is any other too... 

awww, Thank you so much for Not Peeting GD...😆
Nahi Sonali, its Not an Loophole...😊
just an Error...😊
baaqi Story tou Boss hay hee Mind Blowing...👏👏👏
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misha.as
misha.as @misha.as IF-Sizzlerz
Anniversary 11 Group Promotion 6 + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
First of all, Congratulation on your first story... 😊 👏 🤗
It was definitely an awesome and amazin story...⭐️👏
Everything was so lovely... 👏 👏
Really interesting...⭐️ 👏
Investigation ⭐️ and ⭐️ team distribution...⭐️👏
Well done sonali...👏 👏 👏
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Sonali.
Sonali. @Sonali. IF-Dazzler
Anniversary 10 Group Promotion 4 Engager 1
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by ANGELICEYES


Glad to see you back Sonali di after a long time🤗. But, what is it😉? A classic era episode WU or your first story di😉? Its simply a MASTERPIECE⭐️⭐️⭐️. While reading I felt the aura of classic era. A big round of applause for you👏👏👏. The idea of flashback was excellent..its a pleasure to see a story with Asha, Sudhakar. Your description, writing style ard fabulous. Truly loved the realistic, human touch in the story and those sweet interaction b/w team😳😳. A fast paced story with logical reasoning..loved the characterization of Asha mam👍🏼👍🏼. You are really an talented, fantastic writer di⭐️⭐️. Keep writing and sharing more. But just one thing, why all the team members wore the gloves so long?? Black Mamba's Venom cannot penetrate the rubber gloves. So there is risk only if the venom comes in body internally. If Abhi sir and all removed the gloves allready then why Dr. Salunkhe told them to wash their hands? And did Daya sir drive the car wearing gloves.. I am confused😆.


Hey Angelic eyes… Thank you so much for your appreciation dear… 😃 Now coming to your doubts… All the members were not wearing gloves for long… it was only Asha who forgot to take off her gloves. However poison came on gloves while investigating. Salunkhe sir told everyone wash the hands as safety precaution and nothing else… And Daya sir was not wearing the gloves while driving… Hope your doubts resolved  😊




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Sonali.
Sonali. @Sonali. IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by misha.as


First of all, Congratulation on your first story... 😊 👏 🤗
It was definitely an awesome and amazin story...⭐️👏
Everything was so lovely... 👏 👏
Really interesting...⭐️ 👏
Investigation ⭐️ and ⭐️ team distribution...⭐️👏
Well done sonali...👏 👏 👏

Misha... Thanks a ton sweetie 😃
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Sonali.
Sonali. @Sonali. IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by .Nishi.


Amazing story sonali.


Thank You Nishi 😃
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