Originally posted by: ..mandy..This FF is so interesting Nidha n I already told u my views on it 😃 Ur a fantastic writer n I am certain u will do a great job 👏 The fact that we dont have any known fictional characters makes for a fresh change for all IF readers 😊 For me it defo is a welcome change. Coz when we read on FFs on a certain couple or show, the characters are already etched into our minds. That leaves little room for imagination. But here its new characters n they unfold as the story progresses n this would mark the sign of a true story teller ⭐️
Coming to the first chapter, I loved the equation between the three Blair siblings 😳 I am assuming Mayi is the lead n Theo is the quintessential dark shady guy here. Since ur the writer I am sure there's more to Theo than what meets the eye n Mayi is no damsel in distress. She is woman with a mind of her own which makes her stand out even in the crowd. I am waiting for their story to unfold 😊 Do update this one soon 🤗Great going sweetie 👍🏼 I will be interested to read anything u write 😳 as being ur reader I know u always weave the story around characters n this is something I look forward to while reading any story. Usually its always been the other way around. Story dictates the actions of the characters but for me consequences of the decisions that the characters takes moulds the story. Great start dear 👏
Originally posted by: dreamyjenniceAwsome nidha..I agree to mandy...we can imagine whoever we like and this hives you scope for experimenting as well...this is very good and I really like ego guy and girl hiving it back ti back...brilliant...do pm me next time and plzplz update fast...
Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--Okay, me liking this story Nidha :D
I was guessing that Mayi would be coerced into the marriage and there's a hint of a history between the two leads.
Continue soon and do PM me
Originally posted by: -juhi-lily-its really very interesting! I would love to read it!
Originally posted by: -Serendipity-hey Nidha,
well you know what even I have a soft spot for romanticism.
n trust me I LOVEDs. . this ..
what the liked the most . .??
the detailing .. .
each character is described as beautifully I m intrigued!!
and the various backgrounds . .
racial differences yet the fact that they are bound to each other
update soon!!
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