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alicia212
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow great story plz update soon
thanks for the pm
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bookworm-ALS--
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Posted: 10 years ago
awww! i feel bad for Mayi already kinda. she's landing herself into a pretty pickle
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing update Nidha. im really liking the story. Im sure with time Theo will discover this one hell of a woman Mayi is pretty amazing and i cant wait for that 😆 Mayis reaction, nervousness, her spilling the truth to her family everything was very beautifully written - natural. and her family seems so supportive on the contrary, Theo doesnt seem to have a good relationship with his mother at all. keep writing 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb update
Very well written

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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by -Serendipity-


awesome part Nidha. . .
the whole scenario was sooo natural n smooth. .
Theo feeling jealous of his sister for having a frnd like Mayi. .
Mayi's Nervousness
and finally spilling out the truth.  .
the family's Reactions were so beautifully portrayed.  .
n towards the end
when her mother assured her that they are there for her no matter what.  .
it touched my heart.  .
I almost cried!!
Awww! Sorry for making you nearly cry! I want to portray the difference between the Mayi and Theo's family. Next chapters will show that.
Thanks for the warm comments Radz. It's much appreciated.❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by prettyji


amazing
Thank you😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by shreya11mehra


Nice update
Thank you😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by bookworm-ALS--


awww! i feel bad for Mayi already kinda. she's landing herself into a pretty pickle
Fascinated with pickle's are we , noted the same word in your comment in LIYE😆
Jokes apart , yes Mayi is definitely in trouble. Coz no matter what , heart doesn't like staying in a defined path. Thanks hun
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by alicia212


wow great story plz update soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by Phoenix.Xeelan


Amazing update Nidha. im really liking the story. Im sure with time Theo will discover this one hell of a woman Mayi is pretty amazing and i cant wait for that 😆 Mayis reaction, nervousness, her spilling the truth to her family everything was very beautifully written - natural. and her family seems so supportive on the contrary, Theo doesnt seem to have a good relationship with his mother at all. keep writing 👏
Theo will get to see a different side of Mayi provided he doesn't get on her wrong side much😆 . As much as loving our dear Miss Blair can be , she can be just or even more angry. Theo's and Mayi's families are poles apart , will be shown in the upcoming updates.😊 Thanks dear
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