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Three years leap... woww... loved their hot nd romantic night... awsm updts ... cont soon nd take care...:)
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nice updates continue soon
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woww again triple updates
thank u sooo much
nd the updates are awsome
love thier romantic moments 
u write it very beutifully
update as u get time πŸ˜Š

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Awesome..!!! This is romantic and lovely..! Waiting for next..!
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read  all three parts


awesome  just love  the  way  you  explain their  feelings and  wow  virman romance  β˜ΊοΈ

loved   the  update  continue  soon  !!!
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Khushi please update this one also when you are free or give us a precap! 😊
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PART-109
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MAanvi come out from kitchen with cleaning her hands with napkin..nd walk towards that direction from virat playing guitar..
She reached at hall nd starts looking here nd there for virat bt she cannot find him in hall..
M-confuse..cutly-awaz to yahi se aa rahi hai..lekin virat hai kaha..nd she starts seaching for him..after few seconds music stoped..she stop sreaching for him nd stood at one place with placeing her hand on her hips..
M-virat...
No response
m-virat bahar aa jao plz
no response
m-virat
again no response
m-virat ye kya bachcho vali har kat hai?..she said little angrily
m-abt to continu-vi
bt she stoped as she felt two arms wrap around her nd someone lerned near her sholder..nd of course its virat...
V-she abt to continue when he come close to her nd hug her from back..complain like kid-kyu?..main nahi dikha to itni pareshan ho gai lekin jab mujhe room main akele chhod ke aa gai thi tab?..he said with nuzzing his face in her hair
/like in serial first day after virmaan scene-virat hug her from back when she stood in front of mirror/
M-his touch nd love always melted her..smile-haa to kya karti?..tum soa rahe the aur mujhe yaha kitchen ka kam bhi to karna tha..nd again like in serial she turn towards him with adjusting her hairs..bt as she turn he pull her close by wrapping his arms around her waist..
V-pul her close-kya maanvi ghar me itne saare nokar hai naa kaam karne ke liye..kabhi to apne ek lote husband ko time diya karo..
M-like in serial adjust his shirt on his sholder-aap bhul rahe ho mere ek lote husband kal sham se lekar aaj dupher tak main aap ke saath hi thi..
V-like in serial again pull her more close with jurk-achcha?..ask with smirk
M-nodded in yes..nd smile bt just then they hear door bell ringing..try to puss him nd come out from his hold bt he pull her back..-virat..
V-kya?
M-chhodo naa
v-shook his head in no
m-kya nahi?..virat shayad sab gurudvare se lot aye hai..
V-to?
M-to..to kya?..mujhe door open karna hai..
V-woh to koi nokar bhi kar dega..pull her more close
m-virat tumne apni sharm bech khai hai kya?
V-maanvi?
M-kya maanvi?..servent yaha se jayega to hume ase bich hall me dekhega nahi?..aur phir door open hote hi sabhi family vale ye open romace dekhenge nahi?
V-oh yeah point to hai..act like he got her..
M-viratt...she said irritatly..continue-tumna 4 saal pahele bhi idiot the aur aaj dady banne ke baad bhi idiot hi ho..
V-laugh adorably..
M-surprisly-viratt...ab idiot ki tarah has rahe ho?
V-with smily face-maanvi tum jab bhi mujhe idiot kaheti ho mujhe pata nahi kyu bahot achchha lagta hai..
M-again fargot all abt her anger..smile-achcha thik hai lekin ab to chhodo plz..
V-ha lekin abhi tak tumne mujhe morning wish nahi kiya pahele woh karo..
M-virat abhi lunch time ho chuka hai morning wish ka time nahi hai..chhodo..
V-no..jab tak morning kiss nahi milega tab tak ye vadhera foj ko house entry nahi milegi..
M-kya?
V-yes..ye puri foj naa har bar humare romanch ki band baja deti hai..
M-apni family ko ase koi kaheta hai?
V-to apne pati ko ase koi wait karvata hai?..ab jaldi se kiss-wiss karo aur maamla rafa-dafa karo..varna foj door tod ke humla kardedi..
Nd again they hear door-bell..
V-see..
M-she try to find excuse bt she know there is no use to argue with her idiot nd dramebaaz husband-okay fine..
She finally gve up which made smirk on her lips..he pull her more close nd she wrap her hands around his neck with pull herself up..in next second he press his lips with her gently which make her close her eyes..he rub his lips with her little..she felt same effect nd shiver in her body which she felt first time..she abt to pull back from kis bt before she parted her lips away he move his hand towards her neck nd hold her head from back in hairs nd pull her back in kiss..she again try to puss him to stop this kiss here bt as he is too involve in it he didnt gve her chance to step back..he imigeatly capture her lips with her nd starts kissing them passinotly..as his action take speed she also lost in his passion nd love like always..nd she left all struggling..
After few minutes they again heard twice door bell on door which make him come in reality..he also felt her need of air..he geltly puss himself little away nd look at her who breatching heavily..she looking too adorable with his effects..he smirk nd place all her hairs behind her ear nd brush them clrarly..
V-looking at her pink face-ab jao varna foj firing shuru kar degi..
M-as she hear him she open her eyes bt didnt look at him as she still shy nd nervouse in front of his love like newly wife..without wasting time she step away from him nd walk towards door hurridly with adjusting her lipstic nd saari nd all..
As she open door she find her whole family waited on door with making irritating face..
M-try to smile-i m sorry woh
bt before she could say further she cute off..
-mumma...with shoting her two small angles huged her legs...
Both-cutly..too innocence look at her with wide smile..
M-smile back..
Edited by Niaksharma - 10 years ago
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AS maanvi open door her kids come near her with running nd wrap ther tiny hands around her legs..
M-smile back to them nd wrap her hand around them..
Nash-her little nd sweet son-mumma maine aap ko bahot miss kiya..
Nivi-cutly..her litle bt naughty daughter-mumma maine bhi..
M-aur mumma ne bhi aap do no ko miss kiya..nd kiss on ther forhead..-look at everyone-aap..aap log abhi tak bahar kyu hai aaiye naa..
Nd gve them way to entered in room..
Dj-maanvi beta hum kab se doorbell baja rahe the itna waqt kyu laga?
M-walking with them-woh..woh dadu actually maina kitchen thi aur virat apne music ki rehsal kar raha to bell sunai hi nahi di..
Dj-achcha koi baat nahi..
Sw-maanvi ye prasad hai ise kitchen me rakhva do hum thoda fresh ho jate hai..bahot thak gaye hai aur bauji aap bhi chaliye thoda rest kar lijiye..
Dj-haa beta..
Kc-haa haa hum sab chalte hai..lunch me to abhi waqt hai..
All agree nd move towards there respective rooms..
Nivi-mumma...almost
m-haa..kya hua?
Nivi-humali molning kissi?...she said cutly...
Nash-meli bhi..
M-go on her knees-pull them close to her-pahele mumma ki morning kissi?...nd raise her cheeks towards them...
Both kids ecxitly gve quick kiss on her cheeks...
M-smile-dono apne papa pe gaye ho..
Nivi-woh to hai..smile widly..
Nash-ale lekin papa hai kaha?..he said with waving his hand in where pose..
M-arey yahi to the..she said with stood up from floor..
Nivi-don wally hum hai naa aapko papa dhun denge..she said cutly...
M-laughed at her innocence..-okay to aap papa ko dundh lo main tab tak aap ke lunch ready kar leti hu..aap ko bhuk lagi hogi naa?
Both kids nodded in yes..
Nash-hum ashe aye all ashe papa ko leke ate hai..he said in dramebaaz style..
M-smile-thik hai..
With this both kids run towards there room..with shoting...papa...
M-aram se..plz bhago mat..
She shook her head nd walk towards kitchen..
Otherside...
As maanvi walk towards door virat got call of dabbu who cannot come home with famlily as he got call from their music company so he left for studio..dabbu call him bcz of some work related stuff nd all..so virat recieve call nd walk towards his room..
V-just finish his call-haa chal thik hai main sham ko meeting me pachoch jaunge bye..nd he heard best voices...
Both kids..nash nd nivi-papa...shoting loudly...
Virat turn towards door imogeatly as he hear their voice..
V-smile widly nd throw his phone on bed nd go on his knees to welcome his kids with open his both arms in air as they entered in room-hey my bachchas..
Both kids jumped in his arms with full speed..papa...
For secound virat taken back bcz of coming speed bt he balanced him self..
V-hug him kids tightly-hey bachcha..papa kab se aap ka wait kar rahe the..-nd kisss on their forhead..
Nivi-sachchi?
V-muchchi my prinsess..he said withtouching her nose with his finger..
Nash-to phil humale saath babaji ke ghal kyu ni aye?
V-smile nd took them on bed nd joint them on bed too-kyuki papa ko thoda kaam tha..
Nivi-ohh..papa apko kal laat(raat) bhi bahot sala kaam tha?
V-remenbring what work he do last night..-woh..yes..tha naa..bahot kaam tha..
Just then maanvi enter in room..
M-nivi...nash chalo jaldi se fresh hone chalo fir lunch karna hai naa..
All three look at her..
Nivi-stood up on bed-mumma maine to clean hu..see nd saw her hands to maanvi..
Nash-stood next to her-alle budhdhu..pata nahi hai lunch kalne se pahele haath wash kalte hai..he said with cute looks..
Nivi-put her hands on her small hips..narrow her eyebrows-bhai apko kisne bola ye?
Nash-proudly-dadi ne..
Nivi-achcha? To batao dinnal ke time pe?
Nash-open his mouth in o shap-alley woh to bataya hi nahi..look too innocent this convo..
Both virmaan giggling on this..
Nash-main abhi puch ke ata hu nd he abt to go bt maanvi stop her..
M-ruko..abhi nahi..abhi aap fresh ho jao lunch pe jab dadi ayegi tab puchlena..
Nash-pal mumma main bhul gaya to?
M-main yaad dila lungi..
Nash-all aap bhi bhul gaye to?
V-to hum yaad dila dange..he said with nivi nd laugh at this convo..this is normal for them..nash has always so many questions for them nd he is just like maanvi..perfect type..nd other side nivi..tottaly dady's prinsess..just like him..bindash nd care free..never like to fall hard rules..bt mumma's boy is always make her follow them like maanvi use to do with virat..both kids r life of virmaan...
A perfect sweet nd over joyed fileded family...big family with dadu..chacha-chachi..shalok..sia..swaminimom..virmaan nd their two piece of heart..nivi nd nash..their twince kids...who added hundrets of times more happines in their each nd every single moments...they hve perfect family..every day starts with happiness nd ended with happines..fightly..sharing..joking..romance..blessings..games..innocence..cutness..passion..love..care..protection..joy..smile..laughing..every positive wibes r present in this family nd also around them...
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too perfect family with no negativity...
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with only love in each relations...Edited by Niaksharma - 10 years ago
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PART-111
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VIrmaan gifted with all happiness of life...perfact life partners..perfact family..perfact life..they field heaven on earth in their house..
They celebrate each day as special day with cuteness innocence love joy smile laugh teasing caring nd all...
After few months...
M-tring hard to free her self..trying to puss him away-virraatt...plz...plz stop it...virat
she almost said in begging tone bt her crazy husband didnt gve attantion on her begging nd continue nuzzling nd kissing her neck to her collarbone..he holding her from waist tightly close to him..
V-puss her hands away from his chest nd pinned with bedshit with goan irritatly..still nuzzling her neck-maanvi...maanvi plz dont be mood ruiner naa...nd bit on her crook of neck.
M-ahh..virat..nd finally she free her hand nd puss him little away which make him face to her..continue-kya kar rahe ho?
V-come closer to her face-kyu?..jo kar raha hu woh tum feel nahi kar rahi?..he said shamlessly..continu-now let me finish it
m-imigeatlt shout-no...
V-why?..mood spoiler banna jaruri hai?
M-virat main mood spoiler nahi balki tumhara mood aaj kal bahot ganda raheta hai..
V-haaww..achcha ji..ab apko apne pati ka pyar ganda lagta hai?
M-maine ye kab kaha?
V-abhi to kaha..
M-kab?
V-tumne mere mood ko ganda kaha naa?
M-haa
v-to mera mood abhi romence ka hai to romance means pyar aur indirectly mera pyar ganda hai right?
M-just get confuse with all this-virat...she said irritatly..plz naa abhi ye blackmailing nahi mujhe bachcho ko ready karne jana hai..birthday party suru honevali hai..chalo naa..
V-kya yaar maanvi bachcho ko mom nd chachi ready karlengi nd tum mujhe ready karlo..smirk
m-tumhe?..tum to ready ho virat plz naa..
V-achcha thik hai lekin
m-lekin?
V-come near to her lips-ek kiss?
Before maanvi rpl to him he bruss his lips with her..nd took her in long kiss..
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Nivi-papa...
Nash-mumma..
Both kids shouted from out side of their with runing towards their room..
As virmaan here their voice both hurriedly parted away from kiss..virat imigeatly stood up from top of maanvi nd adjust her blazer nd hair..while maanvi also stood up from bed nd adjust herself in front of mirror..her saari nd hairs..she hurrieldy hide new nd fresh love bit which he recently gve her nd clean her lipstick..
Nash nd nivi-mumma...papa..both entered in room..
V-hey kiddo relax kya hua ase bhag ke kyu aa rahe ho?
Nivi nd nash catch their heavy breath..
V-het btw aap dono bahot cute lag rahe ho..he said with admiring his kids in their birthday dresses..
Nivi-kaha papa..dekhona mela hail clip lag ni laha..pouted with showing him his hair clips..too cutly..
Nash-all mumma dekho naa meli tie bhi ni bandh rahi hai..he also saw her his tie..too innnocent+cute..
M-to kya hua?..aap abhi chhote ho tie ki kya jarurat hai? Aur nivi aap ke hair band hai na baby to clip rahene do..
As maanvi say this virat noticed sad faces of their kids..
V-pick them up in his arms-arey arey mere ek lote twins apne birthday ke din koi sad hota hai kya?
Both nodded in no..
V-phir..
Nash nd navi-pouted-hume ye pahenna tha..almost make crying..
M-okay okay okay plz roa mat mumma hai na abhi pahena degi..nd she make wear tie to nash..while virat wear hair clip to nivi..as virat always dressed his prinsess nd maanvi to her chemp nd also virat still didnt know how to wear tie..
Nivi-when virat dressing her..narrow her eyes..looking at his lips..shouted loudly which make virat bake atep away-mumma..
M-nash-virat..imigeatly look at her..
M-kya hua nivi?
Nivi-complain to her cutly-mumma apne kaha tha main aapki liptik nahi laga sakti lekin papa ne to lagai hai..
M+V-as she said this both look at wachother with widen eyes...maanvi look at his lips..gve angry glare to him..he fargot to wipe her lipstick from his lips..nd other side virat wipe his lips with his finger nd find her peach colourd lipstick marks..he bit his toungh nd gve sorry look to maanvi..
Nash-come near to virat nd shoot his hand-papa..
V-look down
Nash-put his hand on his hip-aapne mumma ki liptik kyu lagai?
V-look at maanvi for help..maanvi look away..
Nivi-paa bolonaa..
V-woh..woh actually na tumhari mumma ko kaise laga te hai woh sikha raha tha..
Nash-nivi-still not convinced..
V-ab ae look kya de rahe ho?
Nash-possasively-aapne meLi mumma ko kiss kiya?
M-open mouth..
V-haa to?
M-virat..kya
v-cute off-kiddo main apka papa hu aap mere nahi so be my bachcha not baap..
Nash-mumma baap kya hota hai?
V-chuk mere baap ye KBC baad me karna pahele part me chale?
Before kids starts new searching game maanvi intreped..
M-ha ha chalo chalo bate badme..
Nd make them walk out from room..
M-wisper near virat-tum idiot hi rahoge ab lipstick saaf karo aur niche aao..she said left room..virat also clean his lips nd follow them...nd they celebrate their another memerable day of their life..
ITS DESTINY ONLY WHO COME AS MISTACK BUT THEIR LOVE MAKE THEIR SESTINY TO COME BACK...
END OF THIS STORY
HOPE U LIKE
...-...STORY LINE BY...LEKHA RANI...
Edited by Niaksharma - 10 years ago