AarYa OS "You Are My Rain"...Chapter-5, page-55 - Page 4

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

Can I call you Vina?

You've no idea what it means to me to read a comment from you. You are not only reading but also appreciating my work. And for a writer like me it's means a lot. As it helps in boosting my confidence.

Actually I needed a break and to relax my mind before working on MTB again. And I'm so happy this track came into my mind, as it's not at all emotional. I fast forwarded all the emotional scenes in it.

I wanted to write that hospital scene for such a long time, but didn't knew where to write? So without wasting any single moment I used it in this and I'm happy that I finally got a chance to use it as it suited perfectly to this track.

And yes Shalu is the one who encouraged me, so this was my way of saying thanks to her.

And I've added your name in my buddy list, please accept it. So that you'll get PMs every time I make an update.

First of all belated birthday greetings to Shalu. Wish you many more wonderful years ahead.

Coming to the update, this was so beautifully written Nikki. As always I love the detail that you put into the update with the inclusion of the past incidents mixed with the present. Loved Vidhi and Aarti's conversation and i'm glad he overheard it as he knows that she too is confused with their current relationship. The sonography scene was simply beautiful with both of them seeing their baby for the first time along with Yash touching her tummy of his own free will. Looking forward to what is in store next.

Originally posted by: princess121993

Firstly a very belated happy bday shalu Di. May god blesses you with peace happiness success health and wealth. Always keep smiling...

You also got lucky as me... I also a got a beautiful OS gift from my lovely elder sis and now u got it too. And i must say u r more luckier...u know why? coz urs it two parts...hehehehehehe😆just kidding...keep enjoying nikki di's perfect gift for u...

now coming to the update...as usual di...it is so awesome...u seriously have a wow factor in this one...

loved the way u called tubelight for yash..its damn hillarious..but true too🤣

firstly i am so glad that u again showed that aarti's past was already revealed by herself only before returning from lalitpur...awesome thinking..n most importantly u decided to show yash trying to convince everyone and getting successful in forgiving aarti...

the most thing i loved abt this is SP and Gayu trying everything to bring aarya more closer...in a way they knew that mumbai is the only place which can now bring their son n DIL more closer after all the misunderstandings were over...loved that scene...

i loved the conversation of vidhi and aarti...aarti scared of going mumbai again..n vidhi convincing her not to be...awesome scene...n u added a cherry on the cake by making yash listen to their conversation which made him in a way realize that aarti is still a bit scared of him due to the pot mumbai incident..he slowly started realizing his changed feelings for her...awesome job...

aarti trying to avoid to go mumbai by using her pregnancy condition...but our smart superman yashji had planned everything before as he knew what excuse his aartiji will make..waah...aaj toh i m full laatu on this yashji...hehehehehe

the use of rain for the reason of his hatred before and the reason of his liking now...awesome...very awesome

omg...the precious sonography scene...yash calling "our baby"...it is so touchy...had a wide smile on my face with tears in my eyes

so no complications...n yay aarya going to mumbai...waiting for the surprise scene u r mentoning in the precap...cannot wait di..do update soon...will be waiting

once again...a very happy bday shalu di...enjoy ur day

Originally posted by: Abie10

Happy belated bday dear! 😊

Woohoo! Nikki, this is brilliant 👏 👏 love the title as Rain plays so many roles in Aarya's life. 👍🏼

Yaay! Mumbai again! Yash is glad on SP's suggestion to take Aarti but Aarti is a bit reluctant as to what happened the last trip. I so love how Aarti share her fears with Vidhi on going back to Mumbai and yash heard everything. Haha, Aarti wants to tell all doctor won't allow her for long distance travel but yash ji did his silence move. 😆

Haye that hospital scene with yash touching her tummy that moment and seeing the babies movement was so blissful. Hehe, the doctor was bold making Aarya blush. 😉 Finally Aarti is fully fine having normal pregnancy!

Hmm, Aarti finally agrees to go. Can't wait for the next part with Uss Raat and the surprise. 😳

Nikki you never fail to amaze me with each of your stories. Fabulous stuff! ❤️ 🤗

Originally posted by: kratzyfan

Nikki,a very very very lovely story👏👏👏...describing yash n aarti's feelings..😊..

when will our tube light yash babu improve😉...he can feel stirrings inside😆😳...still can't understand his feelings for aarti..😆.

LOVE...i think this word is really disturbing him..or it's actually effecting him😳

what a bliss a couple can have more than a sonography test...seeing their sign of love❤️ growing...glad that u mentioned this for which i felt very happy visualizing our aarya in this scene...😳😳🤗

thanks to aarti.she agreed...and we r ready for the surprise😉...of course i know it would be sweet...😃.

thanks for such a sweet update..🤗.

 from where r u getting this power dear❓😳...u have to do ur daily duties...already two works in hand...n this is the third one especially for a sweet friend😳...u not only write the stories but make the characters live in ur story👏👏...that's so wonderful of u...love u ❤️...

keep rocking👍🏼...but take care of ur health too😊

Originally posted by: Josmi01

very nice update nikki.It should be a surprise for shalu.good luck for ur friendship.