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Love at first sight: ROSID FF (Part 10) 13/03/14

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Posted: 10 years ago

This is the first time im writing a story so sorry for the mistakes.
 
A girl was going to the mandir. She was so beautiful that all guys eyes r on her.
In the temple, she is praying with her wonderful eyes closed.
Girl: matarani, today is my result day. Please make me pass.
In that same time, a guy rang the temple bell.She turned to see who was that. But she couldn't see that person. So she turned back and continued her prayer.
Girl:thank u so much for this bell matarani.im reassured. And tomorrow is my didi's engagement day. Im sure jiju will keep my didi happy. Most important that  didi and jiju love each other so much. Hope everything will be fine.  
 The guy is with his all family members to thank god that his business is going well after a long critical period in business. 
Guy and his family r praying. The girl finished her prayer, she is passing next to the guy when her dupatta touched slightly the guy's face. He was lost with that when the girl's dupatta left his face, he came to his sense and turned to see who was tat girl. The girl was going when a little girl fell down in front her and she went near her and she helped her to get up. 
Girl: r u ok? Are u hurt?
Little girl: no im alright. Thank u.
Little girl hugged that girl and kissed her on her cheek. Little girl hurried to join her mother. During this time, the guy was watching this scene and he mesmerized by her beauty and her cuteness with that child. Suddenly someone hit him; in a split second he lost sight of that girl. He runs to look for her.
Guy (in the mind): y r u searching her? Y r u doing this?????????  U had never watched any girls in ur life ?? y this girl? 
Someone calling: prem, where is siddhant? Im searching him where is he?
Prem : ma don't worry. Im going to look for him.
Guy was still searching that girl. When someone touched his shoulder, he jumped up and turned.
Guy: prem u scared me!
Prem: SIDDHANT r u ok? What r u doing here? Ma searching u.
Siddhant: ha im ok. Come on. Let's go.
Siddhant and his family left the temple.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yayy me first๐Ÿ˜›

Wow I loved it! Mandir scene was well written, don't quit...continue soon๐Ÿ˜ƒ


Thanks for the PM๐Ÿ˜ณ


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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome start sakthi ๐Ÿ˜ƒ Loved the intro of rosid ๐Ÿ˜ณ Waiting for the next part. continue soon ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Originally posted by: sandraj

Awesome start sakthi ๐Ÿ˜ƒ Loved the intro of rosid ๐Ÿ˜ณ Waiting for the next part. continue soon ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Thank u so much for ur comment sandra Embarrassed im glad that u liked it.  i ll continue soon  ๐Ÿ˜›
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Originally posted by: nina282

Please continue

ok ill continue soon๐Ÿ˜›
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome start
please continue
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nice starting sakthi๐Ÿ˜Š...keep it up๐Ÿ‘...all the best๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ...and thanks 4 te pm...๐Ÿ˜ŠEdited by shikhanair - 10 years ago
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Great start Shakti, continue and pls update as soon as u can. tks for the pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
its awesome sakthi...

pls do continue...
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Nice start sakthi๐Ÿ˜›... Please do continue...All the best๐Ÿ˜Š