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ABHIYA FF: "SOULMATES" PT: 27 on pg:137 (7/9) - Page 4

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Hello dears,
Thanks for ur lovely comments nd likes...
I want to tell u something about ff dat d whole concept nd storyline is different bt 

some scene will be similar to d show...
okk!!! here goes d 1st part...hope u all enjoy it...


                                        





1st part

Pia's P.O.V

"Pia... Pia... wake up it's 8 in d morning u will late for college..." i heard panchi 

shouting on me as usual...i slowly open my eyes adjusting it to sunrays...i sit up nd 

spread my arms welcoming another day of my life...

"pia did u wake up or not???" urggh panchi fatty always shouting only "yuppp i m 

awake nw u can stop shouting on me..." i watch as my room door opens nd she 

comes in  "wat??? i m not shouting on u...let me inform u its 8 nw nd u hv to go 

wake up abhay also...nd if u will be late today also so don't blame me nd abhay..." 

she speaks in anger nd it's her daily morning dialogue...

I give her angry luk nd replied back "i don't blame u it's always abhay's fault dat we 

get late fr college nd btw u r my sis or his???"

She gve me evil smile nd said "obviously his sister.." i threw a pillow on her face nd 

she zoom away frm my room nd i shouted back "yeah abhay's soul sista so just go 

nd wake him up..."

I hate panchi sometime bt not really just when he takes abhay's side nd defend him 

though she is my elder sister...ok  nw i hv to get ready fr college nd hv to wake up 

my bad boy abhay raichand also...
 
I dressed like always wearing my pink top nd jeans nd let my curly hair free...coming 

downstairs i watch everyone is waiting for me only for breakfast...i  wish gud 

morning to mom nd dad nd showed tongue to panchi nd sit beside her..."pia u will 

be late today also..." i heard mom saying dis to me means she to thinks its my 

fault...i luk at mom with puppy face nd otherside dis fatty smirking again...i mouthed 

panchi saying "i will watch u later fatty..." nd she bid gud bye to mom dad nd 

shouting on me she left for college "see u soon my little sis..."

I ate quickly as i hv to rush to raichand house in my neighbourhood only nd wake up 

abhay...yup raichands r very close to my family when i was born here in dehradun 

after some years raichands come here in our near by house nd both family developed 

a very close nd friendly relations...nw u  get y panchi defend abhay becoz we 3 

grown up together only...we played, figts, eat nd sometime sleep togethr bt in 

childhood not nw...

Me nd abhay r like tom nd jerry sometime very close friends or most time enemies... 

as i walk in house it is more like mansion just like my house nd i ring d 

doorbell...ughh it's 8.30 nd we hv college at 9 i think today also i will miss my 1st 

lec...finally door opens...

"gud morning pia come in..." haseena aunty speak up i wish her back nd ask her "did 

he wake up or not aunty???" just gving me poor luks she speak "no pia he still 

sleeping... i think he is waiting for u only t wake him up in ur style..." i nodded to 

aunty nd run upstairs to his room cursing him...

Haseena aunty abhay's mom she is really nice bt her nature is little bit weird means 

1st she nd uncle always wear black dress i really don't knw y bt frm chilhood i never 

saw dem in usual or colourful dressing...so something fishy about dem bt let it be it 

didn't bother me...

I open his room door directly entering as no use of knocking...see sleeping like 

kumbhkaran..."abhay wake up...abhay!!!" i shook him by shoulder bt he catch up my 

hand nd he is murmuring something let me hear..."babes where r u giong come 

here..." wat d hell..hmm he is dreaming about girls nw see mr bad boy wat i going to 

do wid u...

I turn my head to near by table nd saw a water jug nd dat's it i wanted dis only...i 

took d jug nd "SPLASH" pour d whole water on his face... he shouted like mad "wat 

d f**k..." my mouth wide open hw can he say such bad words...he get up immediately 

nd giving deadly luks to me he speaks up "pia wat was dat...r u gone mad???"

"yupp!!! mr bad boy i m mad on u...here i m getting late fr college nd u r dreaming 

about those bimbos nd also pulling me in ur dreams...dats i y did dis..now get up nd 

be ready i m waiting downstairs..." i told him as angrily as i can becoz anger is not in 

my nature...he got up frm bed cursing me under his breah bt i can hear him saying 

"yeah i was hving such a beautifull dream wid my girls bt u spoiled it...always 

jealous of me ms. innocent...huhh!!!"

I walk out of d room knowing he will be cursing me whole time he will get ready bt 

he deserves dis...i walk downstairs nd sit in living room...

It's passed 15 mins bt he is not ready yet...i knw u will be thinking y i dont go college 

by my own...becoz our parents locked up me wid him...actually a bad incident 

happen wid me on my 3rd day of college...as i was going college by my own my car 

it broke up on highway only nd as city is covered wid jungles only so it was like 

curfue on road...

After sometime some bad guys pass over frm their nd seeing me alone dey started to 

misbehave wid me...bt as i m lucky abhay was also going for college only nd he 

saved me frm dem...after dat incident i was very scared so our parents decided we 

will go together only nd den it all started me locked up wid him nd daily missing my 

1st lec...




Ok 1st part completes here...sorry if u find it short nd boring...bt it was just intro part...so plzzz hit d like button nd share ur views hw u like pia...

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome Update Suru dear!! 👏 👏 ⭐️ Loved it alot.❤️
Pia's pov was wonderfully written. 😊
OMG Panchi and Abhay are like bro-sis 😲 😉 😆
And I loved that fatty and lil sis interaction! 😆 Cute Sisters Pia and Birdie!! 😛 😳
And Aww Abhay dreaming about other girls 😲 😆 Poor Pia 😆 Waise I loved Abhiya's bonding here,They are like teasing friends and enemies. 😊
Haseena and Chand Are Vampires?! 😲 😉 😃 What about Abhay?! 😉 😛 😳
I'm waiting for My Sid's entry very eagerly?! 😳 😆
Give some updates from Abhay's POV too!!😊
Pls Cont Soon!!😊 😳 😳
Thanks for the PM!!😃 🤗 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: janvie

Awesome Update Suru dear!! 👏 👏 ⭐️ Loved it alot.❤️
Pia's pov was wonderfully written. 😊
OMG Panchi and Abhay are like bro-sis 😲 😉 😆
And I loved that fatty and lil sis interaction! 😆 Cute Sisters Pia and Birdie!! 😛 😳
And Aww Abhay dreaming about other girls 😲 😆 Poor Pia 😆 Waise I loved Abhiya's bonding here,They are like teasing friends and enemies. 😊
Haseena and Chand Are Vampires?! 😲 😉 😃 What about Abhay?! 😉 😛 😳
I'm waiting for My Sid's entry very eagerly?! 😳 😆
Give some updates from Abhay's POV too!!😊
Pls Cont Soon!!😊 😳 😳
Thanks for the PM!!😃 🤗 🤗



thnxxx dear...
nd yup i made abhay nd panchi bro nd sis...dr sids nd entry u hv wait dear...
u guessed right about chandeena...