Poem: *Feelings that needed Justice!*

Hey! 😳

I'm Monika. A 13 years old girl from Spain who is raising her voice with her poem against the Delhi Rape Case and another rapes cases in India.

I wrote this poem on yesterday, when I heard that the culprits are sentenced to death, and I'm glad they are, they don't deserve to live... The 17 years old rapist should be killed too... but look... he's only sentenced to a three years in a reformatory!  🤔

I hope you like this poem, this is my first ever poem. Okay first no, I've wrote poems in school and all... but this one, is directly from my heart! It's from the victim's POV. 😃

Writer: Monika [Me]
Proof-readers: My mom, my friends [Pooja and Ravneet], my Chaitu di [Eccentrica], my Producer [Tvpal007], Keshu di [.Nightingale...] and Gunjan di [..Gunjan..]. Thanks guys! 🤗

*Feelings that needed Justice*

Jab...

Bebas thi main,

Lachaar thi main.

Besharam the woh,

Befikar the woh.

Jab...

Gambhir thi main,

Besaharah thi main.

Beparwah the woh,

Gunhegaar the woh.

Aaj...

 Mujhe garv hai,

Mujhe sukun hai.

Unhe darr hai,

Unhe dard hai.

 

Aaj jab,

 Unko sazaa milegi.

Aaj tab ,

Meri aatma ko mukti milegi.

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I hope you liked it, this is my first ever poem, so sorry for any mistakes! 😳

PMs will be sent later! 😉

I can do nothing but pray for her, and all the girls who suffered in India.

Thanks for wasting your time  reading this! 😊

Your loca,

Monika!

Edited by -MonikaSobti- - 10 years ago

wow moni..nice..loved it😳 ... TRUE DAT 😔

You've always been vocal about this issue Moni and I've admired you for that. And this poem only exemplifies what your thoughts are and as much as the words are heartrending they stand true.
Edited by Eccentrica - 10 years ago

You brought tears to my eyes with this. Lovely poem. Edited by 1chilly - 10 years ago

i had said it before na it's really beautifully written 😃👏

Edited by ..Gunjan.. - 10 years ago

Moni darling 🤗

Great Job Moni. 👍🏼
Beautifully Written. 👏

Wow Kiddo.. Beautifully Written 👏
Loved It 😃

Wow monika what can i say? I hv no words js amazing amazing i js loved it 👏 👏

Very nice poem Monica. I loved it ,very apt. May the girl's soul rest in peace. I hope someone hangs the other(17 year old culprit) before he is out reform center.