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Posted: 10 years ago
beautifully written 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
Good Poem Monu, that you have written and dedicated to her. 👏    👍🏼 Edited by AbhiLovesShreya - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: -MonikaSobti-

Hey! 😳

I'm Monika. A 13 years old girl from Spain who is raising her voice with her poem against the Delhi Rape Case and another rapes cases in India.

I wrote this poem on yesterday, when I heard that the culprits are sentenced to death, and I'm glad they are, they don't deserve to live... The 17 years old rapist should be killed too... but look... he's only sentenced to a three years in a reformatory!  🤔

I hope you like this poem, this is my first ever poem. Okay first no, I've wrote poems in school and all... but this one, is directly from my heart! It's from the victim's POV. 😃

Writer: Monika [Me]
Proof-readers: My mom, my friends [Pooja and Ravneet], my Chaitu di [Eccentrica], my Producer [Tvpal007], Keshu di [.Nightingale...] and Gunjan di [..Gunjan..]. Thanks guys! 🤗


*Feelings that needed Justice*


Jab...

Bebas thi main,

Lachaar thi main.

Besharam the woh,

Befikar the woh.


Jab...

Gambhir thi main,

Besaharah thi main.

Beparwah the woh,

Gunhegaar the woh.


Aaj...

 Mujhe garv hai,

Mujhe sukun hai.

Unhe darr hai,

Unhe dard hai.

 

Aaj jab,

 Unko sazaa milegi.

Aaj tab ,

Meri aatma ko mukti milegi.

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I hope you liked it, this is my first ever poem, so sorry for any mistakes! 😳

PMs will be sent later! 😉

I can do nothing but pray for her, and all the girls who suffered in India.

Thanks for wasting your time  reading this! 😊


Your loca,

Monika!



Very nice Monika Ji...in simple words you have captured the trauma as well as triumph of justice in the end!👍🏼

Keep writing! 👏😛

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Posted: 10 years ago
beautifully written Moni 😳
keep writing more !
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Posted: 10 years ago
Very well written Moni. 😃
aree this was not time waste... It's the bitter truth. 😵
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved this poem Monika.
The Nirbhaya case is truly disheartening.
You should keep on writing poems!
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Posted: 10 years ago
What a beautiful poem
Excellent job Monica:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing Mona 👏
N he deserves to be sentenced to death !! 😡 

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Posted: 10 years ago
What a peom mouni😭 truely we cant even imagine what she must have gone through..😭😭
Hats off to u kid for understanding that at this small age ..

RIP now nirbhaya😭