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chapter 2

5 yeras back-

(Rishi works as a lawyer.He is one of the renowned name among d best lawyers after mandira's case,he got d chance 2 prove his talent n after dat wid his lots f hardwork he earned dis position)

In his room,

Rishi is sitting beside indira holding her hand.
Rishi- Smj mehesoos kijiye na dekhiye humara baby...humare baby ne aaj pehli baar kick kiya hai.
He places indira's hand on her womb who is 7 months pregnant n is in coma.
Smj ek baar mehesoos to kijiye humare baby ka kick. Kuch to boliye smj...
Rishi is happy dat his baby is growing inside its mother womb n soon it will b dere wid dem. He feels d kick of his baby n smiles n become sad at d nxt moment thinking dat he cant share his feelings f dis new happiness wid his better half.

Rishi to d baby- Hello baby...mai aapka papa hoon. Aapse bohoot pyar karta hoon aur aapki mumma bhi aapse bohot pyar karti hai. Aaj aapki wajah se hi shayad aapki mumma humare saath hain. Mera Bachha...aap mujhe promise karo ki aap mumma ko jyada pareshan nahi karoge or bachcha...ab aap hi apni mumma ko is gehri neend se jagao na. Dekho na ye to gehri neend mein so rahi hain mujhse baat bhi nahi karti aur pehle to humesha apni hitlergiri se mujhe jhadti rehti thi. Baby...aap to mumma-papa ke ladle ho na..aap hi meri help karo na mumma ko manane mein.unhe is neend se uthao na..

(The baby listens to whatever his father is saying.It kicks again to assure his dad dat it will help him)

Rishi again feels d kick.tears trickles down his eyes and he smils as if he understood d meaning of dat kick.he places a kiss on the womb where he felt d kick.baby feels its father's love and again kicks)

Rishi to d baby-Thanku bachcha...papa aur mumma aapse bohot pyar karte hain.ab aap jaldi se humari zindagi mein aa jao,phir hum sab ek saath rahenge aur phir aapki mumma ko bhi theek hona padega aapke liye..humare liye.

Rishi to indira- Smj aapne dekha humara baby abhise kitna samjhdaar hai. Smj ab aap jaldi se thik ho jaiye aur phir hum teeno khushi khushi ek saath pyar se rahenge.
(Rishi holds her hand n careses her forehead)

One Day
Rishi was sitting besides indira n talking to d baby.
Rishi- Aapko pata hai baby aapki mumma na pure chandani chawk ki hitler hai.sab unse darrte hain aur sabse jyada hitlergiri to wo mujhpar jhadti thi. Bechara mai ek lauti jaan ab kare bhi to kya kare,hitler ke aage aakhir kiski chali hai. Lekin mai bhi to RK hoon to kisi bhi cheez mein kam kaise ho sakta hoon.tumhari mummy ki ek nahi chalti thi mere saamne,jhat se pighal jaati thi.

(baby inside its mother's womb listening 2 everything whatever his dad is saying n kicks as if giggling at his talks ki kaise uske papa uski mummy ki chugli kar rahe hain)

Rishi feels happy after feeling d kick n place Indira's hand on d womb.
Suddenly Indira moves her limbs f her hands n a tear f drop fall from her eyes.
Rishi- (look at her hand in excitement) Smj..aap..aap..aapka haath...aapne abhi apna haath hilaya n den look at her face n see d tear.
Indira..Indira utho na...pls...aankhe kholo na n he wipes her tears n cups her face wid his palms. Indira utho na...ab to uth jao...and den places her palm on her womb...dekho mehesoos karo.pls kuch to bolo.

Rishi to baby- baby..aap pls apni mumma ko uthao.

Baby again kicks n dis time a slight curve appears on Indira's lips indicating her smile.

Rishi exclaimed wid joy. Smj aapk thik ho rahi ho...aaj aapne apna haath hilaya.
He den calls d doctor n explains her whole incident.doctor arrives n checks Indira.

Dr.- Mr.Rishi ye bohot hi badi khushkhabri hai. Aaj jis tarah se aapki wife ne movement show ki hai usse im sure ki bohot jald aapki wife coma se bahar aa jayengi.

Rishi- Kya sach dr. meri Indira ab thik ho jayegi...wo ab pehle wali Indira ho jayegi.

Dr.- Haan...mr.Rishi.aur sach kahoon to aaj jo hua hai wo ek chamatkaar se kam nahi hai.aapki wife ne jis tarah se inti jaldi improvement dikhai hai usse to yehi keh sakte hain ki ye ek miracle hai ya yun kahiye ki ye aap dono ka pyar hai jo har ladai se lad raha hai aur isme aapka hone wala bachcha aapke pyar ki taakat bana hai.

Rishi- Thanku dr. aaj aap nahi janti ki mai aaj kitna khush hoon. Thanku so much.

Dr.- aap mujhe thanks kyon keh rahe hain mr.Rishi. Ye sab to aapke pyar aur upar wale ki meher ki wajah se hai. 
Waise mai ek baat aur kehna chahungi ki jab aapki wife ko tumor tha to us waqt maine unke treatment ke liye abortion ka suggestion diya tha but I think I was wrong kyonki aaj shayad kahin na kahin aapka bachcha apni ma ko jeene ki prerna de raha hai. Aapke bachche ki wajah se hi aapki wife dheere dheere coma se bahar aa rahi hain.
Aap phikar mat kijiye Rishi aapki wife bohot jald thik ho jayengi.

Rishi- Thank you doctor.

Dr.- Mr.Rishi mai sonography test bhi kar deti hoon (and she examines d baby on sonography screen).


Rishi- (sees d screen and touch it as if feeling it) wid teary eyes he says to d baby- Thank you baby...aaj aapki wajah se mumma thik ho rahi hain. Papa aaj bohot khush hain.papa loves u so much.
He den turns towards Indira and cares her head and says- Smj ab aap jaldi se thik ho jaiye.

Dr.- Mr.Rishi aapka bachcha bhi bilkul healthy hai phikar karne ki jarurat nahi hai. Aur haan agar koi problem ho ya kuch bhi puchna ho to you can call us. Ab mai chalti hoon.

Rishi- Sure dr. and thanku so much once again.

Dr.- Aapko thanku kehne ki jaroorat nahi hai. Ek dr. hone ke naate ye mera farz hai. Ab mai chalti hoon mujhe dusre patients ko bhi dekhna hai.

Rishi- Ya sure dr. aaiye mai aapko bahar tak chod deta hoon.

Dr.- Its ok Mr.Rishi mai chali jaungi aur waise bhi is waqt aapko apni wife ke saath hona chahiye kyonki is time mein unhe aapki sabse jyada jarurat hai.

[Dr. leaves frm there and Rishi sits besides Indira and takes her hand in his n cares her]

(Time paased by and two weeks before the delievery date of Indira,she was admitted to the hospital so that no complications or problems related to her delievery occurs]

The time arrives,Indira delievered a baby girl.dr. congratulated Rishi and handed him his daughter. Rishi carefully takes her daughter in his arms and smilingly stares ate her and den softly kisses her forehead.

Rishi- Meri beti...meri nanhi pari and tears trickles down her eyes. As he took his daughter in his arms he smiles as if all his worries has vanished wid the arrival of his daughter. He pampers their daughter. & asks Dr. meri wife.

Dr.- Ghabrane ki baat nahi hai Mr.Rishi,she is absolutely fine and ur daughter is also healthy. Aap chahe to apni wife se mil sakte hain.

Rishi- Thanku dr.
[Dr. leaves from there and Rishi moves towards Indira who is lying on the hospital bed]
Smj...dekhiye na humari beti...bilkul aap par gai hai.ek baar to aankh kholiye.humari beti bilkul pari jaisi hai.

Rishi places the baby near Indira.as he puts d baby Indira moves her hands as if she wants to her little one in her arms.

Rishi- smj..haan koshish kijiye..ek baar aankh kholiye dekhiye humari beti.
(Rishi calls the dr. and the Dr.arrives)

Dr.- (checks Indira) Mr.Rishi hume aapki wife 1 week tak under observation mein rakhna hoga taaki hum aapki wife ko monitor kar sake and ghabrane ki koi baat nahi hai,jaldi hi aapki wife bilkul normal ho jayengi.

Rishi- (excitingly) sach mein dr. phir meri bolne lagenge,wo pehle jaisi ho jayengi.

Dr.- haan...bas ek hafte ki baat hai.

(after seven days,Rishi with his daughter arrives his home and do all the rituals for Indira's last journey)

In his room,
On one side Rishi's daughter need him and on the other side Indira's memories are surrounding him.Her sudden death made Rishi emotionally miserable.

Rishi becomes so quiet.He doesnt exchange a single words with anyone.His voice could be heard only when he talks with baby or made her sleep or quiet her.

Next Day:-
All the members of the family are pampering the little one and Rishi is jst sitting quietly in the memories of Indira. Just then everyone heards the knock at the door. Munna opens the door and shock to see Simmi Diwan standing at the door.

PS : ye update Seema di ka hain..lekin kisi vajahse wo nahi de payi isiliye maine diya hainπŸ˜ƒ so sara credit unkahi hain maine sirf idhar copy paste kiya hain πŸ˜†

Chapter 3 : pg no : 8
Edited by Ketaki19 - 10 years ago
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di bahot bahot emotional update hain πŸ˜­ πŸ˜­
Simmi???? πŸ˜²
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chalo bye di me jaa rahi hu sone gn8 πŸ€—
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Ketaki19

di bahot bahot emotional update hain😭😭

Simmi????😲

hehe...seriously mein.
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Posted: 10 years ago
ab kya jhoot bolungi isme?? sach me bahot emotional tha πŸ˜­ πŸ˜­
lekin Baby ka apne parents ke sath abhi se bonding mast hain πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ hopes so sab jaldi thik ho jaye..

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Originally posted by: Ketaki19

chalo bye di me jaa rahi hu sone gn8πŸ€—

bye gd nyt n swt drms. πŸ€— .
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Originally posted by: Ketaki19


ab kya jhoot bolungi isme?? sach me bahot emotional tha😭😭
lekin Baby ka apne parents ke sath abhi se bonding mast hainπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒhopes so sab jaldi thik ho jaye..

haan haan..thik hai.
Haan aakhir pyar ki nishani hai inshi ki to bonding to strong hogi na.let see kya hota haiπŸ˜†.