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...The Mind Games-An Ambitious Tale..chap 8 page 17 - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Rads awesome chapter.

A Murder n she want to know who did this.
Waiting for next chapter.
Waiting to see how much they are ambitious ๐Ÿ˜ณ


Meh๐Ÿค—
m glad u do๐Ÿ˜ณ

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Posted: 10 years ago
Res!
*unres*
Radsy!! Glad to see you writing again girlie. ;)
I missed your work. ๐Ÿค—
First of all, loved the preview. I love thriller and action romances. Especially the bad girl meets bad boy type. Huge fan of those types of stories so it is a delight to read for me!
Now, coming to the part,
Dan is the bad guy huh? Rule breaker, typical bad boy. He even left the FBI because he couldn't follow rules.
I respect that he's a guy with high principles and his own set of rules, he should definitely not bend down in the near future. I admire these kind of 'I-Don't-Give-A-Shit' characters so I don't want that to change about him.
Can't wait for the guy to get on the crime scene. Waiting to see him in business mode!
Coming to Rose, two completely different personalities she herself has. I'm excited to know what exactly she works as. 
These two characters are so similar, both rebels and both self-confident people.
I can't wait to read their clashes and how these two accept the other!
Hope this comment made sense. :)
Continue soon!
Love,
Ananya. :)
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Res!

*unres*
Radsy!! Glad to see you writing again girlie. ;)
oh I think I wrote a lot of stuff U didnt read will  send u links ๐Ÿ˜›
I missed your work. ๐Ÿค—
awww . .Ananya see m back๐Ÿค—
First of all, loved the preview. I love thriller and action romances. Especially the bad girl meets bad boy type. Huge fan of those types of stories so it is a delight to read for me!
hi-5 gal๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Now, coming to the part,
Dan is the bad guy huh? Rule breaker, typical bad boy. He even left the FBI because he couldn't follow rules.
yup. . u just cant bind Dan with a piece of crap๐Ÿ˜›
I respect that he's a guy with high principles and his own set of rules, he should definitely not bend down in the near future. I admire these kind of 'I-Don't-Give-A-Shit' characters so I don't want that to change about him.
nor do I plan to๐Ÿ˜‰
Can't wait for the guy to get on the crime scene. Waiting to see him in business mode!
oh u will surely get a 1st hand experience to that in the next part๐Ÿ˜‰
Coming to Rose, two completely different personalities she herself has. I'm excited to know what exactly she works as.
yes I personally I feel everyone has 2 personalities like a coin has 2 sides so yeah she's completely different at work front!!
These two characters are so similar, both rebels and both self-confident people.
I can't wait to read their clashes and how these two accept the other!
lol I do hope I justify them in the future๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Hope this comment made sense. :)
u brought a bright smile on my face girl do I have to say more๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Continue soon!
Ya I will dont worry๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Love,
Ananya. :)

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Ya, send the links. Ill try to finish them all by tomorrow. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Glad I could help. ;)
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Ya, send the links. Ill try to finish them all by tomorrow. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Glad I could help. ;)


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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey l like the concept two totally different individuals bt one thing z commom between them that is their dedication towards their work...
Waiting for the next chapter...
It wud be intrsting to see the equation between a media reporter nd a cop
Update soon...
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Hey l like the concept two totally different individuals bt one thing z commom between them that is their dedication towards their work...

Waiting for the next chapter...
It wud be intrsting to see the equation between a media reporter nd a cop
Update soon...


I m glad u liked it.  .will update soon๐Ÿค—
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Radsss !๐Ÿค—

Me likeyyy! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Hahah when I read the concept, it immediatly caught my attention. 
That's the kind of stories I really really like.
Whenever I saw such relationships between the hero & the heroin on TV (movie/soap) I was always like : "Awww...".
This kind of love-hate relationships, in thrillers, the two individuals being enemies but at the same time attracted to each other, knowing very well that they're both playing a game revolving around power and ambition but at the same time unable to deny what they feel for each other ... uuufff! *faints*
I don't know why but I can so imagine my Armaan and Riddhima in this one! 
Thumbs up for the 1st chapter, loving the hint of mystery in the story! Keep it up darlinggg! :*
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Radsy!! ๐Ÿค—
I'm liking how this has started.
The mysterious death of a top Hollywood actress, interesting!
This was short, Radsy. :/
Make the next one longer!! :O

Anyway, back to chapter 1.
I like it.
i really, really like it.
It opens with a bang, seedhe plunging one into the events.
And the two leads seem interesting too! :D
The rule-breaker guy and the sassy lady! 
Niice! ;)

Update soon, okay? :)
Sorry for the late reply!

Love always,
Mugs.


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Radsss !๐Ÿค—

Ishta๐Ÿค—
Me likeyyy! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
I m sooo glad u do

Hahah when I read the concept, it immediatly caught my attention. 
That's the kind of stories I really really like.
Whenever I saw such relationships between the hero & the heroin on TV (movie/soap) I was always like : "Awww...".
hi5 gal๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜‰
This kind of love-hate relationships, in thrillers, the two individuals being enemies but at the same time attracted to each other, knowing very well that they're both playing a game revolving around power and ambition but at the same time unable to deny what they feel for each other ... uuufff! *faints*
just wait and watch!! its gonna be one hell of a roller coaster ride I promise๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜‰
I don't know why but I can so imagine my Armaan and Riddhima in this one!
errr. .no comments...
Thumbs up for the 1st chapter, loving the hint of mystery in the story! Keep it up darlinggg! :*
thank u thank u๐Ÿค— โค๏ธ