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Posted: 10 years ago
Well i jst cnt for the next chapter n hw they gonna to start their cnvo... They r totally diff m jst imagin r they goin to start wid a fight or wat?? Update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: yoyolo

Loving it, Radsyyy ! πŸ€—
IshtaπŸ€—

Really nicely written and my most favourite part would be ... the "Dark Prince".
are u serious?? I was very apprehensive the name sounds a bit Cliche doesnt it?
Ohhh, how I LOVE that ! And I love you for finding this amazing name idea ! β€οΈ
Really excited to read the next part !
will update soonπŸ˜ƒ
And especially to discover some more about the Dark Prince... hahahah πŸ˜ˆ
lol...so here's another person I meet who has a thing for Bad guys like me n kiddoπŸ˜ˆπŸ˜›
Much love :*

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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: SAYAMA

Well i jst cnt for the next chapter n hw they gonna to start their cnvo... They r totally diff m jst imagin r they goin to start wid a fight or wat?? Update soon...


ummm...well u never know what might happen next...πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›
stay tuned for more
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Posted: 10 years ago
OMG this was such a rush
i was almost panting lolz :P
"The dark prince" is this dan we r talking about here ?
aww rose so poor , she is gonna be sitting with the one she bashed about
hahha omg this is soo gonna be fun <33
radsy the way u have written the whole current going incident amazing
loved it
amazing writing radsy
bas abhi waiting for next chappy 
i soo wanna knw their convo ;)
radsy keep it up !!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: -Razzy-

OMG this was such a rush

i was almost panting lolz :P
PANTING???  Rose ke saath tu bhi bhaag rahi thi kya?πŸ˜›πŸ˜›
"The dark prince" is this dan we r talking about here ?
u never know it cud be anyoneπŸ˜‰πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
aww rose so poor , she is gonna be sitting with the one she bashed about
hahha omg this is soo gonna be fun <33
oh well ...fun or not I m not so sure but ya it'll help in future development of their charactersπŸ˜›
radsy the way u have written the whole current going incident amazing
loved it
I m sooo glad u doπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
amazing writing radsy
bas abhi waiting for next chappy 
i soo wanna knw their convo ;)
radsy keep it up !!!
will update soon
πŸ˜ƒ

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Posted: 10 years ago
Its great Radsy...
I'm loving every bit of this FF...
The Dark guy huh.., wonder who he is...???
Continue soon..😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ah. I'm late again.
Sorry.
I tend to get caught up in stuff a hell lot these days.
*sighs*

Oh well.
Radsy, that was short! :/
Lambe updates dooo!! :O
But it's okay, coz that was one awesome update. :D
So our leads meet, huh? ;)
And they've already had a rocky start? 
I can't wait to see these two open their mouths and start arguing! :P :D
Isliye update quick! :D

Oh, and "The Dark Prince".. oooh, someone had a big time grudge huh?
This is getting interesting! ;)

Great going ab tak Radsy! <3
Love,
Mugs.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: sajan_kisha

Its great Radsy...

I'm loving every bit of this FF...
The Dark guy huh.., wonder who he is...???
Continue soon..😊


I m so glad u liked it Ammu..will update soonπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: NonComposMentis

Ah. I'm late again.

Sorry.
I tend to get caught up in stuff a hell lot these days.
*sighs*
no problem kiddoπŸ˜ƒ

Oh well.
Radsy, that was short! :/
and for a reasonπŸ˜‰
Lambe updates dooo!! :O
next update pakkaπŸ˜›
But it's okay, coz that was one awesome update. :D
really??? yaaayπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
So our leads meet, huh? ;)
And they've already had a rocky start? 
I can't wait to see these two open their mouths and start arguing! :P :D
Isliye update quick! :D
lol...I had a poll n most ppl I asked wanted them to meet...arguing?? in the next part itself?? lets see what I have instore for u allπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰

Oh, and "The Dark Prince".. oooh, someone had a big time grudge huh?
This is getting interesting! ;)
once a bad guy lover...always a BAD guy loverπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

Great going ab tak Radsy! <3
Love,
Mugs.

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Posted: 10 years ago
Didu!! Loved both the chapters...
Amazing!!
Do continue soon...
Sorry for late comment... My lappy went for servicing and has come just a few hours back...
I couldn't even chat with u after my exams... BTW they were awesome...
Love you didu... Miss you...
If u're online lets chat on whatsapp ;)