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Posted: 10 years ago
 PART 2:
Next mornong(rakhi day)
mansi is on virat's room
mansi- chachu jaldi se ready ho jao niche sab wait kar rhe hai
virat did not respond
masi- chachu aap sun rhe ho na
again did not say anything
mansi goes near him and wave her hand in front of his eyes
mansi- chachu aapne suna maine kya bola
virat- aap kuch bol rhe the
mansi- kuch  nhi chachu, waise mujhe pta hai app kya soch rhe the
virat - kya?
mansi- app meri masi ke bare soch rhe the na
virat- aapko kaise pta?
mansi- pta hai
virat- pta hai mansi aapki masi na bilkul aapke jaisi thi, cute , chulbuli aur aapke jaise wo bhi mjhe pareshaan karti thi
mansi(in mind) - ye phir suru ho gye
mansi- chachu bas karo pta hai  yeh baat me 50 times sun chuki ho
virat- sorry
mansi- waise chachu aap jab bhi aise bolte ho na bilkul monkey lagte ho
virat- are you teasing me
mansi- yes
virat- this not fair mansi
mansi- aap hi to bolte ho na ki everything is fair in love and war(laughs)
suddenly she ran away and virat start chasing her
 AT Downstair
choudhary arrive on vadhera house
(i am not writing talk between families)
dabbu- jeevika di jaldi karo  me kab se wait kar hu
mansi- are itni bhi jaldi kya hai mama wait karo achha hota hai
everyone laughs
jeevika- bas karo mansi bahut ho gya
jeevika ties rakhi on dabbu's hand suddenly
dabbu- jeevika di  ye dusri rakhi kis ke liye hai
jeevika - dabbu ye na mannu ke liye hai
dabbu- aap tension mat lo jeevika di manvi di jahan bhi hogi bahut khush hogi aur wo bhi aapko bahut miss kar rhi hogi
(but where is manvi)
SCENE SHIFTS
At mumbai:
 a cute little girl  is runnig taking a rakhi on her hand and calling masi . a lady wearing western outfits came downstairs(you can imagine her from leg to head)
priya- masi where is paras
manvi-he is sleeping
priya- kya abhi tak so rha hai
manvi- ha
priya- masi uske bolo wo jaldi aaye see(showing her rakhi)
uske liye me kya layi hu
manvi -rakhi use ye pasand nhi hai na
priya- masi please
manvi- ok i am going 
IN THE BEDRROM
manvi- paras my baby now just get up see ots 9 am
paras a cute little boy of 5 years just like his father is ignoring her.
paras-(in a lazy maner) mamma its only 9 am
manvi- no paras  get up aaj festival hai
paras- mamma mujhe pta aapse priya ne bola ha na
manvi- nhi
paras- please aapko pta hai na mujhe ye sab pasand nhi hai
manvi(laughing)- ok i will tell her now just get up
manvi about to go
paras - mamma 
manvi- ha
paras- i love you
manvi- i love you too paras and kiss on his cheek
paras-please yeh mat kiya karo mujhe pasand nhi hai (rubbinh his hand on his cheek)
manvi- ok and then went
it has 6 years since manvi was living in mumbai. she is a wedding planner here and aditi is her friend but she her as her sister. priya is aditi daughter to whom paras like very much.
manvi is on her room looking at virat's photo
manvi- i love you please ho sake to mujhe maaf kar dena ki mene tumsee itni badi baat chupayi.
pta hai virat paras tumhari    too copy hai  wo mujhe kabhi udas nhi dekh sakta. miss you ðŸ˜­
scene shifts to hall
all went for rakhi celebration
paras is runing and priya is chasing him for tieing rakhi on his hand
manvi and aditi is laughing. all the neighbours cute girls came and they tied rakhi on paras's hand
ON MANVI'S ROOM
manvi has rakhi on her one hand and jeevika's photo on other hand .
manvi- di i miss you...
 and she put her 6th rakhi on a box
meanwhile jeevika is also doing same on chandigarh
paras is watching all this he can't bear his mamaa tears .he goes close to her nd stratch his hand on front of her
manvi- yeh kya hai paras
paras- mene dekha ki aap apni sister ko miss kar rhe the isiliye aap meri hand par rakhi ban do
manvi- paras mein aapke hand par kaise 
paras- mamma jis tarah  badi maa apki raksha karti thi na usi tarah mein bhi aapse promise karta hu mein hames aapki raksha karuga aur use maruga jo meri mamma ke ankho me aasu lekar aayega
tears came out from manvi's eyes
paras- mamma aap to phir se rone lge
manvi- ye aapki wajah se aaye hai paras
paras- oh! tab to mujhe aapne aap to hi marna padega
manvi- nhi its ok , but tell me kya hua priya ne aapko..
(paras cut her)
paras- mamma please you know na i don't like it phir bhi
manvi-  are mein to mazak kar rhi thi
paras- please na mamma you know na that  i like her
manvi laughs and  they both share a good moment
precap- past relevation 
sorry guys can't able to post past on this part but i will  update it in next part
NOTE;
my hindi is not so good so i just  wrote some in english 

tell me howz was it and sorry for any mistake











Edited by MeenalKhare99 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wowww that was fab...
Ye manvi toh junior manvi h... I mean the way she fights with virat 😆
You should continue it v asap yr...
I cant wait to know more...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: naina927

Wowww that was fab...
Ye manvi toh junior manvi h... I mean the way she fights with virat 😆
You should continue it v asap yr...
I cant wait to know more...

thanks i am updating it soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: dairymilk12

intresting do pm me the link when u update 

send me a buddy request please
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Posted: 10 years ago
aww the kids are soo cute mansi ofcoz cute nd nautanki nd paras the best son mumma ki raksha karne wala 😃
the mother son moment was sweet nd priya nd paras relation is cute ...
waiting for the next update 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update mansi ,paras and priya
are cute waiting what happen in past
and how they 2 will become one
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
interesting update plz plz update soon plz plz uodate soon can't wait to know what actually happened in their past
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Posted: 10 years ago
Like story nyc update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update
Mansi s just like manvi who use 2 irritate virat
Manvi's nd paras moment whr he told he wl protect hr ws so nice
3 kiddos r so cute
Wait'g 4 d past reveletion 
Do cont soon 
Thnx 4 pm