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VIRMAN: KISMAT KA KHEL (completed) - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
yippe I was the first one to update nd plz plz plz update lonnng update
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update to short and she left the for her di
happiness purpose update soon and long one
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update
liked it
very short update
hate swamini
plz cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
hy guys sorry for short updating 
PART 3 COMPLETED:
manvi left home and she left a letter  for everyone and told them not to find her 
viren felt sorry for his behaviour. jeevika went to  her room crying viren followed her
viren- jeevika please mat ro
jeevika- kyon virenji mannu ne itna bada kaam kiya mein hasu kya
viren- nhi jeevika mene manvi ko galat samjha
jeevika- kya matlab
viren- jeevika manvi ne tumse sach kaha tha ki  mein ek ladki se sath tha
jeevika- aapne  mujse jhoot bola virenji
viren- haa jeevika lekin mene tumhe cheat nhi kiya hai
jis ladki ke sath manvi ne nujhe dekha tha wo meri new assistant thi aur uske pati se saath wo divorce chahti thi mein yahi bol rha tha
jeevika- virenji  i am sorry meine aapko gaat samjha
viren- nhi jeevika mujhe tumhe yeh baat kehna chahiye tha
finally they end their fight
jeevika- lekin manvi to chali na 
viren- jeevika mujjhe bhi bura lag rah hai
but i know wo jaha bhi hogi khush hogi
after some days 
virat return home vanshika welcome him with aarti and everyone praises him
he is excited to meet manvi he ask viren
virat- bhai where is manvi
viren did not say anything 
virat- mujhe pta hai aap logo se yeh sab manvi ne kaha na
he goes upstair and started to call manvi 
he did not find manvi anywhere but he found a letter on his table he opened it
dear virat, 
mein janti hu ki tum mujhse naraz hoge lekin virat please mujhe galat mat samjhna neine jo kuch bhi kiya di aur jiju ke liye kiya 
virat tum kehte the na ki di jiju ne hamahre liye bahut kiya now ots our turn to do something for them . partner please mera support karna  .
(virat started to cry)
partner please rona mat tum rote hue bahut chep lagte ho pta hai (he smiled) that is like my partner please virat isitarah se rehna aur mujhe mat search karna
miss you virat...
your's manvi
virat fuming in anger goes downstair and ask virika what happened 
viren tell him all the thing virat is happy that manvi has done such a big sacrifice for her sister and he supported her.
after 1 month jeevika delivers a girl baby whose name was similar as mansi
virat who is alone without manvi has found her manvi in mansi
AT MUMBAI:
manvi walking on road helpless  and she faint aditi help her and she took her to hospital
at hospital
manvi- kya hua dr is everything ok
dr- congo manvi you are pregnant
manvi felt suprised about this
aditi took her to her room there she call virat to tell this but he is not receiving so she call on home
swamini receive phone
aditi- hello is the vadhera house
swamini- haa 
aditi- may i talk to mr virat, please tell him that his is calling him
swamini told lie to her
swamini- actually virat aur baki log uski aur maya ki shadi me gye hai
aditi told this to manvi 
manvi can not believe that virat cheated her she then decided that she will grown her baby alone 
manvi with the help of aditi got the work as wedding planner  in her company
manvi (to her baby)- baby mein janti ki mein galat kar rhi hu but ab mein maya aur virat ke beech mein nhi aaugi. aap ke liye aapki mamaa hi kafi hai
after 9 months she deliver a baby boy who is similar to virat she name him paras
manvi started her new life with paras
PRECAP: something new is going to happen in story
paras and virat first meeting
Edited by MeenalKhare99 - 10 years ago
pink1 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update she want to share good news
with him but evil sb again create Mu btwn
them update soon
waiting how they both will meet


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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update
loved it
felt bad for virat and maanvi
nice precap
plz cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
excited for d nxt update


update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
really nice update I loved it plz plz plz plz update next prt soon waiting for paras nd virat's meeting nd just hate that btch swmmi can't wait for virat nd virika's meeting With manvi
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Posted: 10 years ago
fabulous updates ...the reason behind separation was sumthing new and good one too ...
and that letter wqs emotional nd sweet too how she made him smile ...
and sb played well the cunning lady ...
exciting for the father son meeting and revelations ...update aooon
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update pls continue soon and pm me